sheetalta ki aas kyun?

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«Reply #15 on: November 18, 2009, 07:20:46 AM »
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Quote from: cara on October 17, 2009, 03:40:02 PM
KYA BAAT HAI BEKARAR JI.....

JAB JAANTA  HAI INSAAN KISI KO PURA MUKAMAL JAHAN NAHIN MILTA,
FIR DOOSRON KI KHUSHI DEKH KAR KHUD DUKHI HOTA KYUN,
KYA KABHI AESE SOCH TA HAI,JO MUJHE HAI WO KISI AUR KO HAI NAHIN KYUN.

padhne ke liye shukriya cara ji.......aapne bhi khoob likha hai
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«Reply #16 on: November 18, 2009, 07:24:59 AM »
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Quote from: Rishi Agarwal on October 17, 2009, 10:01:52 PM
Nice and excellent sanjeev ji...... aapki ye kavita dil ko chu gai h bahut hi acche sabdo me sawara h aapne isse  Applause Applause Applause

bahoot shukriya chote miyan
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«Reply #17 on: November 18, 2009, 07:31:33 AM »
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Quote from: bekarar on October 16, 2009, 09:18:18 PM
tapti hui dupahri me varsha ka kayas kyun,
ushnata hi bhagy hai to sheetalta ki aas kyun,

geru-aa pahan bhi gar ram aur allah hain do,
to lout aao samaj me ye vyarth ka sanyaas kyun,

ek -duje ko dekh-kar, har ek bas ye sochta hai
sabhi hain magan khushi me aur mai nirash kyun,

mera ghar roshni se ho bhale sarabor magar,
bagalwale jhonpade me diye ka prakash kyun,

hue jamane saath me mil-baith ke batiyaye hue
apno ke liye kaho apanatv ka hi naash kyun,

hote hue ko bhoolna aasan hai mushkil nahi,
jo yaad aate hain sada, hote nahi wo paas kyun

sewa to tum kar na sake, ab chup to raho kaput mere
vriddha-vastha ki avadhi ka haas kyun parihaas kyun,



 Applause Applause Applause
Bahut khoob bhaiya...
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«Reply #18 on: November 18, 2009, 10:26:59 AM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on October 17, 2009, 11:05:52 PM
Bahut bahut khoob Bekarar ji dil ko chu gayee ye lines mere ghar roshni se ho saarobar magar bagal wale jhopdee mein prakaas kyun.bahut pasand aayee.marvelous creation.excellent. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause

bahooot shukriya madhu.....tumhe pasand aaya
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«Reply #19 on: November 18, 2009, 10:31:37 AM »
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Very beautiful lines Cara ji,excellent. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #20 on: December 05, 2009, 05:26:13 PM »
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Quote from: bekarar on October 16, 2009, 09:18:18 PM
तपती हुई दुपहरी मे वर्षा का कयास क्यूँ,
उष्णता ही भाग्य है तो शीतलता की आस क्यूँ,

गेरू-आ पहन भी गर राम और अल्लाह हैं दो,
तो लौट आओ समाज मे ये व्यर्थ का सन्यास क्यूँ,

एक -दूजे को देख-कर, हर एक बस ये सोचता है
सभी हैं मगन खुशी मे और में निराश क्यूँ,

मेरा घर रोशनी से हो भले सराबोर मगर,
बगलवाले झोंपडे मे दिए का प्रकाश क्यूँ,

हुए जमाने साथ मे मिल-बैठ के बतियाए हुए
अपनो के लिए कहो अपनत्व का ही नाश क्यूँ,

होते हुए को भूलना आसान है मुश्किल नही,
जो याद आते हैं सदा, होते नही वो पास क्यूँ

सेवा तो तुम कर ना सके, अब चुप तो रहो कपूत मेरे
वृद्धा-वास्ता की अवधि का हास क्यूँ परिहास क्यूँ,


tapti hui dupahri me varsha ka kayas kyun,
ushnata hi bhagy hai to sheetalta ki aas kyun,

geru-aa pahan bhi gar ram aur allah hain do,
to lout aao samaj me ye vyarth ka sanyaas kyun,

ek -duje ko dekh-kar, har ek bas ye sochta hai
sabhi hain magan khushi me aur mai nirash kyun,

mera ghar roshni se ho bhale sarabor magar,
bagalwale jhonpade me diye ka prakash kyun,

hue jamane saath me mil-baith ke batiyaye hue
apno ke liye kaho apanatv ka hi naash kyun,

hote hue ko bhoolna aasan hai mushkil nahi,
jo yaad aate hain sada, hote nahi wo paas kyun

sewa to tum kar na sake, ab chup to raho kaput mere
vriddha-vastha ki avadhi ka haas kyun parihaas kyun,



