Taish- BHAARAT BHRAMAN...!!

by ghayal_shayar on May 28, 2013, 03:40:01 PM
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ek baar phir mehfil ko Taish ka aadaab.aaj main phir se bahut dino baad social issues pe ek kavita lekar hazir hua hoon.pehle main kuch logon se maafi mangna chahunga jinhone mujhe mana kiya tha ise publicly post karne se.kyunki naa jane kyun main khud ko rok na saka.aaj ise post kar hi raha hoon.umeed hai ki ye bahut sare logon ko bura lagega,par plz main koi bhi controversies nahi chahta kyunki ye meri nizi rai hai.bas itna hi anurodh hai aap sabhi se mera ki jise pasand aaye reply kare na aaye na kare kyunki plz i dont want ne controversies...



Aaj desh ki pragati dekhne nikla main,
To mujhe yaad dangon ki aayi.
Poora desh ghooma main,
Tab saje-dhaje nange pade dikhayi.

MandiroN me pahuncha main jab,
To kesari vastron me aaye swami.
PDekh kar unke jaghanya kritya,
Muh se nikla sambodhan bas, harami.

Bachhon se jab mila main,
To unhe ek baar khane ko,rote dekha.
Jab aur aage badha to,
Sethon ko makhmal par sote dekha.

Wridhon se jab milne pahuncha,
Unhe gharon me nahi aashram me dekha.
Bete bahoo.oN ko maa-baap,
Marr chuke,doston se kehte dekha.

Phir striyon ki oor rukh kiya,
To maine bahut bada chamatkar hote dekha.
Jahan pooja jata tha striyon ko,
Wahin par maine unka balatkar hote dekha.

Kya yahi pragati ki hai humne,
Aazadi ke sarsath saalon meN.
Yahi shaan kamayi hai humne,
Jo dikhti hai,sharm se jhuke bhaalon* meN...

*sar
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«Reply #1 on: May 28, 2013, 04:00:29 PM »
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Taish Jee Aadaab...!



Waqai tesh hai akrosh hai aapki kavita meiN... aur saNvednaye hai desh ki halat ko samjhne ki haqkheekhat ko parakhne ki...

MaiN zyaada kuch nahi kahuNga... par haaN yehi satya hai is par mera salaam kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... aur janab har writer ko apni rai khulkar likhne ka haq hai so don't worry...

Meri daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...
Likhate rahiye... bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #2 on: May 28, 2013, 04:57:05 PM »
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Quote from: Taish on May 28, 2013, 03:40:01 PM
ek baar phir mehfil ko Taish ka aadaab.aaj main phir se bahut dino baad social issues pe ek kavita lekar hazir hua hoon.pehle main kuch logon se maafi mangna chahunga jinhone mujhe mana kiya tha ise publicly post karne se.kyunki naa jane kyun main khud ko rok na saka.aaj ise post kar hi raha hoon.umeed hai ki ye bahut sare logon ko bura lagega,par plz main koi bhi controversies nahi chahta kyunki ye meri nizi rai hai.bas itna hi anurodh hai aap sabhi se mera ki jise pasand aaye reply kare na aaye na kare kyunki plz i dont want ne controversies...



Aaj desh ki pragati dekhne nikla main,
To mujhe yaad dangon ki aayi.
Poora desh ghooma main,
Tab saje-dhaje nange pade dikhayi.

MandiroN me pahuncha main jab,
To kesari vastron me aaye swami.
PDekh kar unke jaghanya kritya,
Muh se nikla sambodhan bas, harami.

Bachhon se jab mila main,
To unhe ek baar khane ko,rote dekha.
Jab aur aage badha to,
Sethon ko makhmal par sote dekha.

Wridhon se jab milne pahuncha,
Unhe gharon me nahi aashram me dekha.
Bete bahoo.oN ko maa-baap,
Marr chuke,doston se kehte dekha.

Phir striyon ki oor rukh kiya,
To maine bahut bada chamatkar hote dekha.
Jahan pooja jata tha striyon ko,
Wahin par maine unka balatkar hote dekha.

Kya yahi pragati ki hai humne,
Aazadi ke sarsath saalon meN.
Yahi shaan kamayi hai humne,
Jo dikhti hai,sharm se jhuke bhaalon* meN...

