Sirf Alvida Keh Dene Se Koi Shaks Door Nahi Ho Jaata.....

by khwaish on February 23, 2009, 06:33:13 PM
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«Reply #15 on: February 24, 2009, 07:00:26 PM »
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Quote from: jasbirsingh on February 23, 2009, 06:51:32 PM
wah bahut khoob khwaish, bahut hi badiya andaaz meh aap neh kaha hai... very nice


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Thankyou So Much Jasbir Paaji..it's Always nice to hear from you..
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«Reply #16 on: February 24, 2009, 07:02:25 PM »
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Quote from: smardia on February 23, 2009, 06:52:20 PM
good one.. Applause Applause Applause

Is yug mai sone se pital aage nikla
Rakshak he yahan per bhashak nikla
Phoolon ki aad mai chhupa khanjar nikla
Jis per bharosa tha wahi bhediya nikla

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Smardia ji..

Aur aapne bhi khoob likha.. Applause Applause
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«Reply #17 on: February 24, 2009, 07:04:03 PM »
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Quote from: pandit on February 23, 2009, 07:00:11 PM
gud...
maza aagaya...........

Aapko Mazaa Aa Gaya Pandit Ji..Yeh Suunkar,Hume Bhi Mazaa Aa Gaya.. Usual Smile Bahut Bahut Shukriya..
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«Reply #18 on: February 24, 2009, 07:05:34 PM »
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Quote from: dead heart on February 23, 2009, 07:41:27 PM
Applause Applause wah wah wah wah...bahaut sahi kaha hai apne Khwahish jee...


Teh Dil Se Shukriya Aapka D.Heart Ji..
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«Reply #19 on: February 24, 2009, 07:07:58 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on February 23, 2009, 09:45:12 PM
Ek koshish humari taraf se is thread main....


Hum bhi kitne deewaane nikle,
Diye se andhera mitaane nikle

Ghum-e-dil pe humare jo hansa karte hain
Hum un ko hi haal-e-dil sunaane nikle

Kaghazi phoolon pe aati nahin baharain,
Ye jaan ke bhi gulshan sajaane nikle

Dunya main bikti hain jhooti kahaniyan,
Sachche afsaane sab hum jalaane nikle

Log baithe hain bhar ke mutthi main namak,
Jaane kya soch, hum zakhm dikhaane nikle


Bahut Bahut Bahut khoob talat..aapne Jazbaaton se bhari Nazm Lkhi Hai Talat..Agar Feelings se padhi jaaye to har ek Alfaaz Kuch kehta hai..Bahut Khoob Dost!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #20 on: February 25, 2009, 10:14:19 AM »
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Bilkul durust. Bahut ache.
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«Reply #21 on: February 25, 2009, 02:36:31 PM »
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Quote from: pandit on February 23, 2009, 10:35:48 PM
GUd one khwaish jee................

Thankyou Pandit ji..
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«Reply #22 on: February 25, 2009, 02:37:26 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on February 24, 2009, 02:23:54 AM
Bahut khoob Khwaish ji ... Applause Applause

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Roja...
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«Reply #23 on: February 25, 2009, 02:38:30 PM »
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Quote from: salma786 on February 24, 2009, 06:43:58 AM
Bahoot bahoot khoob Khwaish ji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Teh Dil Se Shukriya Aapka Salma..
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«Reply #24 on: February 25, 2009, 02:39:27 PM »
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Quote from: @kaash on February 24, 2009, 07:45:26 AM

behad acha likha hai aapne Khwaish ji... Applause Applause

bahot achi composition...   Clapping Smiley

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Kaash Ji..
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«Reply #25 on: February 25, 2009, 03:11:13 PM »
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Quote from: Jaanasheen on February 24, 2009, 08:26:31 AM
Subhan Allah, Subhan Allah, Khwaaish Bhaiya, Bohat Bohat Achcha LIkha Hai Aapne,,.
Ek Ek Ashaar Lajawaab Hain,.

Yunhi LIkhte Rahein,.
May Allah Bless You,.

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Azeem Bro..Aap Yuhi Saath Dete Rahiyega ,Hum Likhte Hi Jaayenge..Shukriya
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«Reply #26 on: February 25, 2009, 03:27:24 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on February 23, 2009, 09:45:12 PM
Ek koshish humari taraf se is thread main....


Hum bhi kitne deewaane nikle,
Diye se andhera mitaane nikle

Ghum-e-dil pe humare jo hansa karte hain
Hum un ko hi haal-e-dil sunaane nikle

Kaghazi phoolon pe aati nahin baharain,
Ye jaan ke bhi gulshan sajaane nikle

Dunya main bikti hain jhooti kahaniyan,
Sachche afsaane sab hum jalaane nikle

Log baithe hain bhar ke mutthi main namak,
Jaane kya soch, hum zakhm dikhaane nikle


Wonderful dear Celmira  Applause
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«Reply #27 on: February 26, 2009, 04:57:33 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause wah wah Talat jee wah....kamal ka likha hai apne especially the last two lines...marvellous...
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«Reply #28 on: February 26, 2009, 07:30:23 PM »
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Quote from: bekarar on February 24, 2009, 08:33:44 AM
Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
bahooooooooooooooooot hi khooooooooooooooob bahoot sunder likh hai khwahish bro padh kar dil baag- baag ho gaya......likhte raho yun hi aur hum padhte jayen...
fir se bahoot hi achha....
Talat
is thread par tumhaari kalam ne bhi behad umda likha hai...har sher lajawab har sher anutha...bahoot hi khoob Applause Applause Applause Applause
wah wah wah wah Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Sanjeev Bro..Aapne Iss Nazm Ko Pasand Kiya,Aur Hume Kya Chahiye..Teh Dil Se Shukriya!!!
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