Sirf Alvida Keh Dene Se Koi Shaks Door Nahi Ho Jaata.....

by khwaish on February 23, 2009, 06:33:13 PM
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Akalmand Log Hi Yahan Deewane Nikle,
Andhiyaara Jhootlaane Nikle...

Aaajkal Sach Ki Koi Kadar Nahi,
Jhoot Kehne Wale Hi Syaane Nikle...

Kal Tak Woh Iss Mehfil Ki Tareef Kiye Thakte Nahi The,
Aaj Wohi Issi Mehfil Par Tohmate Lagane Nikle....

Rootha Hai Woh Shaks Kuch Iss Kadar,
Ke Saare Log Usse Manane Nikle....

Sirf Alwida Keh Dene Se Koi Shaks Door Nahi Ho Jaata,
Hum Bhi Ab Yeh Sabko, Samjhaane Nikle...

Dard Ki Aah Ka Andaaz To Naya Tha,
Par Zakhm To Wahi Puraane Nikle....

Shikayte Khud Ke Dil mein Hazaar Pal Rahe hai Par,
Aaj Wahi Sabhi Se Gile-Shikwe Mitaane Nikle....

"KHWAISH" Ne Keh Di Woh Baat Jo uske Dil mein Thi,
Koi Gham Nahi Agar Log Jag Hasaane Nikle...

          ~~~~~KHWAISH~~~~~
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«Reply #1 on: February 23, 2009, 06:38:13 PM »
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Kya zabardast peshkash hai Khwaish aap ki !! Ek ek lafz haqeeqat se bhara hua.... !

Aap ki shayari main yahi khaas baat hai ki Zindagi ka Aaeena hoti hain wo !!!!

Bohot Khoob !!!
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«Reply #2 on: February 23, 2009, 06:51:32 PM »
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wah bahut khoob khwaish, bahut hi badiya andaaz meh aap neh kaha hai... very nice


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«Reply #3 on: February 23, 2009, 06:52:20 PM »
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good one.. Applause Applause Applause

Is yug mai sone se pital aage nikla
Rakshak he yahan per bhashak nikla
Phoolon ki aad mai chhupa khanjar nikla
Jis per bharosa tha wahi bhediya nikla
Quote from: khwaish on February 23, 2009, 06:33:13 PM
Akalmand Log Hi Yahan Deewane Nikle,
Andhiyaara Jhootlaane Nikle...

Aaajkal Sach Ki Koi Kadar Nahi,
Jhoot Kehne Wale Hi Syaane Nikle...

Kal Tak Woh Iss Mehfil Ki Tareef Kiye Thakte Nahi The,
Aaj Wohi Issi Mehfil Par Tohmate Lagane Nikle....

Rootha Hai Woh Shaks Kuch Iss Kadar,
Ke Saare Log Usse Manane Nikle....

Sirf Alwida Keh Dene Se Koi Door Nahi Ho Jaata,
Hum Bhi Ab Yeh Sabko, Samjhaane Nikle...

Dard Ki Aah Ka Andaaz To Naya Tha,
Par Zakhm To Wahi Puraane Nikle....

Shikayte Khud Ke Dil mein Hazaar Pal Rahe hai Par,
Aaj Wahi Sabhi Se Gile-Shikwe Mitaane Nikle....

"KHWAISH" Ne Keh Di Woh Baat Jo uske Dil mein Thi,
Koi Gham Nahi Agar Log Jag Hasaane Nikle...
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«Reply #4 on: February 23, 2009, 07:00:11 PM »
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gud...
maza aagaya...........
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«Reply #5 on: February 23, 2009, 07:41:27 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on February 23, 2009, 06:33:13 PM
Akalmand Log Hi Yahan Deewane Nikle,
Andhiyaara Jhootlaane Nikle...

Aaajkal Sach Ki Koi Kadar Nahi,
Jhoot Kehne Wale Hi Syaane Nikle...

Kal Tak Woh Iss Mehfil Ki Tareef Kiye Thakte Nahi The,
Aaj Wohi Issi Mehfil Par Tohmate Lagane Nikle....

Rootha Hai Woh Shaks Kuch Iss Kadar,
Ke Saare Log Usse Manane Nikle....