*sar


Sabse Pehle Taish Ji...Sachai Ko Lafzon Mein Likhna Kabhi bhi Asaan Nahi Hota..Aapne bakhoobi Duniya Ki Jhooti Rasm-o-Riwaaz Ko,Zindagi Ki Kadwi Sachai Ko Lafz Diye..Isliye Aapko Meri Taraf Se Dilli Daad..Bahut Bahut Khoooooooooob

Aur Taish Ji Maine Aaj Tak Bahut kavitayen Society Ke Jhoote Rasm-o-Riwaaz Par likhe hai..Yeh Humara As a Writer Haq Bhi Hai Aur Zimmedari Bhi Ke Hum Inn cheezon Par Roshni daale Jo Aaj zaroori Hai Balki Mujhe Kayi Baar Afsos Hota Hai Ke bahut Acche Poets Inn Topics Par Nahi LIKHTE..Ek Writer Ke Liye Safe-Sided Rehna,Yaa Phir Sirf Waheen Topics Par Humesha Likhna Jo Asaan Ho..Mujhe Samaj nahi Aata..Aapki Iss Peshkash Par Phir Se Dilli Daad.. Bahut Bahut Khoob Taish Ji..
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«Reply #3 on: May 28, 2013, 06:04:58 PM »
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dil ko chhoo gai aapko bahut bahut mubarakbaad
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«Reply #4 on: May 28, 2013, 06:30:08 PM »
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Apne jo bhi likha hai bilkul sahi hai.. Real poet wahi hai jo samaj ko sahi aina dikhaye.
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«Reply #5 on: May 28, 2013, 06:56:43 PM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on May 28, 2013, 04:00:29 PM

Taish Jee Aadaab...!



Waqai tesh hai akrosh hai aapki kavita meiN... aur saNvednaye hai desh ki halat ko samjhne ki haqkheekhat ko parakhne ki...

MaiN zyaada kuch nahi kahuNga... par haaN yehi satya hai is par mera salaam kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... aur janab har writer ko apni rai khulkar likhne ka haq hai so don't worry...

Meri daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...
Likhate rahiye... bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile


bas itna hi kahuNga ki shukriya bhai jaan meri baat ko samajhne ke liye...
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«Reply #6 on: May 28, 2013, 07:13:23 PM »
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hats off to you taish ji. bahut achchi tarah expressed kiya hai aapne. beshumaar daad...
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«Reply #7 on: May 28, 2013, 07:15:35 PM »
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Quote from: Taish on May 28, 2013, 03:40:01 PM
ek baar phir mehfil ko Taish ka aadaab.aaj main phir se bahut dino baad social issues pe ek kavita lekar hazir hua hoon.pehle main kuch logon se maafi mangna chahunga jinhone mujhe mana kiya tha ise publicly post karne se.kyunki naa jane kyun main khud ko rok na saka.aaj ise post kar hi raha hoon.umeed hai ki ye bahut sare logon ko bura lagega,par plz main koi bhi controversies nahi chahta kyunki ye meri nizi rai hai.bas itna hi anurodh hai aap sabhi se mera ki jise pasand aaye reply kare na aaye na kare kyunki plz i dont want ne controversies...



Aaj desh ki pragati dekhne nikla main,
To mujhe yaad dangon ki aayi.
Poora desh ghooma main,
Tab saje-dhaje nange pade dikhayi.

MandiroN me pahuncha main jab,
To kesari vastron me aaye swami.
PDekh kar unke jaghanya kritya,
Muh se nikla sambodhan bas, harami.

Bachhon se jab mila main,
To unhe ek baar khane ko,rote dekha.
Jab aur aage badha to,
Sethon ko makhmal par sote dekha.

Wridhon se jab milne pahuncha,
Unhe gharon me nahi aashram me dekha.
Bete bahoo.oN ko maa-baap,
Marr chuke,doston se kehte dekha.

Phir striyon ki oor rukh kiya,
To maine bahut bada chamatkar hote dekha.
Jahan pooja jata tha striyon ko,
Wahin par maine unka balatkar hote dekha.

Kya yahi pragati ki hai humne,
Aazadi ke sarsath saalon meN.
Yahi shaan kamayi hai humne,
Jo dikhti hai,sharm se jhuke bhaalon* meN...

*sar

nice satire,sir and a bitter truth
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«Reply #8 on: May 28, 2013, 07:17:55 PM »
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Quote from: Taish on May 28, 2013, 03:40:01 PM

Aaj desh ki pragati dekhne nikla main,
To mujhe yaad dangon ki aayi.
Poora desh ghooma main,
Tab saje-dhaje nange pade dikhayi.

MandiroN me pahuncha main jab,
To kesari vastron me aaye swami.
PDekh kar unke jaghanya kritya,
Muh se nikla sambodhan bas, harami.

Bachhon se jab mila main,
To unhe ek baar khane ko,rote dekha.
Jab aur aage badha to,
Sethon ko makhmal par sote dekha.

Wridhon se jab milne pahuncha,
Unhe gharon me nahi aashram me dekha.
Bete bahoo.oN ko maa-baap,
Marr chuke,doston se kehte dekha.

Phir striyon ki oor rukh kiya,
To maine bahut bada chamatkar hote dekha.
Jahan pooja jata tha striyon ko,
Wahin par maine unka balatkar hote dekha.

Kya yahi pragati ki hai humne,
Aazadi ke sarsath saalon meN.
Yahi shaan kamayi hai humne,
Jo dikhti hai,sharm se jhuke bhaalon* meN...

