Shayer nahi mante.........(Ghayel)

by sajid_ghayel on February 25, 2009, 01:46:39 PM
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«Reply #15 on: March 07, 2009, 08:49:21 AM »
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Quote from: Jaanasheen on February 25, 2009, 01:51:09 PM
Kaun Maanta nahi Bhai,,
Hum To bakhauda Aapko Mante Hain,.

Aur Mashallah Kya khoob Likha Hai, Nice One,./

Bohat Shukriyaa chote jo tumne itni izzat di....

Quote from: @kaash on February 25, 2009, 02:31:18 PM
waah waah Ghayal bhai...bahot umda ashaar sabhi.. Applause Applause

very nice ... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


Bohat shukriyaa Kaash...

Quote from: jasbirsingh on February 25, 2009, 02:40:26 PM
GHAYEL SAHEB, KYA BAAT KEH RAHEY HO AAP .... AAP TOH ITNI BADIYA POEMS LIKHTEY HO BHAI .... JOH NAHI SAMAJ PA RAHA  TOH HAMARI SAMAJ MEH WOH NASAMAJ HAI JI ....

JASBIR SINGH

Oye yara tera pyaar na ho to kya rak_kha hai jeene me  DOH
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«Reply #16 on: March 07, 2009, 08:53:48 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on February 25, 2009, 03:28:40 PM

WAAH SAJID JI!  Clapping Smiley
Shaayar to dil mein, zehn mein hotaa hai numaayaan;
Alfaaz to izhaar key hain kuchh hi namooney!
Har boond mein insaan kee, hai shaayaree rawaan;
Gouhar-see nihaan hai uyoon-e-a'am mein sooney!!

                             - abd bundeli



Bohat bohat khoob likha hain bhai....hausla afzaiee ke liye shukriyaa.

Quote from: Roja on February 25, 2009, 03:51:43 PM
Bahut acche  Applause

La-ilaj marj hai pyar Sajid
Gam her dard ka ilaz hota hai
Kisi ke liye dil jalana
Sajid, yahi chahat ka riwaz hota hai..


Wah wah wah kya khoob kaha hain Subhan_allah... Clapping Smiley

Quote from: Pooja on February 25, 2009, 05:28:22 PM
bahoot khoob Sajid, Abdji and Roja apne to kuch he lafzo main bahoot kuch kah diya!! Nice work!!

Thanks Pooja for giving time to my work...
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«Reply #17 on: March 07, 2009, 09:00:46 AM »
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Quote from: dead heart on February 26, 2009, 05:43:59 AM
wah wah mere bhai...Sajid saheb bahau acha likha hai apne...aap ko shayar kaun nahin manta...aap toh bahaut umda likte ho...
chand lavzon logon se apni baat kehgaye aap..
chupe chupe kisi se shikayat kargaye aap...
usse zarur lagi hogi apki baat dil pe,
pyaar main kisi ko dard degaye aap...

Izzat dene ke liye bohat shukriyaan DH aur kya khoob likh hain tumne shabash... Clapping Smiley

Quote from: NAJIBSHAMSI on February 26, 2009, 05:55:40 AM
salam aapki nazar poori gazal kar raha hoo`n
aapnay jo shair likhay hai`n usee zameen may aik shair nazar kar raha hoon
AIK TUM HI AJNABI KI TARAH MUJH SAY KYA MILAY
MUJH SAY TO ZINDAGI BHI MERI AJNABI RAHI

Is nacheeze ki nazar to aapki dad hi kafi thi itna pyara sher dekar to aapne muje malamaal kar diya  Clapping Smiley

Quote from: salma786 on February 26, 2009, 07:15:35 AM
Bahot hi badiya sajid ji Clapping Smiley
Hum to aap hi se sikh rahe hai.... Thumbs UP

Aji hum sab ek dusre se seekh rahe hain waise mujse kaiee behtar to tum khud likhti ho Salma..

Quote from: honeyrose on February 26, 2009, 07:34:17 AM
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Beautifull heart touching lines Sajid ji bohat khoob... 

Bohat khoob Abd ji aur DH



Honthon pe kabhii un ke meraa naam hii aaye
Aaye to sahii bar-sar-e-ilzaam hii aaye

Hairaan hain lab_bastaa hain, dil_giir hain gunche
Khushbuu kii zubaanii teraa paigaam hii aaye

*NM*


Thanks Honeyrose...
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«Reply #18 on: March 07, 2009, 09:03:27 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on February 26, 2009, 12:50:56 PM
Bohot Khoob Sajid Ji,

Pehchaante bhi hain, apna maante bhi hain
Dil ke qareeb ae dost tumhe jaante bhi hain

Rishton ko humne pal bhar main badalte dekha,
Dost aur dushman ka farq, par jaante bhi hain

Shayari pe tumhari, daad yunhi to na di,
Ghayel ko achcha shayar sab maante bhi hain !!

Aji bas itna hi kahuga, khush kar ditta tusi...
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«Reply #19 on: March 07, 2009, 09:32:07 AM »
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bahoot khoob sajid bhai...aur talat ne to mere dil ki baat kah dee
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«Reply #20 on: March 07, 2009, 01:15:51 PM »
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ghayal sahab aap shayar hain janaab..........aur bhut acha likhte hain,

aapki nazr ek shair (munavvar rana sahab ka)

meine lafzo.n ko baratne mai lahoo thook diya
aap to sirf ye daikhai.n ke ghazal kaisi hai
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«Reply #21 on: March 07, 2009, 02:13:46 PM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on March 07, 2009, 08:53:48 AM
Bohat bohat khoob likha hain bhai....hausla afzaiee ke liye shukriyaa.

Thanks! You're welcome!
                  - abd bundeli
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«Reply #22 on: March 07, 2009, 04:13:41 PM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on March 07, 2009, 09:03:27 AM
Aji bas itna hi kahuga, khush kar ditta tusi...



You are most welcome !
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«Reply #23 on: March 07, 2009, 04:14:08 PM »
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Quote from: bekarar on March 07, 2009, 09:32:07 AM
bahoot khoob sajid bhai...aur talat ne to mere dil ki baat kah dee

Shukriya Sanjeev Ji
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«Reply #24 on: April 09, 2009, 12:40:12 PM »
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Quote from: bekarar on March 07, 2009, 09:32:07 AM
bahoot khoob sajid bhai...aur talat ne to mere dil ki baat kah dee

Nawazish karam hain Dost.......
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