NANHA FOOL MURJAYAA..............

by ranjana on June 19, 2006, 01:47:13 AM
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ranjana
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«Reply #45 on: June 27, 2006, 05:19:03 PM »
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shukriya Rajbir  aapka saath ham logo ko bahut hosala deta  hai...yun hi saath rahe................. Usual Smile

bahut khub fahi..........Maa sahbad sach main mahaan hai......mujhe MAA  ke hone ki keemat pata .hai....I lost my mother when I was only 12 yeras old.......aaj tumahri likha pad ke meri aankhe bhar aayi.......too good.........meri bhi yeh kuch lines MAA ke liye hain



MAA har pal tum saath ho mere , mujh ko yeh ehasas hai,
aaj tu bahut dur hai mujhse , par dil ke bahut pass hai,

tumhari yaado ki woh amulaye dharohar
aaj bhi mere pass hai .
jindagi ki har jung ko jeetne ke liye
apne sar par aaj bhi mujhe mehsus hota tera haath hai

kaise bhul sakti hun Maa main aapke haatho ka saneh,
jinhone mooh mein mere dala tha pehla nivala,
lekar mera haath apne haatho mein
duniya ki raha mein mera pehla kadam tha jo dala
jane anjane maaf kiya thaa meri har galti ko
har shaarat ko hans ke bhulaya thaa
duniya ho jaye chhaye kitni paraee,
par tumne mujhe kabhi parya nahi kiya tha,

aaj nahi ho tum jism se saath mere,
par apni baato se , apni amulaye yaadon se
tum har pal aaj bhi mere saath ho..........
kyuki MAA kabhi khatam nahi hoti .........
tum toh aaj bhi har pal mere hi pass hai
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redwhitegang
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«Reply #46 on: June 27, 2006, 06:13:39 PM »
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bohot achcha ranz-na and fahi once again u brilliant! :D
Aur Rajbir ji aap ka to bohot hii shukriya ke aap etna hosla de rahein hein :D



note: fahi ji ek sikwa reh gaya...k aapne mera naam k spell do jaga aalag aalag likha aur dono jagah jara mistake tha! :p....bas itna hii :D
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purani_jeans_aur_guitar
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«Reply #47 on: June 28, 2006, 06:07:21 AM »
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really touching ranjana .......jajwaato ko jaga sa diya tumne....aur maa to harpal saaya bankar rehti hai baccho per ...........mehssos kijiye har zarre mai ............aapki mom bhi aapke saath hi hai .

  har pal jo saaya bankar  ,mere har kadam per
  dhoop mai banke chaya ,mere jism ko sukun deker
  har dam hai mere saath chali..........woh.
 jo labo pe aashirvaad ,aanchal mai  rakhti mamta hai
  woh  meri maa hai
            haan meri maa. hai

      ...............@fahi@..................


 
woh meri maa hai.....

Quote from: "ranjana"
shukriya Rajbir  aapka saath ham logo ko bahut hosala deta  hai...yun hi saath rahe................. Usual Smile

bahut khub fahi..........Maa sahbad sach main mahaan hai......mujhe MAA  ke hone ki keemat pata .hai....I lost my mother when I was only 12 yeras old.......aaj tumahri likha pad ke meri aankhe bhar aayi.......too good.........meri bhi yeh kuch lines MAA ke liye hain



MAA har pal tum saath ho mere , mujh ko yeh ehasas hai,
aaj tu bahut dur hai mujhse , par dil ke bahut pass hai,

tumhari yaado ki woh amulaye dharohar
aaj bhi mere pass hai .
jindagi ki har jung ko jeetne ke liye
apne sar par aaj bhi mujhe mehsus hota tera haath hai

kaise bhul sakti hun Maa main aapke haatho ka saneh,
jinhone mooh mein mere dala tha pehla nivala,
lekar mera haath apne haatho mein
duniya ki raha mein mera pehla kadam tha jo dala
jane anjane maaf kiya thaa meri har galti ko
har shaarat ko hans ke bhulaya thaa
duniya ho jaye chhaye kitni paraee,
par tumne mujhe kabhi parya nahi kiya tha,

aaj nahi ho tum jism se saath mere,
par apni baato se , apni amulaye yaadon se
tum har pal aaj bhi mere saath ho..........
kyuki MAA kabhi khatam nahi hoti .........
tum toh aaj bhi har pal mere hi pass hai
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ranjana
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«Reply #48 on: June 28, 2006, 09:25:40 AM »
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ya fahi woh  har pal mere saath hain.........maa kabhi khatam nahi hoti ..............

woh hain  toh meri jindagi saanse leti hai
woh hain har mere saath toh meri jindagi mein roshni si jalti hai
woh hain toh meri tanahai mujhe tanah nahi karti hai
woh mere liye khuda ka ek rup hain........

woh meri maa hain
haan bas meri pyaari maa
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ranjana
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«Reply #49 on: July 02, 2006, 04:15:00 AM »
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mujhe bhi jeene ka adhikaar chahaiye
sab jaisi ho kar mujhe apni pehchaan chahaiye
beet raha hai mera jeevan ek andhakaar mein
mujhe apne jeevan mein jeene ak ek parkash chahaiye
jaane kya    fitrat  hai is  samaz  ki
jab bhi jeena chaha  apni marazi se
rok leti hain janzeere.n unke aan  ki
mujhe bhi apne liye ek sawtantare aakash chahaiye
apni pehchaan banaane nikli hun main
mujhe apni ek pehchaan chahaiye
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purani_jeans_aur_guitar
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«Reply #50 on: July 02, 2006, 04:33:09 AM »
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very nice ranjana ..........

