RISHTE

by NETRAPAL on November 04, 2009, 10:54:23 AM
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Kitne khush the bandh kar rishto kee dor me
Aaj kyo har rishte bemane se lagte hai
Wo  jo lagaate the gale ham ko
Dekhte hee hame najare chuaarne lagte hai

koi haath sar pe hamare jab aataa thaa
amarat aashirwaad kaa hame pilaataa tha
kate fate haath bhee jab dete the thapkee
mai chain kee neend so jaataa thaa…

ankho me neer bhaar letaa tha wo bhaayee
jab kantaa bhee koi chubh jataa thaa
letee thee balaaye bhaabhee bhee meree
jab mai lot kar gaaon apne aataa thaa

aaj sab bujha bujha saa lagtaa hai
har sakh n jane kyon begaanaa saa lagtaa hai
ankhe bhar aatee hai meree
jab meraa apnaa ankhe churaa jaataa hai

laachaar saa dikhtaa hai pita
maa bhee sahamee see najar aatee hai
bhaiyaa ke to kahne hee kyaa
bahanaa bhee begaanee najar aatee hai

kal mai jawaan thaa
matrbhoomee kee mai aan thaa
kubraan kardiyaa tha matrbhoomee pe jo
wo, meraa ek paanv ek haath thaa

ek apang apno kee beech ayaa thaa
aansoo pane mai saath laayaa thaa
ponchegne aansoo mere kai haath
yahee sapnaa mai saath apne laayaa thaa

mere apne muj se darne lage
haath apnaa wo mujhse chudaane lage
pyaar bhare vachan bolne waale
teer gaaliyon ke chalaane lage

nahi maloom tha wo din bhee ayegaa
samya apnaa chakraa bhee chlaayegaa
rishte kee dor toot jayegee pal me
har jagah swarth hee swarth najar aayegaa

Netrapal....
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thinkhattk
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«Reply #1 on: November 04, 2009, 10:59:50 AM »
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its to good........ icon_thumleft
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well done..... Applause
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #2 on: November 05, 2009, 12:37:07 AM »
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Wah bahut hi khoob Netra ji,really touched,lovely creation.excellent.keep it up.
 icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: November 05, 2009, 03:51:55 AM »
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thanks mathuwesh ji or thinkattk for reply

Netrapal
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Rishi Agarwal
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«Reply #4 on: November 05, 2009, 03:48:56 PM »
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Nice and excellent Applause Applause
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NETRAPAL
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«Reply #5 on: November 06, 2009, 09:17:29 AM »
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thanks rishi bhaayee

Netra..
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«Reply #6 on: November 06, 2009, 09:27:50 AM »
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kitne akele se hote hai
rishto se jab door hote hai
kabhee bojh lagne waale bhee
kabhee apne se lagne lagte hai

jab kareeeb the, kadr n kee unkee
aaj door hai to we bahut yaad ate hai
dekhte the maleen jinko ham kabhee
aaj we hee roshan najar aate hai

kaash har saksh samjhtaa rishto ko
jillat kee jindgee n jeetaa koi
karte kadre gar saathee kee apne
pal bhar ke saath ko n tarastaa aaj koi..
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«Reply #7 on: November 29, 2009, 10:51:46 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: November 30, 2009, 06:43:03 AM »
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thanks khamosh awwaj for reply

Netra...
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«Reply #9 on: December 05, 2009, 05:22:32 PM »
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 Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smileyhamesha ki tarah bahoot he shaandaar@jaandar.kamaal ka likha hai apne Netra ji!!!  A very Good Creation!!!


Bana kar rishto ko Munh phair lena adat se ho gai hai
Dunia mai na jaane kaise yah dil dukhane ki riwayat se ho gai hai

Bitha lete hai palko per, phir khud ashaq ban jaate hai
Pooja ko bhi na jaane kyun, her baar apni kismat ajmaane ki adat se ho gai hai....
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«Reply #10 on: December 05, 2009, 06:56:03 PM »
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Nice poem Netrapalji..... Applause Applause Applause

Swaarth ke ho gaye hain riste ab sab
kaun jaane katenge apno ka gala kab

Quote from: NETRAPAL on November 04, 2009, 10:54:23 AM

Kitne khush the bandh kar rishto kee dor me
Aaj kyo har rishte bemane se lagte hai
Wo  jo lagaate the gale ham ko
Dekhte hee hame najare chuaarne lagte hai

koi haath sar pe hamare jab aataa thaa
amarat aashirwaad kaa hame pilaataa tha
kate fate haath bhee jab dete the thapkee
mai chain kee neend so jaataa thaa…

ankho me neer bhaar letaa tha wo bhaayee
jab kantaa bhee koi chubh jataa thaa
letee thee balaaye bhaabhee bhee meree
jab mai lot kar gaaon apne aataa thaa

aaj sab bujha bujha saa lagtaa hai
har sakh n jane kyon begaanaa saa lagtaa hai
ankhe bhar aatee hai meree
jab meraa apnaa ankhe churaa jaataa hai

laachaar saa dikhtaa hai pita
maa bhee sahamee see najar aatee hai
bhaiyaa ke to kahne hee kyaa
bahanaa bhee begaanee najar aatee hai

kal mai jawaan thaa
matrbhoomee kee mai aan thaa
kubraan kardiyaa tha matrbhoomee pe jo
wo, meraa ek paanv ek haath thaa

ek apang apno kee beech ayaa thaa
aansoo pane mai saath laayaa thaa
ponchegne aansoo mere kai haath
yahee sapnaa mai saath apne laayaa thaa

mere apne muj se darne lage
haath apnaa wo mujhse chudaane lage
pyaar bhare vachan bolne waale
teer gaaliyon ke chalaane lage

nahi maloom tha wo din bhee ayegaa
samya apnaa chakraa bhee chlaayegaa
rishte kee dor toot jayegee pal me
har jagah swarth hee swarth najar aayegaa

Netrapal....
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«Reply #11 on: December 17, 2009, 10:16:13 AM »
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thanks pooja ji and koyal ji

Netra
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riyaz106
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«Reply #12 on: December 17, 2009, 10:22:23 AM »
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Bahut achhi poem likhi Netrapal Ji. I congrat you. Thanks for sharing.
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«Reply #13 on: January 24, 2010, 09:02:03 AM »
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I'm Just Speechless Netra Ji Usual Smile
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malli
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«Reply #14 on: January 29, 2010, 02:23:25 AM »
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Very well expressed lines Netra ji... bahut khoob Clapping Smiley
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