Samandar khud Kinara dega !!

by abdulqadeer on February 05, 2009, 03:02:12 PM
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Doosto ye ghazal shayad mai pahele bhi post kari hogi !! to maafi chahata hon magar aaj bahoth dil kar raha tha isko post karne ka to kar diya !! agar ghazal tak pahonch gaye to nawaz dena !!


Jo bhi tha sab khuch to chin liya tune !!
Bata mujhe aur kya saza dega !!
Eak baar zindagi deke kitni baar marega mujhe !!
Sub thak gaye ab tohi bata kaun hai  jo kandha dega !!

Waqath ki andhi ne mera sara shaher mita diya !!
Ab mai banjara hon , wo raheman hai kahin na kahin basa dega !!

Ab majdhar me aahi gaye ho to tofano se kya darna !!
Agar chini hai usne fatwar to wohi sahara  dega !!

Tum karte raho naam koshishen mujhe dobane ki !!
Mai begunha hon khud samandar mujhe kinara dega !!

Ab meri gurbath pe duniya hasne lagi hai “Qadeer”
Agar wo josh me agaya to rahemath ka Qazana Dega !!

Qadeer Toopchi
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«Reply #1 on: February 05, 2009, 03:23:11 PM »
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Wah Bhai, Kitni Baar Bhi Pardoon, Aapki Ghazlein Utni Baasr Us Se Aur Mohabbat Ho Jaaati Hai,.

Bohat Achche Tareekhe Se Bayaan Kiya Hai Aapne, Jo Guzar Rahi Hai Wo Bhi Bataa Diya,.
Aur Rab Se Umeed Bhi Rakhi Hai,.

Yunhi Qadeer Bhai, Hum Sab Ko Apni Ghazlon Se Nawaaze, Allah Paak Aapko Lambi Umar De, Khushiyaan De. Aur Uski REhmat Barsaaye Yunhi Likhte Raho,.
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«Reply #2 on: February 05, 2009, 03:29:53 PM »
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Quote from: Jaanasheen on February 05, 2009, 03:23:11 PM
Wah Bhai, Kitni Baar Bhi Pardoon, Aapki Ghazlein Utni Baasr Us Se Aur Mohabbat Ho Jaaati Hai,.

Bohat Achche Tareekhe Se Bayaan Kiya Hai Aapne, Jo Guzar Rahi Hai Wo Bhi Bataa Diya,.
Aur Rab Se Umeed Bhi Rakhi Hai,.

Yunhi Qadeer Bhai, Hum Sab Ko Apni Ghazlon Se Nawaaze, Allah Paak Aapko Lambi Umar De, Khushiyaan De. Aur Uski REhmat Barsaaye Yunhi Likhte Raho,.

Shukriya Azeem is Nacheez ko itni di apne !! Ye sub apki nazron ki qasiyath jo hamari ghazal ke ahesas tak pahonch jati hai chute bhai !! allah tumhe khush rakhe azeem !!

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«Reply #3 on: February 05, 2009, 03:41:59 PM »
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Shukriya Azeem is Nacheez ko itni di apne !! Ye sub apki nazron ki qasiyath jo hamari ghazal ke ahesas tak pahonch jati hai chute bhai !! allah tumhe khush rakhe azeem !!

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Bhai Jispar Guzri Hai Gurbat, Wohi Gurbat Jaanta Hai,.
Allah Use Aazmaata Hai Faaqe Dekar, Jo Allah Ko Maanta Hai,.

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«Reply #4 on: February 05, 2009, 04:08:45 PM »
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Bahot khub surat ghazal hai... aankhon mein aansu aagaye!

Azeem, aapne bhi bahot kamal kee lines lihkee hain!

keep it up!
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«Reply #5 on: February 05, 2009, 04:16:50 PM »
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«Reply #6 on: February 05, 2009, 04:17:49 PM »
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Quote from: abdulqadeer on February 05, 2009, 03:02:12 PM
Doosto ye ghazal shayad mai pahele bhi post kari hogi !! to maafi chahata hon magar aaj bahoth dil kar raha tha isko post karne ka to kar diya !! agar ghazal tak pahonch gaye to nawaz dena !!


