~~"NANHE KADAM"~~

by k.shael on December 16, 2008, 09:14:28 AM
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«Reply #15 on: December 17, 2008, 10:21:50 AM »
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Beautiful Work Shally... Applause

Very Nice Contributions Jasbir Ji.. and Netra Ji.. Thumbs UP
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«Reply #16 on: December 17, 2008, 10:56:12 AM »
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Kaise Guzarti Hai Unpar Zindagi, Jinka Koi Nahi Hota,.
Har Mord Pe Wo Zindagi Se, Samjhota Karte Jaate Hain,.

Milti Hai, Inhe Khushi Bhi Pal Do Pal Ke Liye "Doston",.
Aur Us Khushi Ko Paane Ki Khaateer, Ye Roz Marte Jaate Hain,.

Duniya Ka Bojh Kaise Uthaa Te Hain, Ye Nanhe Kadam,.
Kitne Sang Dil Hain Hum Bhi, Apna Bojh Hum Inpar Bharte Jaate Hain,.

______________________________________-Jaanasheen-
Dil Se,.
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«Reply #17 on: December 17, 2008, 02:57:32 PM »
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Quote from: Mahiya on December 17, 2008, 10:21:50 AM
Beautiful Work Shally... Applause

Very Nice Contributions Jasbir Ji.. and Netra Ji.. Thumbs UP

THANKS MAHIYA

AAJKAL AAP DIKHTEY NAHI HO
BUSY HO BAHUT, KU MILTEY NAHI HO
YAHA BHI AAKEY APNI DUTY NIBHAO
SENIOR HO HAMAREY, KUCH LIKH TOH JAO


JASBIR SINGH
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«Reply #18 on: December 17, 2008, 02:59:45 PM »
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Quote from: Jaanasheen on December 17, 2008, 10:56:12 AM
Kaise Guzarti Hai Unpar Zindagi, Jinka Koi Nahi Hota,.
Har Mord Pe Wo Zindagi Se, Samjhota Karte Jaate Hain,.

Milti Hai, Inhe Khushi Bhi Pal Do Pal Ke Liye "Doston",.
Aur Us Khushi Ko Paane Ki Khaateer, Ye Roz Marte Jaate Hain,.

Duniya Ka Bojh Kaise Uthaa Te Hain, Ye Nanhe Kadam,.
Kitne Sang Dil Hain Hum Bhi, Apna Bojh Hum Inpar Bharte Jaate Hain,.

______________________________________-Jaanasheen-
Dil Se,.






bahut hi badiya kaha, jahanasheen

jasbir singh
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«Reply #19 on: December 17, 2008, 10:24:43 PM »
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Quote from: k.shael on December 16, 2008, 09:14:28 AM
AAJ NANHE KADMO KO BAHUT BADA BOJH DHOTE
PAAYA, AAJ MERI AANKHON NE EK MASOOM BACHE
KO PAISO KE LIYE KAAM KARTE HUE PAAYA,

BOOKH KI DUHAAYI DE LO YA PHIR DE DO NAAM ISE
MAJBOORI KA, AAJ MAINE KOHRE AUR THAND ME
EK BACHE KO BARTANN DHOTE HUE PAAYA,

WO HAWA JO BAND KAPDO ME BHI MUJHE JINJHOD RAHI
THI, USS HAWA SE MAINE USS MASOOM BACHE KO BADI
HIMMAT SE LADTE HUE PAAYA,

MAINE KABHI JISS CHEEZ KI KADAR-PARWAAH BHI NA KI,
USS CHEEZ KE LIYE USS BACHE KI NANHI AANKHON KO
MAINE TARASTE HUE PAAYA,

HAM BHI KAR LETE HAI KAAM KE SAATH-SAATH HASSI
MAJAK KABHI, PAR MAINE USS MASOOM KE CHEHRE PE
KAAM KI TARAF EK AJEEB HI FARZ PAAYA,

CHAL RAHI THI EK DUNIYA SAATH USKE HAR PAL, PAR
MAINE USS BACHE KO KHAALI GILAAS ME APNA KOI
WAJOOD DOONDTE HUE PAAYA,

DEKH KE USKE MASOOM NANGE KADMO KO MERA DIL
BHAR AAYA, PAR SACH ME AAJ MAINE EK MASOOM KO
ZINDAGI KE KATHOR NIYAMO PE MUSKURAATE HUE
CHALTE PAAYA…

SHALLY.


WAH WAH WAH  Applause Applause

SHALLY Ji,

Aapki yeh nazam padh ke sach mein ae dost dil bhar aaya.

Yeh dard bhari haqeeqat kitne khoobsurat andaaz mein bayaan ki hai.

Is haqeeqat ke aage apne gam kitane pheeke hain iska ehsaas dilaaya hai.



Ek gazal ki chand lines mujhe yaad aa gayi aur share kar rahi hoon...


