SHEHAR KE HALAAT.........(GHAYEL)

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Kaise yeh aaj shehar ke mere halaat ho gaye
Jinhe sharminda hu main poochte hue woh sawalat ho gaye

Bikti hain mohabbat yaha har mod har gali
Kuch is darja saste yaha jazbaat ho gaye

Haste hain maa baap par woh itne zaheen hain
Beto ke is kadar aala khayalat ho gaye

Ab woh kaha kisi ki pakad me hain dosto
Kanoon se bhi lambe uske hath ho gaye

Ghayel na jagao inhe tum kehke shayri
Yeh woh bach_che hain jo bhookhe aaj raat so gaye

                                -Sajid Ghayel-
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«Reply #1 on: November 19, 2008, 07:07:28 AM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on November 19, 2008, 06:47:38 AM
Kaise yeh aaj shehar ke mere halaat ho gaye
Jinhe sharminda hu main poochte hue woh sawalat ho gaye

Bikti hain mohabbat yaha har mod har gali
Kuch is darja saste yaha jazbaat ho gaye

Haste hain maa baap par woh itne zaheen hain
Beto ke is kadar aala khayalat ho gaye

Ab woh kaha kisi ki pakad me hain dosto
Kanoon se bhi lambe uske hath ho gaye

Ghayel na jagao inhe tum kehke shayri
Yeh woh bach_che hain jo bhookhe aaj raat so gaye

                                -Sajid Ghayel-

bahoot khoob likha hai...sajid ...aur akhiri sher to....kamaal hai.....

tanha raha mai, jab kahta raha insaaniyat ki baat,
deen-o-dharam pe bola to sab saath ho gaye
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«Reply #2 on: November 19, 2008, 07:11:50 AM »
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Quote from: bekarar on November 19, 2008, 07:07:28 AM
bahoot khoob likha hai...sajid ...aur akhiri sher to....kamaal hai.....

tanha raha mai, jab kahta raha insaaniyat ki baat,
deen-o-dharam pe bola to sab saath ho gaye
Yaar tumne kitna bhari sher keh diya hain tumhe khud andaza nahi hain is sher ko hamesha sambhal ke rakhna ye 2 line anmol hain
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«Reply #3 on: November 19, 2008, 07:31:29 AM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on November 19, 2008, 07:11:50 AM
Yaar tumne kitna bhari sher keh diya hain tumhe khud andaza nahi hain is sher ko hamesha sambhal ke rakhna ye 2 line anmol hain

itni ijjat-afzai meri sehat ke liye thik nahi hai yaar...
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«Reply #4 on: November 19, 2008, 08:25:35 AM »
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 Applause  Applause bahut khoob sajid ji

Bhook abhi uske darwaje per khadi hai
Amir-e-shahar hai lekin lalarch kam nahi hoti...

Izzat se kamyi huwi roti agar sukhhi bhi ho
To uss ki lazzat kam nahi hoti.......
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«Reply #5 on: November 19, 2008, 08:31:59 AM »
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Wah peera jee bohat khoobsurat jawab diya aapne "to uss ki lazzat kam nahi hoti" maza aa gaya   Clapping Smiley. Tareef ke liye bohat shukriya.
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«Reply #6 on: November 19, 2008, 08:51:11 AM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on November 19, 2008, 06:47:38 AM
Kaise yeh aaj shehar ke mere halaat ho gaye
Jinhe sharminda hu main poochte hue woh sawalat ho gaye

Bikti hain mohabbat yaha har mod har gali
Kuch is darja saste yaha jazbaat ho gaye

Haste hain maa baap par woh itne zaheen hain
Beto ke is kadar aala khayalat ho gaye

Ab woh kaha kisi ki pakad me hain dosto
Kanoon se bhi lambe uske hath ho gaye

Ghayel na jagao inhe tum kehke shayri
Yeh woh bach_che hain jo bhookhe aaj raat so gaye

                                -Sajid Ghayel-

Waah... Ek ek sheir par sau sau "Waah"
Bahut bahut khoob... Sajid Ji..




"Kuch is khoobsoorti se piroyi sachhai, Moti jaise khaayaalon mein..
Lafz aapki Kalam ko chhu kar, Anmol heere aur jawhaaraat ho gaye.."
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«Reply #7 on: November 19, 2008, 08:54:20 AM »
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Quote from: bekarar on November 19, 2008, 07:07:28 AM
bahoot khoob likha hai...sajid ...aur akhiri sher to....kamaal hai.....

tanha raha mai, jab kahta raha insaaniyat ki baat,
deen-o-dharam pe bola to sab saath ho gaye

Kya baat hai... Applause Applause

Itni seedhi, sachhi aur badi baat aur itne kam magar khoobsurat shabd!!!
Sanjeev ji.. Kabhi humko bhi seekhaaiyega apna yeh hunar..
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«Reply #8 on: November 19, 2008, 08:55:32 AM »
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Quote from: peera4u on November 19, 2008, 08:25:35 AM


 Applause  Applause bahut khoob sajid ji

Bhook abhi uske darwaje per khadi hai
Amir-e-shahar hai lekin lalarch kam nahi hoti...

Izzat se kamyi huwi roti agar sukhhi bhi ho
To uss ki lazzat kam nahi hoti.......


Bahut khoob kaha aapne bhi Peera Ji..
Aur bahut sach kaha... Thumbs UP
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«Reply #9 on: November 19, 2008, 09:26:18 AM »
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Quote from: Mahiya on November 19, 2008, 08:51:11 AM
Waah... Ek ek sheir par sau sau "Waah"
Bahut bahut khoob... Sajid Ji..

"Kuch is khoobsoorti se piroyi sachhai, Moti jaise khaayaalon mein..
Lafz aapki Kalam ko chhu kar, Anmol heere aur jawhaaraat ho gaye.."
Itni izzat dene ke liye bohat shukriya mahi aur bohat khoobsurat sher kaha hai tumne khushi se aakhe chalak padi  Crying
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«Reply #10 on: November 19, 2008, 12:38:17 PM »
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bahut khoob sajid ji bahut hi aache



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«Reply #11 on: November 19, 2008, 12:40:25 PM »
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Quote from: baadal102 on November 19, 2008, 12:38:17 PM
bahut khoob sajid ji bahut hi aache

Baadal
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«Reply #12 on: November 21, 2008, 05:06:59 AM »
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nice sharing
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«Reply #13 on: November 21, 2008, 05:24:20 AM »
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Quote from: Mahiya on November 19, 2008, 08:54:20 AM
Kya baat hai... Applause Applause

Itni seedhi, sachhi aur badi baat aur itne kam magar khoobsurat shabd!!!
Sanjeev ji.. Kabhi humko bhi seekhaaiyega apna yeh hunar..
lo jee kar lo baat ab diye ko kaha jaa raha hai ki suraj ko roshni dikhaye...
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«Reply #14 on: November 21, 2008, 07:37:01 AM »
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acha likha aapne Applause
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