 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley ek ek shabd kaya kamaal ka piroya hai apne bekarar ji... kamaal@dhamaal.superbbb. bahoot khoob... dil jitna udaas hua shabdo ko parr kar utna he apki lekhani ko itna gahraai mai likhte dekh khush bhi hua,.... her ek line kamaal hai,... magar yah kuch lines to dil ko chu gai hai....

geru-aa pahan bhi gar ram aur allah hain do,
to lout aao samaj me ye vyarth ka sanyaas kyun,

hote hue ko bhoolna aasan hai mushkil nahi,
jo yaad aate hain sada, hote nahi wo paas kyun

sewa to tum kar na sake, ab chup to raho kaput mere
vriddha-vastha ki avadhi ka haas kyun parihaas kyun,
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«Reply #21 on: February 08, 2010, 10:45:30 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on October 20, 2009, 03:01:16 AM

Wah bhaiya wah... bahut bahut khoobsurati se likha hai aapne.

last four lines....... Applause Applause Applause Excellant  Thumbs UP

bahoot bahoot shukriya roja..
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«Reply #22 on: February 08, 2010, 10:50:33 AM »
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Quote from: Prateek Mardia on November 14, 2009, 08:29:28 PM

Sanjeev bhai-aapki kavita padhta hu...to yakeenan yaad aata hai ki mehsoos karna kisey kehte hai.Rozmarra ki jujharu zindgi mein amritatva ka bodh hai aapki kavita.aapki hur pankti pur nazre rukti hai-chehre ke bhaav badal jaate hai..aur hriday ki tarange
hilore maar jaati hi.anupam rachna ke liye dil ke hur hisse se badhai!!

Prateek
is kavita ko apki prashansa ka prtisaad mila.......iska janm sarthak hua....aapne samay diya uske liye dhanywad
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«Reply #23 on: February 08, 2010, 10:53:29 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on December 05, 2009, 05:26:13 PM
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley ek ek shabd kaya kamaal ka piroya hai apne bekarar ji... kamaal@dhamaal.superbbb. bahoot khoob... dil jitna udaas hua shabdo ko parr kar utna he apki lekhani ko itna gahraai mai likhte dekh khush bhi hua,.... her ek line kamaal hai,... magar yah kuch lines to dil ko chu gai hai....

geru-aa pahan bhi gar ram aur allah hain do,
to lout aao samaj me ye vyarth ka sanyaas kyun,

hote hue ko bhoolna aasan hai mushkil nahi,
jo yaad aate hain sada, hote nahi wo paas kyun

sewa to tum kar na sake, ab chup to raho kaput mere
vriddha-vastha ki avadhi ka haas kyun parihaas kyun,



bahoot shukriya pooja ji aapne sada ki tarah housala afzai ki... Usual Smile
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«Reply #24 on: March 03, 2010, 04:24:55 PM »
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Bohot hi khoob Sanjeev Ji, bohot achchi lagi aapki ye Rachna...
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«Reply #25 on: March 08, 2010, 11:05:36 AM »
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वाह वाह बेक़रार जी बहुत अच्छा लिखा है. अति सुन्दर रचना है ये आपकी.
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«Reply #26 on: April 07, 2010, 02:42:37 AM »
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Quote from: @kaash on February 09, 2010, 12:26:36 PM
waah bahut khoob Sanjeev ji
bahut khoob likha hai  Applause Applause Applause Applause
kaash ji,
is rachna ko aapki prashnsa ke shabd mile...rachna sarthak hui..shukriya housala badhane ka

Quote from: Celmira on March 03, 2010, 04:24:55 PM
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Bohot hi khoob Sanjeev Ji, bohot achchi lagi aapki ye Rachna...
aapki housala afzai ka bahoot shukriya talat
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वाह वाह बेक़रार जी बहुत अच्छा लिखा है. अति सुन्दर रचना है ये आपकी.

bahoot bahoot shukriya riyaz sahab
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«Reply #27 on: April 07, 2010, 08:59:40 AM »
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Quote from: bekarar on October 16, 2009, 09:18:18 PM
तपती हुई दुपहरी मे वर्षा का कयास क्यूँ,
उष्णता ही भाग्य है तो शीतलता की आस क्यूँ,

