Pyaas mere labon pe tadapti rahi !!

by junaidqadir on May 21, 2009, 06:43:53 AM
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bahoth din pahele likhi eak ghazal apki nazar karta hon hifazath ki jiyega !!


Zindagi se khuch is taraha kash-ma-kash rahi !!
leke apne sang mujhe dar-dar bhatakti rahi !!
sahera me samandar bhala kyon kar mile !!
pyaas mere laboon pe rah-rah ke tadapti rahi !!

mazloom-o-masomoo ki bastiyon ko jalaya gaya !!
adath se majboor thi duniya hasti rahi !!

andheron se mahobbath khuch is qadar bad gayi !!
mere ghar ke charagon ko raushni se bagawath rahi !!

ruswa-e-ke qauf ne mujhe hamesha rok rakha !!
meri har khwaish mere ander sisakti rahi !!

aur mere zabt ka imtehan khuch is taraha liya usne !!
aake khushiyan mere dar se palat ti rahi !!

mahobbath karne ka sila bhi kya qoob mila qadeer !!
tum tadapte rahe umra bhar wo tadpaati rahi !!

........Qadeer..........
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«Reply #1 on: May 21, 2009, 07:18:58 AM »
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Quote from: junaidqadir on May 21, 2009, 06:43:53 AM
bahoth din pahele likhi eak ghazal apki nazar karta hon hifazath ki jiyega !!
bahut khoob qadeer ji bahut khoob


Zindagi se khuch is taraha khas-ma-kash rahi !!
leke apne sang mujhe dar-dar bhatakti rahi !!
sahera me samandar bhala kyon kar mile !!
pyaas mere laboon pe rah-rah ke tadapti rahi !!

mazloom-o-masomoo ki bastiyon ko jalaya gaya !!
adath se majboor thi duniya hasti rahi !!

andheron se mahobbath khuch is qadar bad gayi !!
mere ghar ke charagon ko raushni se bagawath rahi !!

ruswa-e-ke qauf ne mujhe hamesha rok rakha !!
meri har khwaish mere ander sisakti rahi !!

aur mere zabt ka imtehan khuch is taraha liya usne !!
aake khushiyan mere dar se palat ti rahi !!

mahobbath karne ka sila bhi kya qoob mila qadeer !!
tum tadapte rahe umra bhar wo tadpaati rahi !!

........Qadeer..........
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«Reply #2 on: May 21, 2009, 07:30:00 AM »
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Bahot Khu
Quote from: K Lakhian on May 21, 2009, 07:18:58 AM

bahot khub! Shubhanalla
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«Reply #3 on: May 21, 2009, 07:55:57 AM »
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mazloom-o-masomoo ki bastiyon ko jalaya gaya !!
adath se majboor thi duniya hasti rahi !!

hmmmmmmm

sahi akha kaha kisi ko aaj farak padta hai kisi ke gam se
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«Reply #4 on: May 21, 2009, 08:11:59 AM »
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beautiful gazal,qadeer ji,very very nice. Applause
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«Reply #5 on: May 21, 2009, 10:01:24 AM »
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Quote from: junaidqadir on May 21, 2009, 06:43:53 AM
bahoth din pahele likhi eak ghazal apki nazar karta hon hifazath ki jiyega !!


Zindagi se khuch is taraha khas-ma-kash rahi !!
leke apne sang mujhe dar-dar bhatakti rahi !!
sahera me samandar bhala kyon kar mile !!
pyaas mere laboon pe rah-rah ke tadapti rahi !!

mazloom-o-masomoo ki bastiyon ko jalaya gaya !!
adath se majboor thi duniya hasti rahi !!

andheron se mahobbath khuch is qadar bad gayi !!
mere ghar ke charagon ko raushni se bagawath rahi !!

ruswa-e-ke qauf ne mujhe hamesha rok rakha !!
meri har khwaish mere ander sisakti rahi !!

aur mere zabt ka imtehan khuch is taraha liya usne !!
aake khushiyan mere dar se palat ti rahi !!

mahobbath karne ka sila bhi kya qoob mila qadeer !!
tum tadapte rahe umra bhar wo tadpaati rahi !!

........Qadeer..........



LAAJAWAAB QADIR BHAI.....KYA KHOOB LIKHAA HAI
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«Reply #6 on: May 21, 2009, 10:12:34 AM »
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Wah Kya khoob ghazal likhi hai Qadeer Ji, Bahut Umda aur lajawaab Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley

Usko jaate hue dekhna mujhe pasandh na tha,
Aur isi zidd me use dekh paane ki chahat umar bhar machalti rahi,

Naaz se toda tha phool ek unke liye baag se,
Aaj baagbaa.n ne bataya har kalli unki chah me barso bikharti rahi,

Wo kehte the ham na rakhenge kashti-e-ishq me paan.v,
Unhe sambhal lene ke waade ke liye mein umar bhar girti-sambhalti rahi.

Shally.
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«Reply #7 on: May 21, 2009, 10:28:55 AM »
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Quote from: junaidqadir on May 21, 2009, 06:43:53 AM
bahoth din pahele likhi eak ghazal apki nazar karta hon hifazath ki jiyega !!


