saans leti zindagi

by Tuhina on January 25, 2013, 01:58:40 PM
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The  poem  describes  about  the    condition  of  children , we  see,       at  different  places  around  us ..                                                           
GAANV  KI  PAGDANDIYON  PAR  NANGE  PAIR  DAUDATI ,                   
DHOOP  SI  JALI  HUI  ,  PUSHPA  SI  KHILI  HUI , 
KHILKHILATI  ZINDAGI.. 
SAANS  LETI  ZINDAGI......                                                                             
KANDHE  PAR  BOJH  TANGKAR , 
PEHNE  TOOTE  HUE  BATAN  KI  SHIRT , 
KUDE  KE  DHER  ME KISMAT  TATOLATI  ZINDAGI , SAANS LETI....                                                             
AANKHON  ME  ANSU ROK KAR DER TAK  ROTI  HUI , 
DUTKAAR  KA  HAR  GHHOONT  PANI  KE  SANG  ,
PEETI  HUI , 
SIKKON  KE  BADALE  SABKO   
SALAM  KARTI  ZINDAGI , 
SAANS ...   
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«Reply #1 on: January 25, 2013, 02:02:38 PM »
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The  poem  describes  about  the    condition  of  children , we  see,       at  different  places  around  us ..   

GAANV  KI  PAGDANDIYON  PAR  NANGE  PAIR  DAUDATI ,                   
DHOOP  SI  JALI  HUI  ,  PUSHPA  SI  KHILI  HUI , 
KHILKHILATI  ZINDAGI..  SAANS  LETI  ZINDAGI......   
                                                                        
KANDHE  PAR  BOJH  TANGKAR ,  PEHNE  TOOTE  HUE  BATAN  KI  SHIRT , 
KUDE  KE  DHER  ME KISMAT  TATOLATI  ZINDAGI , SAANS LETI....                                                             
AANKHON  ME  ANSU ROK KAR DER TAK  ROTI  HUI , 
DUTKAAR  KA  HAR  GHHOONT  PANI  KE  SANG  , PEETI  HUI , 
SIKKON  KE  BADALE  SABKO    SALAM  KARTI  ZINDAGI ,  SAANS ...   

wah wah bahut acha likha hai aapne...Tuhina jee
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«Reply #2 on: January 25, 2013, 02:14:39 PM »
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nice composition... heart touching..
 Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: January 25, 2013, 02:23:50 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: January 25, 2013, 03:12:54 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
beautiful composition tuhina jee
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«Reply #5 on: January 25, 2013, 05:57:04 PM »
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aap  sabhi ko  aneko anek dhanyavaad
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«Reply #6 on: January 25, 2013, 05:57:42 PM »
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aap  sabhi ko  aneko anek dhanyavaad
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«Reply #7 on: January 25, 2013, 07:59:40 PM »
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Tuhina Jee Aadaab!


Behad gehre khayaal ki manzar kashi ki hai aapne.. jee waqai
aaj bhi aise haal meiN bachche paaye jaate haiN... Jinki aNkhoN
meiN kai khawaaboN ki taabeere hoti toH hai par haathoN ki lakeeroN
meiN woH taqdeereN nahi hoti...

Aap ne achche topic se introduce kiya hai... Humari daad kabul kijiye..

Likhate rahiye.. aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile                   
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«Reply #8 on: January 25, 2013, 10:59:20 PM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #9 on: January 26, 2013, 01:41:38 AM »
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very nice
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«Reply #10 on: January 28, 2013, 09:42:12 AM »
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very nice
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause
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