tallukaat to karo bekarar

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musibato se jindagi ki, tallukaat to karo,
dar ke bhago mat ruko, jara inse baat to karo,

manjil tak pahunchne ki, abhi se kya fikar
safar ki housalon ke saath, shuruaat to karo,

in chand-sitaaron gagan pe, tera bhi to haq hai,
nikal ke ghar se, chat pe inse mulaakat to karo,

dar dar ke jeena kasam se, bilkul bemaza hai,
dikhao himmat dar se apne do-do haath to karo,

sahare ke liye har ek ki baanh mat tatolo
apne aapko ko pahle khud hi ke saath to karo


मुसीबतो से जिंदगी की, ताल्लुक़ात तो करो,
डर के भागो मत रूको, ज़रा इनसे बात तो करो,

मंज़िल तक पहुँचने की, अभी से क्या फिकर
सफ़र की हौसलों के साथ, शुरुआत तो करो,

इन चाँद-सितारों गगन पे, तेरा भी तो हक़ है,
निकल के घर से, छत पे इनसे मुलाकात तो करो,

डर डर के जीना कसम से, बिल्कुल बेमज़ा है,
दिखाओ हिम्मत डर से अपने दो-दो हाथ तो करो,

सहारे के लिए हर एक की बाँह मत टटोलो
अपने आपको को पहले खुद ही के साथ तो करो
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«Reply #1 on: January 13, 2011, 06:37:32 PM »
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wah jeena seekha dia aapne.
ab hum taiyaar hai abhi issi waqt 2-2 haath karne ko thand se.
aakhir ye thand bhi musibat hai aur sab darte hain isse.
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«Reply #2 on: January 14, 2011, 06:27:08 AM »
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बहुत अच्छे बेक़रार जी|वाह!!!
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«Reply #3 on: January 14, 2011, 09:17:13 AM »
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wah bekararji... khub likha hai bahut umda bahut sach

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«Reply #4 on: January 14, 2011, 09:27:14 AM »
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Quote from: bekarar on January 13, 2011, 06:18:04 PM
musibato se jindagi ki, tallukaat to karo,
dar ke bhago mat ruko, jara inse baat to karo,

manjil tak pahunchne ki, abhi se kya fikar
safar ki housalon ke saath, shuruaat to karo,

in chand-sitaaron gagan pe, tera bhi to haq hai,
nikal ke ghar se, chat pe inse mulaakat to karo,

dar dar ke jeena kasam se, bilkul bemaza hai,
dikhao himmat dar se apne do-do haath to karo,

sahare ke liye har ek ki baanh mat tatolo
apne aapko ko pahle khud hi ke saath to karo


मुसीबतो से जिंदगी की, ताल्लुक़ात तो करो,
डर के भागो मत रूको, ज़रा इनसे बात तो करो,

मंज़िल तक पहुँचने की, अभी से क्या फिकर
सफ़र की हौसलों के साथ, शुरुआत तो करो,

इन चाँद-सितारों गगन पे, तेरा भी तो हक़ है,
निकल के घर से, छत पे इनसे मुलाकात तो करो,

डर डर के जीना कसम से, बिल्कुल बेमज़ा है,
दिखाओ हिम्मत डर से अपने दो-दो हाथ तो करो,

सहारे के लिए हर एक की बाँह मत टटोलो
अपने आपको को पहले खुद ही के साथ तो करो









Bahut Bahut Aur bahut Khoob Mere Bhai..

Lafzon mein Gegrai isse kehte Hai..Aap Yakeenan Mere Sabse Pasandida Shayaro mein Ek ho..I Just Love Reading Your poetries Sanjeev Bro..

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«Reply #5 on: January 14, 2011, 03:41:40 PM »
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Quote from: nirala on January 13, 2011, 06:37:32 PM
wah jeena seekha dia aapne.
ab hum taiyaar hai abhi issi waqt 2-2 haath karne ko thand se.
aakhir ye thand bhi musibat hai aur sab darte hain isse.
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thanx
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ye ashar mere apne niji anubhav hain......mahaj shaer nahi..isliye "NIRALA ji" aapke comment par bas itna hi kahunga

mahaj kahne ke liye kahe gaye ashar nahi hain,
jawab dene se pahle ye khayalaat to karo,
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«Reply #6 on: January 14, 2011, 03:59:29 PM »
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बहूत आभार अरुण जी आपने समी दिया इस रचना को
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«Reply #7 on: January 14, 2011, 04:00:26 PM »
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sorry Beqaraar ji---
mera matlab aapko thes pahuchana nahi tha.
mai achhe shayron ki badi izzat krta hun --
aur apne comnt ke liye maafi chahta hun.
aage se khayal rakhunga Sir.
sorry sad5:
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«Reply #8 on: January 14, 2011, 04:01:21 PM »
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wah bekararji... khub likha hai bahut umda bahut sach

