Naari ka Jeevan

by Pooja on July 20, 2007, 08:44:52 PM
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«Reply #15 on: May 05, 2008, 04:16:33 PM »
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bahoot bahoot shukaria Syednaami JI!!!! Bahoot dinobaad kisi ne in rachnao ki taraf rukh kiya hai!! Koshish hogi kuch aor bhi yaha likh saku!!
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«Reply #16 on: May 05, 2008, 04:22:53 PM »
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Hum prateeksha karenge, Anek dhanyavaad.
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«Reply #17 on: May 05, 2008, 05:19:18 PM »
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Naari ke jeevan ko jitna uttam, utna hi khokhla paaya hai
De kar sabko jeevan, khud ko kahin ka nahi paaya hai

manti rahti hai, MA-baap ki, apni ichao ko her baar dabaya hai
Bhai ke khushi ki khatir, her baar sir ko jhukaya hai

Uthi doli, pahunchi sasuraal, her ek rishte ka maan, nibhaya hai
Kahin boli, kahin suni, sukh-dukh ke sangarsh main jeevan bitaya hai

Pati ko maana serveshwar, her tarah ka vishwaas man mai sajaya hai
Ek hi pal main, wo ho gaya kisi ka, kin karmo ka phal yah samne ayya hai

Jhunjhe kabhi bhawanao se to jhunjhe kabhi halaato se
Bacho ki mithi boli main hi, kuch palo ka sakoon paaya hai

Dunia ki ankhon mai dekhon, kaise vasna ka rang utar ayya hai
Jaan akeli ek naari ko, her ek ne apna apna vaar chalaya hai

Lade dunia se, paale bache, Nokari per baar baar ayya saya hai
Baith akeli kabhi ro de, kabhi shabdo se man behlaya hai

Bachain bhi ho jaaye magan apni apni dunia main ek din
Kar mehanat sari zindagi, Hath na naari ke kuch ayya hai

Naari ke jeevan ko jitna uttam, utna hi khokhla paaya hai
De kar sabko jeevan, khud ko kahin ka nahi usne paaya hai!!!
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«Reply #18 on: May 05, 2008, 06:26:07 PM »
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Wonderful, this is what straight from the heart. What a purity in thoughts and pesentation. Bravo!!
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«Reply #19 on: May 05, 2008, 06:31:23 PM »
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Tahe dil se shukaria Syednaami ji!!!
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«Reply #20 on: May 05, 2008, 06:38:15 PM »
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Bohat hi khoob likha hai pooja maine doh pages padhi hai
sach pe bohat ki acha likha hai aapne g888 Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #21 on: May 05, 2008, 07:02:11 PM »
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Aap ne shukriya ka kasht kar humen sammaanit kia,
Iss kaarunya maye vayavahaar par haardik badhai, aap ki kavita aur bhi utpaadak ho iss ke liye shubh kaamnaayen.
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«Reply #22 on: May 05, 2008, 07:10:48 PM »
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thanks Honey... Ab apko kaya kahu Sami ji, wapis apka jawab samjhna kathin ho jayega!!!
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«Reply #23 on: May 05, 2008, 07:12:03 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on May 05, 2008, 05:19:18 PM
Naari ke jeevan ko jitna uttam, utna hi khokhla paaya hai
De kar sabko jeevan, khud ko kahin ka nahi paaya hai

manti rahti hai, MA-baap ki, apni ichao ko her baar dabaya hai
Bhai ke khushi ki khatir, her baar sir ko jhukaya hai

Uthi doli, pahunchi sasuraal, her ek rishte ka maan, nibhaya hai
Kahin boli, kahin suni, sukh-dukh ke sangarsh main jeevan bitaya hai

Pati ko maana serveshwar, her tarah ka vishwaas man mai sajaya hai
Ek hi pal main, wo ho gaya kisi ka, kin karmo ka phal yah samne ayya hai

Jhunjhe kabhi bhawanao se to jhunjhe kabhi halaato se
Bacho ki mithi boli main hi, kuch palo ka sakoon paaya hai

Dunia ki ankhon mai dekhon, kaise vasna ka rang utar ayya hai
Jaan akeli ek naari ko, her ek ne apna apna vaar chalaya hai

Lade dunia se, paale bache, Nokari per baar baar ayya saya hai
Baith akeli kabhi ro de, kabhi shabdo se man behlaya hai

Bachain bhi ho jaaye magan apni apni dunia main ek din
Kar mehanat sari zindagi, Hath na naari ke kuch ayya hai

Naari ke jeevan ko jitna uttam, utna hi khokhla paaya hai
De kar sabko jeevan, khud ko kahin ka nahi usne paaya hai!!!

Nice lines pooja ji...........
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«Reply #24 on: May 05, 2008, 07:13:42 PM »
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shukaria Pandit ji!!
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«Reply #25 on: May 05, 2008, 07:17:13 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on May 05, 2008, 07:13:42 PM
shukaria Pandit ji!!
welcome pooja ji.......
but waakai bahut hi badiya likha hai
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«Reply #26 on: May 05, 2008, 07:36:10 PM »
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Okay ...  sad11  sad5 crybaby2  sad7
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«Reply #27 on: May 05, 2008, 07:51:33 PM »
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Quote from: syednaami on May 05, 2008, 07:36:10 PM
Okay ...  sad11  sad5 crybaby2  sad7

apka yah msg apke avtaar ko match nahi karta.. You know, what I mean !!  happy3 Giggle
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«Reply #28 on: May 05, 2008, 08:05:51 PM »
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Teinku jee, i know what do you mean to say.  tongue3 happy3 icon_salut hello sunny
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«Reply #29 on: May 06, 2008, 01:42:58 PM »
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hummmm... abhi tak kuch nahi likha?
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