Zindagi se khuch is taraha khas-ma-kash rahi !!
leke apne sang mujhe dar-dar bhatakti rahi !!
sahera me samandar bhala kyon kar mile !!
pyaas mere laboon pe rah-rah ke tadapti rahi !!

mazloom-o-masomoo ki bastiyon ko jalaya gaya !!
adath se majboor thi duniya hasti rahi !!

andheron se mahobbath khuch is qadar bad gayi !!
mere ghar ke charagon ko raushni se bagawath rahi !!

ruswa-e-ke qauf ne mujhe hamesha rok rakha !!
meri har khwaish mere ander sisakti rahi !!

aur mere zabt ka imtehan khuch is taraha liya usne !!
aake khushiyan mere dar se palat ti rahi !!

mahobbath karne ka sila bhi kya qoob mila qadeer !!
tum tadapte rahe umra bhar wo tadpaati rahi !!

........Qadeer..........


wah Qadir Ji, bahut khoob

jasbir singh
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«Reply #8 on: May 21, 2009, 10:30:12 AM »
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Quote from: k.shael on May 21, 2009, 10:12:34 AM
Wah Kya khoob ghazal likhi hai Qadeer Ji, Bahut Umda aur lajawaab Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley

Usko jaate hue dekhna mujhe pasandh na tha,
Aur isi zidd me use dekh paane ki chahat umar bhar machalti rahi,

Naaz se toda tha phool ek unke liye baag se,
Aaj baagbaa.n ne bataya har kalli unki chah me barso bikharti rahi,

Wo kehte the ham na rakhenge kashti-e-ishq me paan.v,
Unhe sambhal lene ke waade ke liye mein umar bhar girti-sambhalti rahi.

Shally.


Wah wah Shally ji, bahut hi khoob, wah

jasbir singh
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«Reply #9 on: May 21, 2009, 10:31:55 AM »
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Quote from: jasbirsingh on May 21, 2009, 10:30:12 AM
Wah wah Shally ji, bahut hi khoob, wah

jasbir singh

Shukriya Jas Ji, Apna keemti waqt dene aur mere kaam ko sarahne ke liye.

Shally.
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«Reply #10 on: May 21, 2009, 11:13:42 AM »
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Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on May 21, 2009, 10:01:24 AM


LAAJAWAAB QADIR BHAI.....KYA KHOOB LIKHAA HAI

bahoth bahoth shukriya k.a. sahab waise apka naam batane ki zahemath kariyaga agar dushwar na ho to !! allah apko khush rakhe !!

duvaun ka muntazir !!

Qadeer
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«Reply #11 on: May 26, 2009, 10:10:51 AM »
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Quote from: junaidqadir on May 21, 2009, 06:43:53 AM
bahoth din pahele likhi eak ghazal apki nazar karta hon hifazath ki jiyega !!


Zindagi se khuch is taraha kash-ma-kash rahi !!
leke apne sang mujhe dar-dar bhatakti rahi !!
sahera me samandar bhala kyon kar mile !!
pyaas mere laboon pe rah-rah ke tadapti rahi !!

mazloom-o-masomoo ki bastiyon ko jalaya gaya !!
adath se majboor thi duniya hasti rahi !!

andheron se mahobbath khuch is qadar bad gayi !!
mere ghar ke charagon ko raushni se bagawath rahi !!

ruswa-e-ke qauf ne mujhe hamesha rok rakha !!
meri har khwaish mere ander sisakti rahi !!

aur mere zabt ka imtehan khuch is taraha liya usne !!
aake khushiyan mere dar se palat ti rahi !!

mahobbath karne ka sila bhi kya qoob mila qadeer !!
tum tadapte rahe umra bhar wo tadpaati rahi !!

........Qadeer..........

Qadeer Bhai,

Bohot hi achchi ghazal hai...padh ke bohot achcha laga....Bohot hi Khoob Bhaijan !
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«Reply #12 on: May 28, 2009, 02:42:33 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on May 26, 2009, 10:10:51 AM

Qadeer Bhai,

Bohot hi achchi ghazal hai...padh ke bohot achcha laga....Bohot hi Khoob Bhaijan !

adaab talat bahen !!

apka ahesan mandh hai ye haqeeq insaan jo apne waqath diya ghazal ko aur pasand farmaya !! allah tumhe khush rakhe !!

Qadeer
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«Reply #13 on: May 28, 2009, 02:57:54 PM »
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Quote from: junaidqadir on May 21, 2009, 06:43:53 AM
bahoth din pahele likhi eak ghazal apki nazar karta hon hifazath ki jiyega !!


Zindagi se khuch is taraha kash-ma-kash rahi !!
leke apne sang mujhe dar-dar bhatakti rahi !!
sahera me samandar bhala kyon kar mile !!
pyaas mere laboon pe rah-rah ke tadapti rahi !!

mazloom-o-masomoo ki bastiyon ko jalaya gaya !!
adath se majboor thi duniya hasti rahi !!

andheron se mahobbath khuch is qadar bad gayi !!
mere ghar ke charagon ko raushni se bagawath rahi !!

ruswa-e-ke qauf ne mujhe hamesha rok rakha !!
meri har khwaish mere ander sisakti rahi !!

aur mere zabt ka imtehan khuch is taraha liya usne !!
aake khushiyan mere dar se palat ti rahi !!

mahobbath karne ka sila bhi kya qoob mila qadeer !!
tum tadapte rahe umra bhar wo tadpaati rahi !!

........Qadeer..........


kia baat hai Qadeer sb



bahut hi umda likha hai




javed
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«Reply #14 on: May 28, 2009, 03:16:11 PM »
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Quote from: javedarshad on May 28, 2009, 02:57:54 PM

kia baat hai Qadeer sb



bahut hi umda likha hai




javed

javed sahab adaab !!

Ahesan mandh hain hum apke jo apne pasandh farmaya !! Allah tumhe khush rakhe sahab !!

Qadeer
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