Naari ka Jeevan

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«Reply #30 on: May 10, 2008, 02:57:15 AM »
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Dil Apsurdaa hota hai
Aankhein poor nam hoti hai

Teri payal baje bazar mein toh
Nari ka jeevan narag sa lagta hai tearyeyed
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Pooja
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«Reply #31 on: May 30, 2008, 08:14:51 PM »
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nice lines Roja!!
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«Reply #32 on: May 30, 2008, 10:32:11 PM »
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Naari ka jeevan bhi hai jaise abhinandan, -
Jaisa rishta ho waise khanke unske kangan, -
Kabhi roti qismat par neer baha niranjan, -
Aur kabhi sataate usko jagat ke duryodhan. -

Girte padte maamta ka mulya hua nirlekhan, -
Janani jane praja aur tyage apna  prayojan, -
Jo jane so bane koi sevak to koi uska dushman, -
Dukhat jeevan bitaye bachon se karti sada nivedan. -

Nari ka jeevan kabhi sahaaya to kabhi virodhan, -
Karde ashaant sabko jab banjaye woh bairan, -
Kisise rakhe na sambandh tod de saare bandhan, -
Leke rahe badla to bujhe uske pratishod ki agan. -


(Syed Naami)

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Badi mushkil se jawab likha jiska aapko intazaar tha....
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«Reply #33 on: June 02, 2008, 03:02:29 PM »
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Sami apki kavita kai baar pardi... shabdo ka acha upyog kiya hai apne.. Nari ke baare main apne bahoot ache shabdo ke sath bataya hai ki wo kaise hoti hai.. Acha laga pard kar.. good creation!!
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«Reply #34 on: June 02, 2008, 03:22:25 PM »
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Shukriya jo aapne hamare rachna ki saraahna ki, Naari ke baare men aurat hi khara likh sakti hai, maine koshish ki baqi aap log bahtar jaane...

Buhat Buhat dhanyavaad Pooja jee
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«Reply #35 on: June 04, 2008, 12:02:59 PM »
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bahoot zabrdast charcha chal rahi hai yahan to pooja ji...  syednaami ji bahoot achcha laga aapaki kavitayen pad-kar, aur aapke vishay me hi kuch alag sandhrbhon me pesh hai.............

aansoo ki ek buend si hoti hai beatiya
sparsh khurdra ho to roti hai beatiya
roshan karega beta to bus ek kul ko ,
do do kul ki laaz nibhati hai baetiya
koi nahi hai dosto ek dusre se kam,
hira hai ager beta to moti hai beatiya
kantoo ki raha par yeh khud hi chalti rahengi ,
aooro ke liye to phool hi boti hai beatiya
vidhi ka vidhan hai yeh duniya ki rashm hai,
mutthi mai bhari neer si hoti hai beatiya ......................
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«Reply #36 on: June 04, 2008, 03:10:01 PM »
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bahoot khoob Bekrar ji. A very good sharing!!!!
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«Reply #37 on: June 04, 2008, 03:26:25 PM »
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Quote from: bekarar on June 04, 2008, 12:02:59 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahoot zabrdast charcha chal rahi hai yahan to pooja ji...  syednaami ji bahoot achcha laga aapaki kavitayen pad-kar, aur aapke vishay me hi kuch alag sandhrbhon me pesh hai.............

aansoo ki ek buend si hoti hai beatiya
sparsh khurdra ho to roti hai beatiya
roshan karega beta to bus ek kul ko ,
do do kul ki laaz nibhati hai baetiya
koi nahi hai dosto ek dusre se kam,
hira hai ager beta to moti hai beatiya
kantoo ki raha par yeh khud hi chalti rahengi ,
aooro ke liye to phool hi boti hai beatiya
vidhi ka vidhan hai yeh duniya ki rashm hai,
mutthi mai bhari neer si hoti hai beatiya ......................
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Bahut accha Posting ki hai aapne Bekarar jee  Applause

vidhi ka vidhan hai yeh duniya hai beatiya
mutthi mai bhari neer si hoti hai beatiya

bahut khoob  Applause[/b]
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«Reply #38 on: June 04, 2008, 03:32:13 PM »
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Quote from: syednaami on May 30, 2008, 10:32:11 PM
Naari ka jeevan bhi hai jaise abhinandan, -
Jaisa rishta ho waise khanke unske kangan, -
Kabhi roti qismat par neer baha niranjan, -
Aur kabhi sataate usko jagat ke duryodhan. -

Girte padte maamta ka mulya hua nirlekhan, -
Janani jane praja aur tyage apna  prayojan, -
Jo jane so bane koi sevak to koi uska dushman, -
Dukhat jeevan bitaye bachon se karti sada nivedan. -

Nari ka jeevan kabhi sahaaya to kabhi virodhan, -
Karde ashaant sabko jab banjaye woh bairan, -
Kisise rakhe na sambandh tod de saare bandhan, -
Leke rahe badla to bujhe uske pratishod ki agan. -


(Syed Naami)

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Badi mushkil se jawab likha jiska aapko intazaar tha....



Bohat khoob Syed ji bohat hi umda likha aapne naari ka jeevan par.. Clapping Smiley



Quote from: bekarar on June 04, 2008, 12:02:59 PM
 

aansoo ki ek buend si hoti hai beatiya
sparsh khurdra ho to roti hai beatiya
roshan karega beta to bus ek kul ko ,
do do kul ki laaz nibhati hai baetiya
koi nahi hai dosto ek dusre se kam,
hira hai ager beta to moti hai beatiya
kantoo ki raha par yeh khud hi chalti rahengi ,
aooro ke liye to phool hi boti hai beatiya
vidhi ka vidhan hai yeh duniya ki rashm hai,
mutthi mai bhari neer si hoti hai beatiya ......................
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bekarar ji very nice sharing bohat khoob likha hai... Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #39 on: June 04, 2008, 07:56:06 PM »
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Quote from: bekarar on June 04, 2008, 12:02:59 PM
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bahoot zabrdast charcha chal rahi hai yahan to pooja ji...  syednaami ji bahoot achcha laga aapaki kavitayen pad-kar, aur aapke vishay me hi kuch alag sandhrbhon me pesh hai.............


Aap ka buhat Shukriya Bekarar bhaya jo ham logon ki rachnaon ke uttar men pyari si kavita paish ki... Dhanyavaad

Quote from: honeyrose on June 04, 2008, 03:32:13 PM


Bohat khoob Syed ji bohat hi umda likha aapne naari ka jeevan par.. Clapping Smiley

bekarar ji very nice sharing bohat khoob likha hai... Clapping Smiley

Aap ka hrday se aabhari hun, HoneyRose Jee...
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Pooja
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«Reply #40 on: June 13, 2008, 07:59:19 PM »
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shukaria shihab ji!! app bhi kuch likhte to acha lagta!!
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