Naam Mitti Mein Milate Hai__________ {Angel}

by angel4u on May 18, 2009, 04:30:25 PM
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Sikhate Hai Jo Dusron Ko Sabak Lihaazon Ka,
Bhool Jate Hai Wo Matlab Insaaniyaton Ka,

Ghumte Rehte Hai Chehre Pe Chehra Lagaye Hue,
Kaun Samjhayein Inhe Maayna Sharafaton Ka,

Khuda Ka Matlab Bhi Na Jaante Hai Jo Jaahil,
Waasta Dene Chale Wo Nasamajh Bas Khudayi Ka,

Masjidon Mein Jaate Hai Apne Gunaahon Ki Maafi Maangne,
Kaun Maaf Karega Gunaah Unke Dilon Ko Rula Jaane Ka,

Mauka Dhundte Rehte Hai Dikhane Jhuthi Shaan,
Lete Hai Panaah Kuch Bematlab Ke Muddon Ka,

Sila Apni Harkaton Ka Isi Jahan Mein Maujood Hai,
Kya Waasta Denge Insaanon Ko Wo Jaahil Jannaton Ka,

Bante Hai Bhale Bahut Naqaab Pehne Mehfilon Mein,
Kinaara Kahan Hoga Sharmsaaron Ki Behudgiyon Ka,

Bane Phirte Hai Awwal Darje Ke Shayar Yahan Kuch Log,
Naam Mitti Mein Milate Hai Yehi Log Haseen Mehfilon Ka...
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«Reply #1 on: May 18, 2009, 04:33:44 PM »
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Hmm, Bohat Achcha Likha Hai, Lekin Ye Tanz Kuch Samjha Nahi, Great Job JI,.

BOhat Achche,.
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«Reply #2 on: May 18, 2009, 04:38:17 PM »
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Very Nice Angel Ji.
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«Reply #3 on: May 18, 2009, 04:39:59 PM »
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Achha sach mein samajh mein nahi aaya tumhe? tongue3
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«Reply #4 on: May 18, 2009, 04:40:15 PM »
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Thank u so much Sam Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: May 18, 2009, 06:28:54 PM »
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Quote from: {Angel} on May 18, 2009, 04:30:25 PM
Sikhate Hai Jo Dusron Ko Sabak Lihaazon Ka,
Bhool Jate Hai Wo Matlab Insaaniyaton Ka,

Ghumte Rehte Hai Chehre Pe Chehra Lagaye Hue,
Kaun Samjhayein Inhe Maayna Sharafaton Ka,

Khuda Ka Matlab Bhi Na Jaante Hai Jo Jaahil,
Waasta Dene Chale Wo Nasamajh Bas Khudayi Ka,

Masjidon Mein Jaate Hai Apne Gunaahon Ki Maafi Maangne,
Kaun Maaf Karega Gunaah Unke Dilon Ko Rula Jaane Ka,

Mauka Dhundte Rehte Hai Dikhane Jhuthi Shaan,
Lete Hai Panaah Kuch Bematlab Ke Muddon Ka,

Sila Apni Harkaton Ka Isi Jahan Mein Maujood Hai,
Kya Waasta Denge Insaanon Ko Wo Jaahil Jannaton Ka,

Bante Hai Bhale Bahut Naqaab Pehne Mehfilon Mein,
Kinaara Kahan Hoga Sharmsaaron Ki Behudgiyon Ka,

Bane Phirte Hai Awwal Darje Ke Shayar Yahan Kuch Log,
Naam Mitti Mein Milate Hai Yehi Log Haseen Mehfilon Ka...


BAHAUT ACHCHEY....A......AAPNEY TO MERI AANKH KHOL DI
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«Reply #6 on: May 18, 2009, 07:42:04 PM »
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Nice one Angel di...Applause
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«Reply #7 on: May 18, 2009, 07:46:58 PM »
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Quote from: {Angel} on May 18, 2009, 04:30:25 PM
Sikhate Hai Jo Dusron Ko Sabak Lihaazon Ka,
Bhool Jate Hai Wo Matlab Insaaniyaton Ka,

Ghumte Rehte Hai Chehre Pe Chehra Lagaye Hue,
Kaun Samjhayein Inhe Maayna Sharafaton Ka,

Khuda Ka Matlab Bhi Na Jaante Hai Jo Jaahil,
Waasta Dene Chale Wo Nasamajh Bas Khudayi Ka,

Masjidon Mein Jaate Hai Apne Gunaahon Ki Maafi Maangne,
Kaun Maaf Karega Gunaah Unke Dilon Ko Rula Jaane Ka,

Mauka Dhundte Rehte Hai Dikhane Jhuthi Shaan,
Lete Hai Panaah Kuch Bematlab Ke Muddon Ka,

Sila Apni Harkaton Ka Isi Jahan Mein Maujood Hai,
Kya Waasta Denge Insaanon Ko Wo Jaahil Jannaton Ka,

Bante Hai Bhale Bahut Naqaab Pehne Mehfilon Mein,
Kinaara Kahan Hoga Sharmsaaron Ki Behudgiyon Ka,

Bane Phirte Hai Awwal Darje Ke Shayar Yahan Kuch Log,
Naam Mitti Mein Milate Hai Yehi Log Haseen Mehfilon Ka...