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behad shukriya manjum ji har baar ki tarah aapki daad mili shukriya ji
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«Reply #9 on: January 14, 2011, 04:04:15 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on January 14, 2011, 09:27:14 AM
Bahut Bahut Aur bahut Khoob Mere Bhai..

Lafzon mein Gegrai isse kehte Hai..Aap Yakeenan Mere Sabse Pasandida Shayaro mein Ek ho..I Just Love Reading Your poetries Sanjeev Bro..

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khwaish bro aapki inhi baaton ne nit naya likhne ke liye prerit kiya hai..dil se aabhar
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«Reply #10 on: January 14, 2011, 04:09:29 PM »
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Quote from: nirala on January 14, 2011, 04:00:26 PM
sorry Beqaraar ji---
mera matlab aapko thes pahuchana nahi tha.
mai achhe shayron ki badi izzat krta hun --
aur apne comnt ke liye maafi chahta hun.
aage se khayal rakhunga Sir.
sorry sad5:

Nirala ji,
mujhe koi thes nahi pahunchi hai aur koi pahuncha bhi nahi sakta.....han..aapne rachna ko thik se samjhe bina comment kiya ..na karte to thik tha.....ye maine "tanzia aur tahreebakhsh shayriyan" section me post ki hai kisi "Funny section me nahi......comment karte samay aapko kam-s-kam ye khayal rakhna chahiye...
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वाह!! वाह!! वाह!! बहुत अच्छे बेक़रार जी
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«Reply #12 on: January 15, 2011, 06:13:23 PM »
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Umda....sach mein bahut umda......man mein bahut se swaal umad rahe the....
aapki ye rachna padh kar accha mehsoos hua....itni baar padh chuki hu k yaad hi ho gaya har alfaaz......man mein khuch baatein bhi aa rahi hai wahi likhne ki gustaakhi kar rahi hu....

Manzil ki hai fikar mujhe
Raahein jo apni khoyi hai

Sitaron se saji hai raat beshaq
Phir bhi neend gehri soyi hai

Khud se hi hai apni ladaayi
Bin ashqon k aankhe royi hai

Suna hai,dubte ko tinke ka sahara kaafi
Hum wo hai jisne khud ki kashti duboyi hai

Sach hai, manzil ki hai fikar mujhe
Raahein jo apni khoyi hai
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«Reply #13 on: January 17, 2011, 05:43:40 AM »
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thanks bekararji...

har baar ki tarah aapki rachna khubsurat lagi to daad to deni hi padegi na...
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«Reply #14 on: January 17, 2011, 03:07:36 PM »
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Quote from: Nikhaar on January 15, 2011, 06:13:23 PM
Umda....sach mein bahut umda......man mein bahut se swaal umad rahe the....
aapki ye rachna padh kar accha mehsoos hua....itni baar padh chuki hu k yaad hi ho gaya har alfaaz......man mein khuch baatein bhi aa rahi hai wahi likhne ki gustaakhi kar rahi hu....

Manzil ki hai fikar mujhe
Raahein jo apni khoyi hai

Sitaron se saji hai raat beshaq
Phir bhi neend gehri soyi hai

Khud se hi hai apni ladaayi
Bin ashqon k aankhe royi hai

Suna hai,dubte ko tinke ka sahara kaafi
Hum wo hai jisne khud ki kashti duboyi hai

Sach hai, manzil ki hai fikar mujhe
Raahein jo apni khoyi hai

Nikhaar ji,
in alfazon ki khushnaseebi ki bar bar aapki najar in par padti rahi.....
aapne chand sheron me jo likha hai..unke jawab me ek sher yaad aa gaya...

housala ho to safar khatm kahan hota hai,
yun to har mod pe manjil ka guman hota hai
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