Pari kaha hoti hai...........( Ghayel ):Tanziya aur Tehreekbaksh Shayariyan

Sajid_Ghayel

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Pehli to ho, aakhri kaha hoti hai
Umr mohabbat ki, budhi kaha hoti hai

Ho tazgi subah me, ho jeene ki aarzoo
Khwaishe raat ki, poori kaha hoti hai

Na duniya se fursat, Na jannat se bair
Hasrat_e_Aadam, thodi kaha hoti hai

Hukmaraa.N mere, q kar sune meri
Guzarishe awaam ki, zaruri kaha hoti hai

Kahi Fikr Qafiye ki, kahi khayaal se khali
Is tarah saheb, shayri kaha hoti hai

Ghazal ki godh me, jhooth jayez huye
Koi ladki bhala, pari kaha hoti hai

Ghayel se bhala kaise, Tauheen_e_husn ho
Koi nazar uski, buri kaha hoti hai

Sajid Ghayel


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tamanna.pt

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Re: Pari kaha hoti hai...........( Ghayel )

«Reply #1 on: May 16, 2010, 01:36:01 AM »

Waise to aapka likha sabhi kuch achha hi hota hai, par humari urdu zara weak hai,waise zara kya puri hi weak hai glucose chadhane ki zarurat hai isliy aapka likha har kalaam samajh nahi pate par ye samajh pay hain or humesha ki tarah bahut behatareen hi likha hai. Sare sher lajawaab hai or 5th sher to bilkul hum par hi fit hua lagta hai. Bahut maza aaya padh k. Dheron daad aapko.


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Rajesh Harish

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Re: Pari kaha hoti hai...........( Ghayel )

«Reply #2 on: May 16, 2010, 01:52:57 AM »

Bahut khoob Ghayel Ji


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nazar ghouri

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Re: Pari kaha hoti hai...........( Ghayel )

«Reply #3 on: May 16, 2010, 02:03:35 AM »

bahot khoob sajid bhai..subah subah dil bagh bagh hogaya..behatreen likha hai ,umda paishkash ..dil to chahraha hai kisi shair ke zariye daad doon lekin darr raha hoon..khair ...iski wajeh aap ko malum hojegi..
bahoot achhe sajid bhai..


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Pallavi Gupta

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Re: Pari kaha hoti hai...........( Ghayel )

«Reply #4 on: May 16, 2010, 06:06:38 AM »

bahut khub likha hai aapne.........


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mrkotians

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Re: Pari kaha hoti hai...........( Ghayel )

«Reply #5 on: May 19, 2010, 01:24:47 AM »

Bahut Khoob... Sajid Ji... Bahut Khoob... Wah.. Ji Wah...


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maihuri

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Re: Pari kaha hoti hai...........( Ghayel )

«Reply #6 on: May 19, 2010, 05:01:01 AM »


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Sajid_Ghayel

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Re: Pari kaha hoti hai...........( Ghayel )

«Reply #7 on: May 19, 2010, 07:56:47 AM »

Quote from: tamanna.pt on May 16, 2010, 01:36:01 AM

Nawazish Karam Tamanna Jee jo aapne apna waqt diya, aur hamari dosti ko aap apni urdu ke liye Vitamin aur Protein Ki goliya samjhe hamari tarah tooti footi to seekha hi dege aapko.


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Sajid_Ghayel

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Re: Pari kaha hoti hai...........( Ghayel )

«Reply #8 on: May 25, 2010, 08:29:07 PM »

Quote from: Rajesh Harish on May 16, 2010, 01:52:57 AM

Bahut khoob Ghayel Ji

Nawazish Karam Rajesh Saheb........


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