SHEHAR KE HALAAT.........(GHAYEL)

by sajid_ghayel on November 19, 2008, 06:47:38 AM
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«Reply #15 on: November 21, 2008, 08:21:44 AM »
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Kafi behtreen ghazal likhi hai
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«Reply #16 on: November 21, 2008, 09:07:17 AM »
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Thank you Taheer and Hussain
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«Reply #17 on: November 26, 2008, 05:23:28 AM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on November 19, 2008, 06:47:38 AM
Kaise yeh aaj shehar ke mere halaat ho gaye
Jinhe sharminda hu main poochte hue woh sawalat ho gaye

Bikti hain mohabbat yaha har mod har gali
Kuch is darja saste yaha jazbaat ho gaye

Haste hain maa baap par woh itne zaheen hain
Beto ke is kadar aala khayalat ho gaye

Ab woh kaha kisi ki pakad me hain dosto
Kanoon se bhi lambe uske hath ho gaye

Ghayel na jagao inhe tum kehke shayri
Yeh woh bach_che hain jo bhookhe aaj raat so gaye

                                -Sajid Ghayel-

wah wah wah kaya baat hai SG
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«Reply #18 on: November 26, 2008, 05:25:48 AM »
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Quote from: bekarar on November 19, 2008, 07:07:28 AM
bahoot khoob likha hai...sajid ...aur akhiri sher to....kamaal hai.....

tanha raha mai, jab kahta raha insaaniyat ki baat,
deen-o-dharam pe bola to sab saath ho gaye

wah kaya baat hai.. so line main bahoot kuch kah gaye app Bekarar ji
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«Reply #19 on: November 26, 2008, 05:26:20 AM »
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Quote from: peera4u on November 19, 2008, 08:25:35 AM


 Applause  Applause bahut khoob sajid ji

Bhook abhi uske darwaje per khadi hai
Amir-e-shahar hai lekin lalarch kam nahi hoti...

Izzat se kamyi huwi roti agar sukhhi bhi ho
To uss ki lazzat kam nahi hoti.......


bahoot khoob Peera
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«Reply #20 on: November 26, 2008, 08:54:21 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on November 26, 2008, 05:23:28 AM
wah wah wah kaya baat hai SG
Bohat shukriya pooja
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«Reply #21 on: January 27, 2009, 09:59:33 PM »
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Waah Waah Waah, Kya Baat Hai Bhai Subhan Allah,.
Sorry Bhai, Zara Dair Se Inpar Nazar Daali,.

Magar Jab Pardha Pardhta Hi REh Gaya,.
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«Reply #22 on: January 28, 2009, 03:55:39 AM »
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Wah Wah kya kahoon ghayel ghazal ke maqte per ahh nikal gayi aur us ahh ne itni tareef ki ghazal ki ke tassavor bhi nahi k arsakoge tum !! Allah tumhe khush rakhe mere bhai !!

Teri is shayari ki sifath ke kya kahene ghayel !!
Jitne bhi tere dushman the sub yaar ho gaye !!

Qadeer Toopchi
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«Reply #23 on: January 28, 2009, 07:23:13 AM »
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Quote from: Jaanasheen on January 27, 2009, 09:59:33 PM
Waah Waah Waah, Kya Baat Hai Bhai Subhan Allah,.
Sorry Bhai, Zara Dair Se Inpar Nazar Daali,.

Magar Jab Pardha Pardhta Hi REh Gaya,.

Bohat shukriyaa Chote tumhari nazre inayat hui isse badhke mere kalaam ke liye aur kya hoga

Quote from: abdulqadeer on January 28, 2009, 03:55:39 AM
Wah Wah kya kahoon ghayel ghazal ke maqte per ahh nikal gayi aur us ahh ne itni tareef ki ghazal ki ke tassavor bhi nahi k arsakoge tum !! Allah tumhe khush rakhe mere bhai !!

Teri is shayari ki sifath ke kya kahene ghayel !!
Jitne bhi tere dushman the sub yaar ho gaye !!

Qadeer Toopchi

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khuda ki aisa lagta hain mehnat ki mazdoori mil gayee. Bohat khoobsurat sher

kaha hain tumne khuda kare tumhara kaha sach ho aur Ghayel ke sab dost

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