Shayari karte hain

by @Kaash on July 18, 2013, 02:49:00 AM
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tasavvur hai nahi itna abaad isliye to
sachhe khyaalon ko hi ansuna krte hain

kis tarah daad mil sake kalaam ko mere
isi jaddojahad me bechaare pisa karte hain

majaal nahi ki khud se aage nikalne den
jitni bhi achhi shayari ho andekha karte hain

tehzeeb naye bhulen to koi baat nahi hai
buddhe bhi daad ke lie zameer becha karte hain

gaane me kabhi kamina kabhi bhaag dkbos likhke
bollywood me mache dhaak manaaya karte hain
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Iftakhar Ahmad
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«Reply #1 on: July 18, 2013, 02:57:35 AM »
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waah waah bahut khoob likha hai.
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«Reply #2 on: July 18, 2013, 03:14:09 AM »
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shukriya!  Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: July 18, 2013, 04:49:37 AM »
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nice one
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«Reply #4 on: July 18, 2013, 11:14:47 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: July 18, 2013, 12:32:50 PM »
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kyaa baat kyaa baat
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«Reply #6 on: July 18, 2013, 12:42:00 PM »
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ye lo kaash miyaaN, bahut sachhi baat keh gaye ho aap, aaj kal ke shaayaroN aur bazm ka amooman kuch aisa hi haal hai...!!
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«Reply #7 on: July 18, 2013, 01:31:02 PM »
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bahut khoob...
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«Reply #8 on: July 18, 2013, 01:35:25 PM »
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bohut khoob likha hai kaash
ApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplause
ApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplause
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«Reply #9 on: July 18, 2013, 01:45:06 PM »
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Bahoot acha likha hai but first sher ki language shayari ki garima aur uski khoobsurati ko kam karti hai pls aise shabdon ka istemaal na kare baki bahoot acha likha hai ...keep writing
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«Reply #10 on: July 18, 2013, 01:57:51 PM »
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after modification, nw i like it... good job..

bahut khoob.. Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: July 18, 2013, 02:21:26 PM »
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bahut khoob aur sach bhi
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 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: July 18, 2013, 07:34:20 PM »
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bahut khoob
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