*Nari Hu Mai*

by Roja on May 18, 2008, 03:49:19 PM
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Nari hu nirman karungi
Apna bi samman karungi

Parampara se kyu kar ladna
Usse aaj se kal tak judana
Anishta.ta ko vinisht karke
Nutanta ka maan karungi

Aadishakti hu mai srushti ki
Mujhse tum khilvad na karna
Jhansi mere tann mein jage
Mann main Durga-dyan karungi

Agnidev ne jis se bachaya
Jan-ninda ne usse jalaya
Sita aise fir na jalegi
Naye niyam nirman karungi

Rakshak hu mai sare jag ki
Mujhe na abla tum kehna
Shabdh-jaal mein mujhe na fhanso
Mai yatarth ka dyan rakhungi

Bhavishya meri ghod mein pal raha
Mai usko sakar karungi
Vish pilaya tumne mujhse,
pyar ka naam dekar
Mai amruth ka daan karungi

Ulat jayenge ghoongat sare
Purush aaj apne ko parke..
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«Reply #1 on: May 18, 2008, 04:11:24 PM »
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Roja

As always !

On burning issues you write so well ! Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: May 18, 2008, 06:23:48 PM »
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Roja ji,

aapne behad khoobsurat likha he.

Prateek
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«Reply #3 on: May 19, 2008, 02:36:52 AM »
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Roja

As always !

On burning issues you write so well ! Applause Applause Applause

Thanks Raj ji.

I want to again confirm the above writtern is purely MINE ...... tongue3
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«Reply #4 on: May 19, 2008, 02:40:13 AM »
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Roja ji,

aapne behad khoobsurat likha he.

Prateek

Thanks Prateek ji.
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«Reply #5 on: May 19, 2008, 04:42:42 AM »
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Very nice Roja..Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: May 19, 2008, 05:57:53 AM »
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Nari hu nirman karungi
Apna bi samman karungi

Parampara se kyu kar ladna
Usse aaj se kal tak judana
Anishta.ta ko vinisht karke
Nutanta ka maan karungi

Aadishakti hu mai srushti ki
Mujhse tum khilvad na karna
Jhansi mere tann mein jage
Mann main Durga-dyan karungi

Agnidev ne jis se bachaya
Jan-ninda ne usse jalaya
Sita aise fir na jalegi
Naye niyam nirman karungi

Rakshak hu mai sare jag ki
Mujhe na abla tum kehna
Shabdh-jaal mein mujhe na fhanso
Mai yatarth ka dyan rakhungi

Bhavishya meri ghod mein pal raha
Mai usko sakar karungi
Vish pilaya tumne mujhse,
pyar ka naam dekar
Mai amruth ka daan karungi

Ulat jayenge ghoongat sare
Purush aaj apne ko parke..


ROAJA JEE FIR EK BAR CHAA GAYE, BAHOOT HEE LAJAWAAB ROOP SE NAREE KO DARSHAYA HAI AAPNE.

NETRA.....
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«Reply #7 on: July 29, 2008, 04:37:47 PM »
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Thanks Honey dear and Netra ji
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«Reply #8 on: July 29, 2008, 04:51:58 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause

wah kaya baat hai.. bahoot khoob Roja!!
yah lines to kamal ki likhi hai:
Aadishakti hu mai srushti ki
Mujhse tum khilvad na karna
Jhansi mere tann mein jage
Mann main Durga-dyan karungi
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«Reply #9 on: July 30, 2008, 01:06:08 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause
roja ji,
aapne bahoot sunder likha hai..sahi shabdon ka chayan....uttam shaily....bahoot khoob
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«Reply #10 on: July 30, 2008, 04:41:31 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Pooja di and Bekarar ji
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