Angel Bahut Hi Khooooob Likha hai dear... Greattttttttt.. Applause


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«Reply #8 on: May 19, 2009, 12:07:56 AM »
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Quote from: {Angel} on May 18, 2009, 04:30:25 PM
Sikhate Hai Jo Dusron Ko Sabak Lihaazon Ka,
Bhool Jate Hai Wo Matlab Insaaniyaton Ka,

Ghumte Rehte Hai Chehre Pe Chehra Lagaye Hue,
Kaun Samjhayein Inhe Maayna Sharafaton Ka,

Khuda Ka Matlab Bhi Na Jaante Hai Jo Jaahil,
Waasta Dene Chale Wo Nasamajh Bas Khudayi Ka,

Masjidon Mein Jaate Hai Apne Gunaahon Ki Maafi Maangne,
Kaun Maaf Karega Gunaah Unke Dilon Ko Rula Jaane Ka,

Mauka Dhundte Rehte Hai Dikhane Jhuthi Shaan,
Lete Hai Panaah Kuch Bematlab Ke Muddon Ka,

Sila Apni Harkaton Ka Isi Jahan Mein Maujood Hai,
Kya Waasta Denge Insaanon Ko Wo Jaahil Jannaton Ka,

Bante Hai Bhale Bahut Naqaab Pehne Mehfilon Mein,
Kinaara Kahan Hoga Sharmsaaron Ki Behudgiyon Ka,

Bane Phirte Hai Awwal Darje Ke Shayar Yahan Kuch Log,
Naam Mitti Mein Milate Hai Yehi Log Haseen Mehfilon Ka...

BAHUT ACCHE ANGEL...
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«Reply #9 on: May 19, 2009, 01:34:56 AM »
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Waah waah Angel Ji
SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #10 on: May 19, 2009, 02:42:53 AM »
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Quote from: {Angel} on May 18, 2009, 04:30:25 PM
Sikhate Hai Jo Dusron Ko Sabak Lihaazon Ka,
Bhool Jate Hai Wo Matlab Insaaniyaton Ka,

Ghumte Rehte Hai Chehre Pe Chehra Lagaye Hue,
Kaun Samjhayein Inhe Maayna Sharafaton Ka,

Khuda Ka Matlab Bhi Na Jaante Hai Jo Jaahil,
Waasta Dene Chale Wo Nasamajh Bas Khudayi Ka,

Masjidon Mein Jaate Hai Apne Gunaahon Ki Maafi Maangne,
Kaun Maaf Karega Gunaah Unke Dilon Ko Rula Jaane Ka,

Mauka Dhundte Rehte Hai Dikhane Jhuthi Shaan,
Lete Hai Panaah Kuch Bematlab Ke Muddon Ka,

Sila Apni Harkaton Ka Isi Jahan Mein Maujood Hai,
Kya Waasta Denge Insaanon Ko Wo Jaahil Jannaton Ka,

Bante Hai Bhale Bahut Naqaab Pehne Mehfilon Mein,
Kinaara Kahan Hoga Sharmsaaron Ki Behudgiyon Ka,

Bane Phirte Hai Awwal Darje Ke Shayar Yahan Kuch Log,
Naam Mitti Mein Milate Hai Yehi Log Haseen Mehfilon Ka...

Dear Angel...

Kuch line toh bahut hi accha likha hai aapne. Jo dunia mein hota hai vo aapne bahut acche tarike se bayan kiya hai.

mujhe bahut pasand aaya dear esp those lines quoted below .


Ghumte Rehte Hai Chehre Pe Chehra Lagaye Hue,
Kaun Samjhayein Inhe Maayna Sharafaton Ka,


Bante Hai Bhale Bahut Naqaab Pehne Mehfilon Mein,
Kinaara Kahan Hoga Sharmsaaron Ki Behudgiyon Ka,


 Applause Applause Applause Kya kahu alfaz nahi.

You deserve clap yaar... Overall bahut umda likha hai aapne.
Toda Harsh bi laga... But beautiful creation dear.... Pehli bar Tanz mein likha hai aapne aur vo b damake daar..... shabhash  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #11 on: May 19, 2009, 07:08:58 AM »
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Yo baby. Its simply fantastic .Well expressed..  Clapping Smiley Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #12 on: May 19, 2009, 05:17:51 PM »
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Quote from: dead heart on May 18, 2009, 07:42:04 PM
Nice one Angel di...Applause

Thanks Rahim
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«Reply #13 on: May 19, 2009, 05:18:27 PM »
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Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on May 18, 2009, 06:28:54 PM

BAHAUT ACHCHEY....A......AAPNEY TO MERI AANKH KHOL DI

Hmmm. chalo achhi baat hai..
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«Reply #14 on: May 19, 2009, 05:19:01 PM »
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Quote from: pandit on May 19, 2009, 12:07:56 AM
BAHUT ACCHE ANGEL...

Thank you sooo much Usual Smile
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