Raahnuma:Tanziya aur Tehreekbaksh Shayariyan

Safi Yani

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Kis ka hai bhala tu raahnuma(leader,guide)
Mehfooz hai kiska sir ye bataa

Chal gair se tujhko bair sahi apno ke makaa(n)kyon jalte hain
Shaitaa(n) ki qazaa(maut)aa jaye magar insaan bhala kyon marte hain
Ye mujhko bataa de aaj zara hain kaun jo tere apne hain

Hindu ke musalmaa(n)kaun bhala

Dharti ke pujaari kis khoobi se farz nibhate hain dekho
Maata pe usi ke laalo(n) ko ye bhaint charhaate hain dekho
Itna hi nahi(n) ye dharti ke tukre bhi karaate hain dekho

Kyon mulk mera tukro(n) mein bataa

Tehzeeb ke ai thekedaro kyon chaak(kata,phata)hai daaman ismat(laaj)ka
Lagta hai takaaza(maang,demand)hai shaayad ye mulko kaum ki izzat ka
Kya Ved main ya Quraa(n) mein kahi(n) paigaam hai koi nafrat ka

Kya tumne banaaya dharm naya


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deepika_divya

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Re: Raahnuma

«Reply #1 on: June 14, 2009, 03:50:36 PM »

Waah Waah Kya khoob tanz kasa hai.. bahoot bhoot khoob Safi ji..


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shab

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Re: Raahnuma

«Reply #2 on: June 14, 2009, 08:22:43 PM »

BAHUT KHOOB SAFI SAHAB


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chitralsony

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Re: Raahnuma

«Reply #3 on: June 15, 2009, 08:36:22 AM »

NICE ONE SAFI JE ,REAL CHEHRA PAISH KIYA HAI AJ KAL KAY REHNUMAON KA


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khamosh_aawaaz

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Re: Raahnuma

«Reply #4 on: June 15, 2009, 10:15:57 AM »

Quote from: Safi Yani on June 14, 2009, 02:20:18 PM

gud 1 SAFI JI


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Safi Yani

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Re: Raahnuma

«Reply #5 on: June 15, 2009, 05:21:02 PM »

Quote from: Sophi on June 14, 2009, 03:50:36 PM

Waah Waah Kya khoob tanz kasa hai.. bahoot bhoot khoob Safi ji..

Thanks a lot,Sophi


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Safi Yani

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Re: Raahnuma

«Reply #6 on: June 15, 2009, 05:22:58 PM »

Quote from: shab on June 14, 2009, 08:22:43 PM

BAHUT KHOOB SAFI SAHAB

Thank a lot for the comment.


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Safi Yani

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Re: Raahnuma

«Reply #7 on: June 15, 2009, 05:26:49 PM »

Quote from: chitralsony on June 15, 2009, 08:36:22 AM

NICE ONE SAFI JE ,REAL CHEHRA PAISH KIYA HAI AJ KAL KAY REHNUMAON KA

Thank a lot for appreciating my work.


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Safi Yani

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Re: Raahnuma

«Reply #8 on: June 15, 2009, 05:29:35 PM »

Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on June 15, 2009, 10:15:57 AM

gud 1 SAFI JI

Thank you very,very much


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madhuwesh

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Re: Raahnuma

«Reply #9 on: June 16, 2009, 02:50:39 AM »

Very nice Safi yani ji, Applause

:clap:bahut acha likha aapne.


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_Vicky_

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Re: Raahnuma

«Reply #10 on: June 16, 2009, 07:44:07 AM »

Wah Kya Baat hai Safi Ji.. Ek ek Lafz Succhaai se Bhara Likha Hai dear..!! Aur aapka Nazariye Behad Accha laga Jise Soch Kar aapne Yeh Rachna Likhi hai.. Bahut Khooooooooob.. Applause

**~** Mann **~**


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Talat

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Re: Raahnuma

«Reply #11 on: June 16, 2009, 10:43:17 AM »

Bohot Khoob Safi Sahab


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Safi Yani

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Re: Raahnuma

«Reply #12 on: June 16, 2009, 05:11:09 PM »

Quote from: madhuwesh on June 16, 2009, 02:50:39 AM

Very nice Safi yani ji, Applause

:clap:bahut acha likha aapne.

Bahut,Bahut shukriya,Maadhuwesh


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Safi Yani

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Re: Raahnuma

«Reply #13 on: June 16, 2009, 05:15:05 PM »

Quote from: Celmira on June 16, 2009, 10:43:17 AM

Bohot Khoob Safi Sahab

Thanks a lot.I've just visited your website.Your poetry is really very nice.


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Safi Yani

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Re: Raahnuma

«Reply #14 on: June 16, 2009, 05:19:57 PM »

Quote from: Mann on June 16, 2009, 07:44:07 AM

Wah Kya Baat hai Safi Ji.. Ek ek Lafz Succhaai se Bhara Likha Hai dear..!! Aur aapka Nazariye Behad Accha laga Jise Soch Kar aapne Yeh Rachna Likhi hai.. Bahut Khooooooooob.. Applause

**~** Mann **~**

Jitna dil se maine likha utni hi dil se aapne taareef ki.Bahut accha laga.I'd like to befriend you.
My e-mail ID is s_a_yani@yahoo.com


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