Aur bhi dukh hain zamaane mein mohabbat ke siwa,
raahte aur bhi hain vasal ki raahat ke siwa.
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«Reply #20 on: December 19, 2008, 01:34:26 PM »
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Shukriya Jasbir Bhaiya,.
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«Reply #21 on: December 20, 2008, 07:08:39 AM »
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Quote from: cara on December 16, 2008, 11:17:29 AM
haqeekat hai shallyji.

ek nanhi si jaan  kudrat, waqut samaj aur apneaap se bi lardti.

SHUKRIYA CARA...

SHALLY.
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«Reply #22 on: May 02, 2011, 09:54:46 AM »
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Quote from: k.shael on December 16, 2008, 09:14:28 AM
AAJ NANHE KADMO KO BAHUT BADA BOJH DHOTE
PAAYA, AAJ MERI AANKHON NE EK MASOOM BACHE
KO PAISO KE LIYE KAAM KARTE HUE PAAYA,

BOOKH KI DUHAAYI DE LO YA PHIR DE DO NAAM ISE
MAJBOORI KA, AAJ MAINE KOHRE AUR THAND ME
EK BACHE KO BARTANN DHOTE HUE PAAYA,

WO HAWA JO BAND KAPDO ME BHI MUJHE JINJHOD RAHI
THI, USS HAWA SE MAINE USS MASOOM BACHE KO BADI
HIMMAT SE LADTE HUE PAAYA,

MAINE KABHI JISS CHEEZ KI KADAR-PARWAAH BHI NA KI,
USS CHEEZ KE LIYE USS BACHE KI NANHI AANKHON KO
MAINE TARASTE HUE PAAYA,

HAM BHI KAR LETE HAI KAAM KE SAATH-SAATH HASSI
MAJAK KABHI, PAR MAINE USS MASOOM KE CHEHRE PE
KAAM KI TARAF EK AJEEB HI FARZ PAAYA,

CHAL RAHI THI EK DUNIYA SAATH USKE HAR PAL, PAR
MAINE USS BACHE KO KHAALI GILAAS ME APNA KOI
WAJOOD DOONDTE HUE PAAYA,

DEKH KE USKE MASOOM NANGE KADMO KO MERA DIL
BHAR AAYA, PAR SACH ME AAJ MAINE EK MASOOM KO
ZINDAGI KE KATHOR NIYAMO PE MUSKURAATE HUE
CHALTE PAAYA…

SHALLY.


bahut dard bhala ehsaas qalmo ke maarfat aapne khichaa hai. koi alfaaz nahin aage kuch kahne ke liye. bahut khoob . bahut aaala tareen kalaam
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«Reply #23 on: May 21, 2011, 09:31:44 AM »
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This has made my day. I wish all psiotgns were this good.
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«Reply #24 on: May 21, 2011, 09:46:03 AM »
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Wah bahut gaherai,dard bhari peshkash Shally ji,really touching poem.sabhi ne bahut acha saath diya. icon_salut Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #25 on: September 05, 2014, 02:30:57 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause :clap:very well written congratulations ji Applause
Quote from: k.shael on December 16, 2008, 09:14:28 AM
AAJ NANHE KADMO KO BAHUT BADA BOJH DHOTE
PAAYA, AAJ MERI AANKHON NE EK MASOOM BACHE
KO PAISO KE LIYE KAAM KARTE HUE PAAYA,

BOOKH KI DUHAAYI DE LO YA PHIR DE DO NAAM ISE
MAJBOORI KA, AAJ MAINE KOHRE AUR THAND ME
EK BACHE KO BARTANN DHOTE HUE PAAYA,

WO HAWA JO BAND KAPDO ME BHI MUJHE JINJHOD RAHI
THI, USS HAWA SE MAINE USS MASOOM BACHE KO BADI
HIMMAT SE LADTE HUE PAAYA,

MAINE KABHI JISS CHEEZ KI KADAR-PARWAAH BHI NA KI,
USS CHEEZ KE LIYE USS BACHE KI NANHI AANKHON KO
MAINE TARASTE HUE PAAYA,

HAM BHI KAR LETE HAI KAAM KE SAATH-SAATH HASSI
MAJAK KABHI, PAR MAINE USS MASOOM KE CHEHRE PE
KAAM KI TARAF EK AJEEB HI FARZ PAAYA,

CHAL RAHI THI EK DUNIYA SAATH USKE HAR PAL, PAR
MAINE USS BACHE KO KHAALI GILAAS ME APNA KOI
WAJOOD DOONDTE HUE PAAYA,

DEKH KE USKE MASOOM NANGE KADMO KO MERA DIL
BHAR AAYA, PAR SACH ME AAJ MAINE EK MASOOM KO
ZINDAGI KE KATHOR NIYAMO PE MUSKURAATE HUE
CHALTE PAAYA…

SHALLY.
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