Shayer nahi mante.........(Ghayel)

by sajid_ghayel on February 25, 2009, 01:46:39 PM
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Apna jise bana liya woh hame jante nahi
Jinhe pechaan apni dedi woh hame pehchante nahi

Apna ho jo koiee yeh baat lage theek
Dushman pe yaha khanjar hum taante nahi

Beparda mile husn to maal khara hain
Pehle ki tarah chilman me ada chante nahi

Likhe woh koi ghazal, geet ya rubaiee
GHAYEL ko yaha logh shayer mante nahi

-Sajid Ghayel-
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«Reply #1 on: February 25, 2009, 01:51:09 PM »
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Kaun Maanta nahi Bhai,,
Hum To bakhauda Aapko Mante Hain,.

Aur Mashallah Kya khoob Likha Hai, Nice One,./
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«Reply #2 on: February 25, 2009, 02:40:26 PM »
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GHAYEL SAHEB, KYA BAAT KEH RAHEY HO AAP .... AAP TOH ITNI BADIYA POEMS LIKHTEY HO BHAI .... JOH NAHI SAMAJ PA RAHA  TOH HAMARI SAMAJ MEH WOH NASAMAJ HAI JI ....


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«Reply #3 on: February 25, 2009, 03:28:40 PM »
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WAAH SAJID JI!  Clapping Smiley
Shaayar to dil mein, zehn mein hotaa hai numaayaan;
Alfaaz to izhaar key hain kuchh hi namooney!
Har boond mein insaan kee, hai shaayaree rawaan;
Gouhar-see nihaan hai uyoon-e-a'am mein sooney!!

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«Reply #4 on: February 25, 2009, 03:51:43 PM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on February 25, 2009, 01:46:39 PM
Apna jise bana liya woh hame jante nahi
Jinhe pechaan apni dedi woh hame pehchante nahi

Apna ho jo koiee yeh baat lage theek
Dushman pe yaha khanjar hum taante nahi

Beparda mile husn to maal khara hain
Pehle ki tarah chilman me ada chante nahi

Likhe woh koi ghazal, geet ya rubaiee
GHAYEL ko yaha logh shayer mante nahi

-Sajid Ghayel-

Bahut acche  Applause

La-ilaj marj hai pyar Sajid
Gam her dard ka ilaz hota hai
Kisi ke liye dil jalana
Sajid, yahi chahat ka riwaz hota hai..
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«Reply #5 on: February 25, 2009, 05:28:22 PM »
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bahoot khoob Sajid, Abdji and Roja apne to kuch he lafzo main bahoot kuch kah diya!! Nice work!!
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«Reply #6 on: February 26, 2009, 05:43:59 AM »
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wah wah mere bhai...Sajid saheb bahau acha likha hai apne...aap ko shayar kaun nahin manta...aap toh bahaut umda likte ho...
chand lavzon logon se apni baat kehgaye aap..
chupe chupe kisi se shikayat kargaye aap...
usse zarur lagi hogi apki baat dil pe,
pyaar main kisi ko dard degaye aap...
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«Reply #7 on: February 26, 2009, 05:55:40 AM »
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salam aapki nazar poori gazal kar raha hoo`n
aapnay jo shair likhay hai`n usee zameen may aik shair nazar kar raha hoon
AIK TUM HI AJNABI KI TARAH MUJH SAY KYA MILAY
MUJH SAY TO ZINDAGI BHI MERI AJNABI RAHI

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«Reply #8 on: February 26, 2009, 06:13:15 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on February 25, 2009, 05:28:22 PM
bahoot khoob Sajid, Abdji and Roja apne to kuch he lafzo main bahoot kuch kah diya!! Nice work!!
Thanks Pooja ji!
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«Reply #9 on: February 26, 2009, 07:15:35 AM »
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Bahot hi badiya sajid ji Clapping Smiley
Hum to aap hi se sikh rahe hai.... Thumbs UP
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«Reply #10 on: February 26, 2009, 07:34:17 AM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Beautifull heart touching lines Sajid ji bohat khoob... 

Bohat khoob Abd ji aur DH



Honthon pe kabhii un ke meraa naam hii aaye
Aaye to sahii bar-sar-e-ilzaam hii aaye

Hairaan hain lab_bastaa hain, dil_giir hain gunche
Khushbuu kii zubaanii teraa paigaam hii aaye

*NM*
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«Reply #11 on: February 26, 2009, 09:06:39 AM »
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Quote from: honeyrose on February 26, 2009, 07:34:17 AM
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Beautifull heart touching lines Sajid ji bohat khoob... 

Bohat khoob Abd ji aur DH



Honthon pe kabhii un ke meraa naam hii aaye
Aaye to sahii bar-sar-e-ilzaam hii aaye

Hairaan hain lab_bastaa hain, dil_giir hain gunche
Khushbuu kii zubaanii teraa paigaam hii aaye

*NM*

Shukriyah honeyrose ji!
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«Reply #12 on: February 26, 2009, 12:50:56 PM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on February 25, 2009, 01:46:39 PM
Apna jise bana liya woh hame jante nahi
Jinhe pechaan apni dedi woh hame pehchante nahi

Apna ho jo koiee yeh baat lage theek
Dushman pe yaha khanjar hum taante nahi

Beparda mile husn to maal khara hain
Pehle ki tarah chilman me ada chante nahi

Likhe woh koi ghazal, geet ya rubaiee
GHAYEL ko yaha logh shayer mante nahi

-Sajid Ghayel-

Bohot Khoob Sajid Ji,

Pehchaante bhi hain, apna maante bhi hain
Dil ke qareeb ae dost tumhe jaante bhi hain

Rishton ko humne pal bhar main badalte dekha,
Dost aur dushman ka farq, par jaante bhi hain

Shayari pe tumhari, daad yunhi to na di,
Ghayel ko achcha shayar sab maante bhi hain !!
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«Reply #13 on: February 26, 2009, 01:09:30 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on February 26, 2009, 12:50:56 PM
Bohot Khoob Sajid Ji,

Pehchaante bhi hain, apna maante bhi hain
Dil ke qareeb ae dost tumhe jaante bhi hain

Rishton ko humne pal bhar main badalte dekha,
Dost aur dushman ka farq, par jaante bhi hain

Shayari pe tumhari, daad yunhi to na di,
Ghayel ko achcha shayar sab maante bhi hain !!

Waah Waaha, Kya KHoob Talat Didi,. Great Work Yaar Achcha Laga Pardhke, Nice One,.
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«Reply #14 on: February 26, 2009, 01:37:18 PM »
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