गेरू-आ पहन भी गर राम और अल्लाह हैं दो,
तो लौट आओ समाज मे ये व्यर्थ का सन्यास क्यूँ,

एक -दूजे को देख-कर, हर एक बस ये सोचता है
सभी हैं मगन खुशी मे और में निराश क्यूँ,

मेरा घर रोशनी से हो भले सराबोर मगर,
बगलवाले झोंपडे मे दिए का प्रकाश क्यूँ,

हुए जमाने साथ मे मिल-बैठ के बतियाए हुए
अपनो के लिए कहो अपनत्व का ही नाश क्यूँ,

होते हुए को भूलना आसान है मुश्किल नही,
जो याद आते हैं सदा, होते नही वो पास क्यूँ

सेवा तो तुम कर ना सके, अब चुप तो रहो कपूत मेरे
वृद्धा-वास्ता की अवधि का हास क्यूँ परिहास क्यूँ,


tapti hui dupahri me varsha ka kayas kyun,
ushnata hi bhagy hai to sheetalta ki aas kyun,

geru-aa pahan bhi gar ram aur allah hain do,
to lout aao samaj me ye vyarth ka sanyaas kyun,

ek -duje ko dekh-kar, har ek bas ye sochta hai
sabhi hain magan khushi me aur mai nirash kyun,

mera ghar roshni se ho bhale sarabor magar,
bagalwale jhonpade me diye ka prakash kyun,

hue jamane saath me mil-baith ke batiyaye hue
apno ke liye kaho apanatv ka hi naash kyun,

hote hue ko bhoolna aasan hai mushkil nahi,
jo yaad aate hain sada, hote nahi wo paas kyun

sewa to tum kar na sake, ab chup to raho kaput mere
vriddha-vastha ki avadhi ka haas kyun parihaas kyun,



Very nice one indeed Bekarar Ji
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«Reply #28 on: April 19, 2010, 05:09:20 PM »
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bahut khoobsurat likha hai aapne bekarar ji... bahut pyaari kavita hai...!!!
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«Reply #29 on: May 02, 2011, 10:15:52 AM »
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Quote from: bekarar on October 16, 2009, 09:18:18 PM
तपती हुई दुपहरी मे वर्षा का कयास क्यूँ,
उष्णता ही भाग्य है तो शीतलता की आस क्यूँ,

गेरू-आ पहन भी गर राम और अल्लाह हैं दो,
तो लौट आओ समाज मे ये व्यर्थ का सन्यास क्यूँ,

एक -दूजे को देख-कर, हर एक बस ये सोचता है
सभी हैं मगन खुशी मे और में निराश क्यूँ,

मेरा घर रोशनी से हो भले सराबोर मगर,
बगलवाले झोंपडे मे दिए का प्रकाश क्यूँ,

हुए जमाने साथ मे मिल-बैठ के बतियाए हुए
अपनो के लिए कहो अपनत्व का ही नाश क्यूँ,

होते हुए को भूलना आसान है मुश्किल नही,
जो याद आते हैं सदा, होते नही वो पास क्यूँ

सेवा तो तुम कर ना सके, अब चुप तो रहो कपूत मेरे
वृद्धा-वास्ता की अवधि का हास क्यूँ परिहास क्यूँ,


tapti hui dupahri me varsha ka kayas kyun,
ushnata hi bhagy hai to sheetalta ki aas kyun,

geru-aa pahan bhi gar ram aur allah hain do,
to lout aao samaj me ye vyarth ka sanyaas kyun,

ek -duje ko dekh-kar, har ek bas ye sochta hai
sabhi hain magan khushi me aur mai nirash kyun,

mera ghar roshni se ho bhale sarabor magar,
bagalwale jhonpade me diye ka prakash kyun,

hue jamane saath me mil-baith ke batiyaye hue
apno ke liye kaho apanatv ka hi naash kyun,

hote hue ko bhoolna aasan hai mushkil nahi,
jo yaad aate hain sada, hote nahi wo paas kyun

sewa to tum kar na sake, ab chup to raho kaput mere
vriddha-vastha ki avadhi ka haas kyun parihaas kyun,


bekarar sb. iss tanz ko jis bhi mayaar pe rakein kam hoga.. bahut umda bayaani ka mozahera . aur khoosurti se lafzo ka intekhab kiya aapne. kisi bhi daad ka mohtaaj nahin . aur aakhri line to hum sab ko gambhirta se lenaa chahiye. maa-baap ki khidmat ke hawwle se. bahut khoob
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