Samandar khud Kinara dega !!

by abdulqadeer on February 05, 2009, 03:02:12 PM
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #15 on: February 05, 2009, 07:42:27 PM »
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Aadmi aadmi ko kya dega
Jo bhi dega bas khuda dega

Zindagi ko kareeb se dekho
Iska chehra tumhe hila dega

                -NM-

Kisi gareeb ki daulat bas itni hain
Jo bhala karoge uska bas dua dega

                      -SG-
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«Reply #16 on: February 05, 2009, 08:04:27 PM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on February 05, 2009, 07:42:27 PM
Aadmi aadmi ko kya dega
Jo bhi dega bas khuda dega

Zindagi ko kareeb se dekho
Iska chehra tumhe hila dega

                -NM-

Kisi gareeb ki daulat bas itni hain
Jo bhala karoge uska bas dua dega

                      -SG-
Bahoot Khoob Ghyal Sahab Applause Applause Applause
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #17 on: February 05, 2009, 08:14:18 PM »
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Quote from: pankshivam on February 05, 2009, 05:54:29 PM
Maf kijiyega achhe topics dekhkar mai kud ko rok nahi sakta kuch likhne se...
ek choti si koshish kar raha hun ummid hai pasand aayegi...



Har zarre pe uski hi surat hogi,
Har nazar pe vo apna nazara dega...

Aankho me bhar lunga pal bhar ke un jasbato ko,
Firse agar vo apne jasbato ka sahara dega....
 
Ashko me baha diye jo pal maine apni rusvayi ke,
Ummid nahi ki fir se vo mausam doobara dega...

Raste to khud hi ban jayenge meri muhaabbat ki sachhayi dekhkar,
Khuda bhi jab hoga sath mere toh Samandar bhi kinara dega...

~Pank~


Bohat bohat khoob Pank and everybody else have written really very good, all credit should be given to Qadeer who always brings the best out of us.
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chitralsony
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«Reply #18 on: February 06, 2009, 07:46:03 AM »
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nice wording yaar
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fairy2633
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«Reply #19 on: February 06, 2009, 12:18:44 PM »
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subhanallah...qadir ji...bahut khoob..specially last ke lines bahut acche hai.....
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abdulqadeer
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«Reply #20 on: February 07, 2009, 06:29:39 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on February 05, 2009, 04:18:57 PM
bahoot khoob Qadeer bhai... yah lines behad pasand aai

Tum karte raho naam koshishen mujhe dobane ki !!
Mai begunha hon khud samandar mujhe kinara dega !!

Shukriya Pooja Bahen !! Allah tumhe khush rakhe !!

Qadeer Toopchi
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abdulqadeer
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«Reply #21 on: February 07, 2009, 07:45:08 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on February 05, 2009, 04:17:49 PM
Bahut Bahut Khoob Qadeer Saheb..Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Ghazal Likhi Hai Aapne..Bahut ache Applause Applause Applause

shukriya Kuwish sahab apne hamari ghazal ko waqath diya !!

Qadeer Toopchi
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Roja
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«Reply #22 on: February 07, 2009, 07:55:37 AM »
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Bahut accha likha hai aapne Abdul Qadeer ji

Pank ji... SG  Thumbs UP sab ne bahut accha likha hai.
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abdulqadeer
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«Reply #23 on: February 07, 2009, 07:56:46 AM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on February 05, 2009, 08:14:18 PM
Bohat bohat khoob Pank and everybody else have written really very good, all credit should be given to Qadeer who always brings the best out of us.

Thank you sajid sahab !!

Qadeer Toopchi
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abdulqadeer
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«Reply #24 on: February 07, 2009, 10:58:03 AM »
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Bahoth Qoob Sajid ji !! Mazaagya hai janab !!

Qadeer Toopchi
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«Reply #25 on: February 07, 2009, 11:59:48 AM »
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Quote from: pankshivam on February 05, 2009, 05:54:29 PM
Maf kijiyega achhe topics dekhkar mai kud ko rok nahi sakta kuch likhne se...
ek choti si koshish kar raha hun ummid hai pasand aayegi...



Har zarre pe uski hi surat hogi,
Har nazar pe vo apna nazara dega...

Aankho me bhar lunga pal bhar ke un jasbato ko,
Firse agar vo apne jasbato ka sahara dega....

Ashko me baha diye jo pal maine apni rusvayi ke,
Ummid nahi ki fir se vo mausam doobara dega...

Raste to khud hi ban jayenge meri muhaabbat ki sachhayi dekhkar,
Khuda bhi jab hoga sath mere toh Samandar bhi kinara dega...

~Pank~


Bahoth umda likha hai janab !! dil khush ho gaya aise likhte rahiye !! allah tumhe khush rakhe !!

Qadeer Toopchi
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abdulqadeer
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«Reply #26 on: February 08, 2009, 06:44:44 AM »
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Quote from: anjaan dharkan on February 05, 2009, 04:08:45 PM
Bahot khub surat ghazal hai... aankhon mein aansu aagaye!

Azeem, aapne bhi bahot kamal kee lines lihkee hain!

keep it up!

Shukriya bahen !! Allah tumhe khush rakhe !!

Qadeer Toopchi
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #27 on: February 08, 2009, 07:34:03 AM »
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Nice one Qadeer Ji
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #28 on: February 08, 2009, 07:35:48 AM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on February 05, 2009, 07:42:27 PM
Aadmi aadmi ko kya dega
Jo bhi dega bas khuda dega

Zindagi ko kareeb se dekho
Iska chehra tumhe hila dega

                -NM-

Kisi gareeb ki daulat bas itni hain
Jo bhala karoge uska bas dua dega

                      -SG-
Bahut achcha likha hai aap ne Ghayel Ji
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abdulqadeer
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«Reply #29 on: February 08, 2009, 07:53:22 AM »
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Quote from: Rajesh Harish on February 08, 2009, 07:34:03 AM
Nice one Qadeer Ji

Thank you very much Rajesh ji app hamari har ghazal padte hain janab apke ahesand mand hain hum !! Allah apko khush rakhe !!

Qadeer Toopchi
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