Jo bhi tha sab khuch to chin liya tune !!
Bata mujhe aur kya saza dega !!
Eak baar zindagi deke kitni baar marega mujhe !!
Sub thak gaye ab tohi bata kaun hai  jo kandha dega !!

Waqath ki andhi ne mera sara shaher mita diya !!
Ab mai banjara hon , wo raheman hai kahin kahin basa dega !!

Ab majdhar me aahi gaye ho to tofano se kya darna !!
Agar chini hai usne fatwar to wohi sahara  dega !!

Tum karte raho naam koshishen mujhe dobane ki !!
Mai begunha hon khud samandar mujhe kinara dega !!

Ab meri gurbath pe duniya hasne lagi hai “Qadeer”
Agar wo josh me agaya to rahemath ka Qazana Dega !!

Qadeer Toopchi

Bahut Bahut Khoob Qadeer Saheb..Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Ghazal Likhi Hai Aapne..Bahut ache Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: February 05, 2009, 04:18:57 PM »
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bahoot khoob Qadeer bhai... yah lines behad pasand aai

Tum karte raho naam koshishen mujhe dobane ki !!
Mai begunha hon khud samandar mujhe kinara dega !!
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«Reply #8 on: February 05, 2009, 05:21:39 PM »
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Quote from: abdulqadeer on February 05, 2009, 03:02:12 PM


Tum karte raho naam koshishen mujhe dobane ki !!
Mai begunha hon khud samandar mujhe kinara dega !!

Ab meri gurbath pe duniya hasne lagi hai “Qadeer”
Agar wo josh me agaya to rahemath ka Qazana Dega !!

Qadeer Toopchi

Qadeer Bhai,

Bohot Khoob...Taareef ke liye mere paas alfaaz ki kami hai.....Upar ke ye 2 asha'ar to dil pe ek asar chorh jaate hain...Bohot Khoob Bhai.
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«Reply #9 on: February 05, 2009, 05:26:26 PM »
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Bahoot Khoob Likha Qadeer Sahab :clap Applause Applause
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Maf kijiyega achhe topics dekhkar mai kud ko rok nahi sakta kuch likhne se...
ek choti si koshish kar raha hun ummid hai pasand aayegi...



Har zarre pe uski hi surat hogi,
Har nazar pe vo apna nazara dega...

Aankho me bhar lunga pal bhar ke un jasbato ko,
Firse agar vo apne jasbato ka sahara dega....

Ashko me baha diye jo pal maine apni rusvayi ke,
Ummid nahi ki fir se vo mausam doobara dega...

Raste to khud hi ban jayenge meri muhaabbat ki sachhayi dekhkar,
Khuda bhi jab hoga sath mere toh Samandar bhi kinara dega...

~Pank~
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«Reply #11 on: February 05, 2009, 06:07:31 PM »
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Quote from: pankshivam on February 05, 2009, 05:54:29 PM
Maf kijiyega achhe topics dekhkar mai kud ko rok nahi sakta kuch likhne se...
ek choti si koshish kar raha hun ummid hai pasand aayegi...



Har zarre pe uski hi surat hogi,
Har nazar pe vo apna nazara dega...

Aankho me bhar lunga pal bhar ke un jasbato ko,
Firse agar vo apne jasbato ka sahara dega....

Ashko me baha diye jo pal maine apni rusvayi ke,
Ummid nahi ki fir se vo mausam doobara dega...

Raste to khud hi ban jayenge meri muhaabbat ki sachhayi dekhkar,
Khuda bhi jab hoga sath mere toh Samandar bhi kinara dega...

~Pank~


Bohat Achche Pank Bhai,.

Jab Khudaa Saath Ho, To Har Cheez Jaayaz Hai,.
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«Reply #12 on: February 05, 2009, 06:07:46 PM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

bahoot khoob PANK JI.... Bahoot khoob!!!

Insaani fidrat.. insaan se karaati hai kaya kaya
iradein kar.. phir bas dekhta chala  ja...
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«Reply #13 on: February 05, 2009, 06:09:10 PM »
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Bohot Khoob Pank Ji...Beautiful reply !!
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«Reply #14 on: February 05, 2009, 06:33:04 PM »
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