sayad likhi hai meri kismat
khud meri hi sakal mai
 aaj kokh mai jeete hue bhi main
 mar rahi hoon har ek pal mai

sirf ek ladki hona hi sayad mera gunaah  hai
isliye...bana rahe hai kabar use jo meri panaah hai

...............@fahi@................
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ranjana
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«Reply #51 on: July 02, 2006, 05:43:27 AM »
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very nice fahi............

tum purush ho isliye tod sake saare bandhano ko
main chaha ke is se mukat na ho paayi
roz naapati hun apni suni aankho se aakash ko
chaha ke bhi kabhi mein mukat gagan mein udd nahi paayi

na jaane kitne sapane dekhe,kitne hi rishte nibhaaye
haqikat ki dharti per bikhar gaye woh sab
main chaha ke bhi un rishto ki jakdan toh nahi paayi

bahut mushkil hai apne in bandano se mukat hona
tum karoge toh yeh sahas kehleyga.....
main karungi toh naari shabad apmaanit ho jayega
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«Reply #52 on: July 02, 2006, 06:37:53 AM »
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Quote from: "ranjana"
very nice fahi............

tum purush ho isliye tod sake saare bandhano ko
main chaha ke is se mukat na ho paayi
roz naapati hun apni suni aankho se aakash ko
chaha ke bhi kabhi mein mukat gagan mein udd nahi paayi

na jaane kitne sapane dekhe,kitne hi rishte nibhaaye
haqikat ki dharti per bikhar gaye woh sab
main chaha ke bhi un rishto ki jakdan toh nahi paayi

bahut mushkil hai apne in bandano se mukat hona
tum karoge toh yeh sahas kehleyga.....
main karungi toh naari shabad apmaanit ho jayega


wah kaya baat haiii yah line to kamal ki likhi hai...

tum karoge toh yeh sahas kehleyga.....
main karungi toh naari shabad apmaanit ho jayega

Very true
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purani_jeans_aur_guitar
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«Reply #53 on: July 02, 2006, 06:54:16 AM »
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really very nice ranjana...........har baat sahi hai...........

pinjre ki kaid se mukt hone ke aalwa
is panchi ko marz aur bhi hai
 har kadam per naari ko dard deker bhi
 zindagi ko unse harz aur bhi hai

..................@fahi@................
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Pankhuri2
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«Reply #54 on: July 02, 2006, 07:27:42 AM »
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bahoot sahi kaha Fahi.....
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ranjana
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«Reply #55 on: July 03, 2006, 02:34:54 AM »
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shukriya pooja and fahi .......bahut sahi likha tumne.........

har yug mein aadami chalta raha hai apni shatranj ki chaal
har yug mein bas hota raha yahi toh kamaal,

kabhi laga diya naari ko daav per apni khushi ke liye
kabhi karke uska cheer haran toh kabhi le liya hai uska imthaan

kabhi dahej ke liye usko jhonk diya hai aag mein usne
har yug mein banaaya hai usne har tarike se naari ko apni dhaal
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«Reply #56 on: July 04, 2006, 09:26:23 AM »
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Garbh guha ke bheeter ek zindagi muskurai,
nanhe nanhe haath pawn pasaare..........
aur nanhe hotho se fir muskurai,
sochne lagi ki main bahar kab aauangi,
jiske andar main rehti hun, usko kab" MAA" keh kar bulaungi,
kuch badi hokar uske sukh -dukh ki saathi ban jaauangi..
kabhi "Pita" ke kandho per jhumunagi
kabhi "Dada" ki bahaoo.n mein jhul jaaungi
apni nanhi nanhi baato se sabka man bahaluangi.......

Nani mujhse kahani kaheagi, Dadi lori sunaegi,
Bua, Masi toh mujhpe jaise balahari jaayengi......
Beti hun toh kya hua kaam woh kar jaauangi,
Sabka naam roshan karuangi, ghar ka gaurav kahlauangi,

Per.............................................. .........................
Yeh kya sun kar mera nanaha hirdaye kampkpaaya,
Ma ka hridaye kathore hua kaise,ek Pita yeh faisla kaise kar paya,
"ladki "hun na is liye janam lene se pehele hi nanaha Fool murjayaa..!!!!!!!!!


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very nice ranju.  bahut hi touching hai.  sacchi aanken bhig gai meri......

par ek baat.

janam istri ka ek majburi nahi kudrat ki zarurat hai
ladki hi ho sakti hai
kabhi beti
kabhi behan
kabhi maa
kabhi premika



bas mujhe aur kuch nahi kehna..............   :-(
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ranjana
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«Reply #57 on: July 04, 2006, 10:57:13 AM »
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shukriya Vikas .......tumne yeh pada aacha laga......
sahi  kaha  tumne.....

naari hi hai jo jindagi aage chalati hai
har rup mein woh sabko lubhaati hai

woh hai toh yeh sansaar chalta hai
uske hone se jindagi ko ek naya arth milta hai

fir bhi aksar usi ko har julm sehna padata hai
milte hai akasr dard hi usko jindagi ke har mod per
aur kabhi usko apni jaan ko kokh mein hi dena padta hai
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«Reply #58 on: July 04, 2006, 11:04:13 AM »
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Yugo Yugo se ek baat saabit hoti rahi hai.....
Naari binn kahan khuda ki Khudai bhi chal payi hai.....

Ram na uthaya Dhanush Sita mata ke liye tha.....
Wahin Maa kaali ko karne Shant.......
Shiv ji ne bhi unke Kadmo me apna Shereer bichaya tha.....!!!!!!!
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«Reply #59 on: July 04, 2006, 02:13:50 PM »
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Ranju di...aaj first time yeh thread dekha.....Sabney bahut achha likha hai....

I must appraise u for such a nice thread... bahut touching laga....

YOU REALLY DESERVE A HALL OF APPLAUSE FOR THIS ONE....

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