Sirf Alwida Keh Dene Se Koi Shaks Door Nahi Ho Jaata,
Hum Bhi Ab Yeh Sabko, Samjhaane Nikle...

Dard Ki Aah Ka Andaaz To Naya Tha,
Par Zakhm To Wahi Puraane Nikle....

Shikayte Khud Ke Dil mein Hazaar Pal Rahe hai Par,
Aaj Wahi Sabhi Se Gile-Shikwe Mitaane Nikle....

"KHWAISH" Ne Keh Di Woh Baat Jo uske Dil mein Thi,
Koi Gham Nahi Agar Log Jag Hasaane Nikle...

          ~~~~~KHWAISH~~~~~
Applause Applause wah wah wah wah...bahaut sahi kaha hai apne Khwahish jee...
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«Reply #6 on: February 23, 2009, 09:45:12 PM »
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Ek koshish humari taraf se is thread main....


Hum bhi kitne deewaane nikle,
Diye se andhera mitaane nikle

Ghum-e-dil pe humare jo hansa karte hain
Hum un ko hi haal-e-dil sunaane nikle

Kaghazi phoolon pe aati nahin baharain,
Ye jaan ke bhi gulshan sajaane nikle

Dunya main bikti hain jhooti kahaniyan,
Sachche afsaane sab hum jalaane nikle

Log baithe hain bhar ke mutthi main namak,
Jaane kya soch, hum zakhm dikhaane nikle
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«Reply #7 on: February 23, 2009, 10:35:48 PM »
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GUd one khwaish jee................
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«Reply #8 on: February 24, 2009, 02:23:54 AM »
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Bahut khoob Khwaish ji ... Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: February 24, 2009, 05:58:37 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on February 23, 2009, 06:38:13 PM
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Kya zabardast peshkash hai Khwaish aap ki !! Ek ek lafz haqeeqat se bhara hua.... !

Aap ki shayari main yahi khaas baat hai ki Zindagi ka Aaeena hoti hain wo !!!!

Bohot Khoob !!!

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Talat..Aapne Iss Nazm Ko Padha Aur Samjha,Yeh Jaankar Bahut Khushi Hui..Teh Dil Se Aapka Shukriya Dost.. icon_salut
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«Reply #10 on: February 24, 2009, 06:43:58 AM »
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Bahoot bahoot khoob Khwaish ji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #11 on: February 24, 2009, 06:44:46 AM »
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Bahoot accha sath likha hai Talat sis Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #12 on: February 24, 2009, 08:26:31 AM »
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Subhan Allah, Subhan Allah, Khwaaish Bhaiya, Bohat Bohat Achcha LIkha Hai Aapne,,.
Ek Ek Ashaar Lajawaab Hain,.

Yunhi LIkhte Rahein,.
May Allah Bless You,.
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«Reply #13 on: February 24, 2009, 08:33:44 AM »
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bahooooooooooooooooot hi khooooooooooooooob bahoot sunder likh hai khwahish bro padh kar dil baag- baag ho gaya......likhte raho yun hi aur hum padhte jayen...
fir se bahoot hi achha....
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is thread par tumhaari kalam ne bhi behad umda likha hai...har sher lajawab har sher anutha...bahoot hi khoob Applause Applause Applause Applause
wah wah wah wah Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #14 on: February 24, 2009, 11:16:36 AM »
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Quote from: salma786 on February 24, 2009, 06:44:46 AM
Bahoot accha sath likha hai Talat sis Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Thanks Salma dear

Quote from: bekarar on February 24, 2009, 08:33:44 AM
Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
bahooooooooooooooooot hi khooooooooooooooob bahoot sunder likh hai khwahish bro padh kar dil baag- baag ho gaya......likhte raho yun hi aur hum padhte jayen...
fir se bahoot hi achha....
Talat
is thread par tumhaari kalam ne bhi behad umda likha hai...har sher lajawab har sher anutha...bahoot hi khoob Applause Applause Applause Applause
wah wah wah wah Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Shukriya Sanjeev Ji ...aapne in asha'ar ki gehraayi ko samjha, saraha...Tah-e-dil se aapka shukriya Usual Smile
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