Shayari ke naam par balaatkaar kar rahe hain..........Kaash

by @Kaash on July 29, 2013, 01:20:30 AM
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Doston,ye ek tanz hai aisi negative maansikta par jiske
tahat insaan shayari ko bhi ek khel ya apni
bhadaas nikaalne ka maadhyam bana leta hai.Shayari sachhi wohi hoti hai
jisme hum apne sundar bhaavon ki mehek bikher saken naaki apne frustration ya gusse ki badbu se ise w apni yogyata ko kalankit karen.Kuch pramukh
vajahon me ye maansikta bhi ek badi vajah rahi saahitya
w kaavya jagat me nirantar girawat ki.


Shayari ke naam par balaatkaar kar rahe hain
aajkal ke shayar kya vyavhaar kar rahe hain


kami sahitya ki hai ya sanskaar ki pata nahi
khud se hi khud ka vyabhichaar kar rahe hain


avsaad ko banake buniyaad apni shayari ka
kahte hain mehbuba se ikraar kar rahe hain


hum to samjhe the ki apni ghalti maanenge
wo to kahte hain hum upkaar kar rahe hain


kuch ne ise hawasiya jaama pehna rakha hai
kuch hain ki waisi shyari tyaar kar rahe hain


kabhi ladki ladka to ladka ladki banke likhta
Khuleaam ehsaason ka vyapaar kar rahe hain


kuch hain ki mazhabvaadita me hi qaid ho gaye
aur kuch hain ki unka abhaar kar rahe hain


na vazan,na radeef na kaafiya na kaavya darshan
daad bhi aise kalaamon ka deedaar kar rahe hain
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«Reply #1 on: July 29, 2013, 01:51:06 AM »
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lovelyyyyyy
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Quote from: SaniyaS on July 29, 2013, 01:51:06 AM
lovelyyyyyy

shukriya aapka!
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Baaki sabka to mujhe pata nahi kaash jee..
Par yakinan aap bada hi achha likhte hain..

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aur ye bhi bahut khoob likha hai..daad qubool ho..happy9
 
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«Reply #4 on: July 29, 2013, 02:23:52 AM »
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Quote from: nashwani on July 29, 2013, 02:11:12 AM
Baaki sabka to mujhe pata nahi kaash jee..
Par yakinan aap bada hi achha likhte hain..

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aur ye bhi bahut khoob likha hai..daad qubool ho..happy9
 

Nashwani ji aapka bahut shukriya!

But dear this is not individual specific rather it is conceptual specific.Aur Yo par to mostly log bahut acha likhte hain!
Lekin maine kai jagah aur bhi aur yahan tak ke logon ki facebook wall par aisi poems padhin ki bahut hansi aayi unke
bachpane par,unki maturity par.Kai din se koi topic nahi mila to socha pending topics ki list me se kisi par kuch likhun and this is how it's being done!
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«Reply #5 on: July 29, 2013, 03:41:28 AM »
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Bahut Khoob @Kaashji.
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bahut khoob
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bahut hi badhiya rachna.. badhaii Kaash ji.
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  nice and true
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very trueeeeeeee kaashji. dheron daaaaad..
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