Samaj wahin hai par Insaniyat ka mulay badal gaya hai:Tanziya aur Tehreekbaksh Shayariyan

deepika_divya

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Jahan pujte the Mata â€“Pita ko Bhagwan k saman
Aaj wahin yea rista khokla ho gaya hai
Kehlate aaj bhi who Abhibhavak hai
Par unke prati Dayitav kahin kho gaya hai

Manushay aaj k daur mea itna aage bad chukka hai
Ki na jane kyun who apne aap se dur ho gaya hai
Dhan aur maan sammaan ki doud mea bhagte hue
Apne AAdarsho ko kahin bhul gaya hai

Mohabbat basti thi jahan logo k Dilo mea
Wahin aaj chahat aaj sirf juban tak reh gaya hai
Khilwaad ho raha hai pyar k naam par
Insaan aaj khud apni mohabbat ka dusman hua hai

Bad gaya hai Adaram is jahan mea itna
Dharm ka Nishaan dundala hua hai
Kahin , aatankwaad, lutpaat, durachaar,atyachaar
Kyun koon karaba, Beimaani ka aasra, insaan ka mastisk hua hai

Yea kya ho gaya hai insaan ko yahan
Paripakav hai who Mastisk se par dil se Nisahaaye hua hai
Samay k saath bagte -2, khud apne aap se pichad gaya hai
Samaj wahin hai par Insaniyat ka mulay badal gaya hai


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Samaj wahin hai par Insaniyat ka mulay badal gaya hai

«Reply #1 on: August 03, 2007, 12:24:43 PM »

Deepika, it is nice.
Just one thing I want to add, if you want it to be True Hindi poem then avoid use of hard Urdu words or if you want it to be Urdu Poem then avoid use of hard Hindi words.

Here I saw that in begining you tried it to be pure Hindi poem or Kavita but later on you used urdu words to.

Poem is nice , very well expressed too.


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badnaam_shayar

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Samaj wahin hai par Insaniyat ka mulay badal gaya hai

«Reply #2 on: August 04, 2007, 08:08:30 PM »

from my side....9/10....Keep it up...!!!!!!


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Talat

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Samaj wahin hai par Insaniyat ka mulay badal gaya hai

«Reply #3 on: August 04, 2007, 09:30:11 PM »

Good one Divs..... Keep it up !! Usual Smile


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deepika_divya

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Samaj wahin hai par Insaniyat ka mulay badal gaya hai

«Reply #4 on: August 06, 2007, 03:44:39 AM »

Thank u Ricky sir.. thank u so much.. Next time I will take care of that...

thanks gaurav..

Thanks talat Di..


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