*sar

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Speechless. Bahut bahut daad
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«Reply #9 on: May 28, 2013, 07:37:36 PM »
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too good.... the real truth...
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«Reply #10 on: May 29, 2013, 01:53:03 AM »
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Quote from: khwahish on May 28, 2013, 04:57:05 PM

Sabse Pehle Taish Ji...Sachai Ko Lafzon Mein Likhna Kabhi bhi Asaan Nahi Hota..Aapne bakhoobi Duniya Ki Jhooti Rasm-o-Riwaaz Ko,Zindagi Ki Kadwi Sachai Ko Lafz Diye..Isliye Aapko Meri Taraf Se Dilli Daad..Bahut Bahut Khoooooooooob

Aur Taish Ji Maine Aaj Tak Bahut kavitayen Society Ke Jhoote Rasm-o-Riwaaz Par likhe hai..Yeh Humara As a Writer Haq Bhi Hai Aur Zimmedari Bhi Ke Hum Inn cheezon Par Roshni daale Jo Aaj zaroori Hai Balki Mujhe Kayi Baar Afsos Hota Hai Ke bahut Acche Poets Inn Topics Par Nahi LIKHTE..Ek Writer Ke Liye Safe-Sided Rehna,Yaa Phir Sirf Waheen Topics Par Humesha Likhna Jo Asaan Ho..Mujhe Samaj nahi Aata..Aapki Iss Peshkash Par Phir Se Dilli Daad.. Bahut Bahut Khoob Taish Ji..

khwaish ji aadaab,

ye jaan kar behad khushi hui ki aap meri baat se sehmat haiN, darasal kuch logoN ne ye kavita sun.ne ke baad iska bahut virodh kiya tha, par fir bhi, maiN aage badha huN, kyunki muje nahiN lagta ab samaaj pe chutki lene se ya sirf bata karne se kuch hoga, shayad ab humare taish me aane ka waqt aa gaya hai.... Bas yuNhi saath dete rahiye aap...!!
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«Reply #11 on: May 29, 2013, 02:11:12 AM »
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Quote from: Taish on May 28, 2013, 03:40:01 PM
ek baar phir mehfil ko Taish ka aadaab.aaj main phir se bahut dino baad social issues pe ek kavita lekar hazir hua hoon.pehle main kuch logon se maafi mangna chahunga jinhone mujhe mana kiya tha ise publicly post karne se.kyunki naa jane kyun main khud ko rok na saka.aaj ise post kar hi raha hoon.umeed hai ki ye bahut sare logon ko bura lagega,par plz main koi bhi controversies nahi chahta kyunki ye meri nizi rai hai.bas itna hi anurodh hai aap sabhi se mera ki jise pasand aaye reply kare na aaye na kare kyunki plz i dont want ne controversies...



Aaj desh ki pragati dekhne nikla main,
To mujhe yaad dangon ki aayi.
Poora desh ghooma main,
Tab saje-dhaje nange pade dikhayi.

MandiroN me pahuncha main jab,
To kesari vastron me aaye swami.
PDekh kar unke jaghanya kritya,
Muh se nikla sambodhan bas, harami.

Bachhon se jab mila main,
To unhe ek baar khane ko,rote dekha.
Jab aur aage badha to,
Sethon ko makhmal par sote dekha.

Wridhon se jab milne pahuncha,
Unhe gharon me nahi aashram me dekha.
Bete bahoo.oN ko maa-baap,
Marr chuke,doston se kehte dekha.

Phir striyon ki oor rukh kiya,
To maine bahut bada chamatkar hote dekha.
Jahan pooja jata tha striyon ko,
Wahin par maine unka balatkar hote dekha.

Kya yahi pragati ki hai humne,
Aazadi ke sarsath saalon meN.
Yahi shaan kamayi hai humne,
Jo dikhti hai,sharm se jhuke bhaalon* meN...

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icon_salut its real true
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«Reply #12 on: May 29, 2013, 04:14:42 AM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on May 28, 2013, 06:04:58 PM
dil ko chhoo gai aapko bahut bahut mubarakbaad

sir ji bahut bahut shukriya.... Usual Smile
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«Reply #13 on: May 29, 2013, 02:50:02 PM »
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Quote from: Saavan on May 28, 2013, 06:30:08 PM
Apne jo bhi likha hai bilkul sahi hai.. Real poet wahi hai jo samaj ko sahi aina dikhaye.

shukriya saavan saaheb, aage bhi yahi kosish jaari rahegi....!!
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«Reply #14 on: May 30, 2013, 02:04:34 AM »
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Quote from: aqsh on May 28, 2013, 07:13:23 PM
hats off to you taish ji. bahut achchi tarah expressed kiya hai aapne. beshumaar daad...

I am deeply moved by the love u gave, aur daad ka shukriya, umeed karta hun ki aage v aapka saath yunhi milta rahegaa...
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