TARAS RAHA HAI MAN-MAYUR - SARVESH RASTOGI

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«Reply #105 on: May 01, 2009, 09:43:37 AM »
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Shukriya Pooja Ji
Isi poem ke kuchh aur parts bhi post kar diye hain
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«Reply #106 on: May 01, 2009, 04:38:45 PM »
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Meharbani aapki,
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«Reply #107 on: May 01, 2009, 04:41:50 PM »
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Wonderful..... superb... Sarvesh ji and Netra ji  Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #108 on: May 01, 2009, 05:13:48 PM »
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«Reply #109 on: May 01, 2009, 05:17:23 PM »
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Shukriya Madhuwesh Ji
Aapka hamare saath judna bada achchha lag raha hai.
Aap bhi bada achchha likhte hain, khastaur se ghazalen.
Hamari shubhkamnaen aapke sath hain
Thanks once again
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«Reply #110 on: May 01, 2009, 05:25:45 PM »
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Wowwwwww...... Kya Baat hai SARVESH Bhai.. Kamaaal Likhte Hain aap...!! aaj aapko Pahali Baar Padha Hai Maine.. aur Padh Kar yeh Andaaza To lag Gaya Ki aap Beinthaan Khoob Likhte Hain..!!!

Lafzon Par aapki Pakad Masha Allah Kaabil-e-Tareef Hai..!! aur Yeh Poem waqai Bahut Hi Unchi Soch ke sath Likhi Hai aapne..!!! Bahut Bahut Khooooooooob.. Applause Applause

Yunhi Likhte Rahiye..!! Usual Smile

**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #111 on: May 01, 2009, 05:55:12 PM »
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Bahut sahi likha hai aap ne Rishte par
Just too good, bus likhte rahiye
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«Reply #112 on: May 01, 2009, 06:09:19 PM »
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bilkul shi kha aapne sarvesh ji...aaj ki duniya me rishton pr b dikhawe ki chadar chad chuki h,jisne rishto k dhhago ko bahut kamjor kr diya h.
bahut khub likha h aapne
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«Reply #113 on: May 02, 2009, 12:50:58 AM »
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Shukriya Rajesh Ji
Likhne ka karya chal raha hai
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«Reply #114 on: May 02, 2009, 01:11:05 AM »
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Bahut bahut Shukriya Mann Sb
Mujhe behad khushi hai ki main apni shairy se aap jaise senior shayar ki tavajjo pane main kamyab hua.  Hausla afzai ka bahut bahut shukriya. Maine kafi ghazalen bhi post ki hui hain aur ummeed karta hun ki samay samay per aapki rai aur guidance mujhe milti rahegi.
Maine aapki bhi kuchh rachnaen padhi hain.  Aapki soch aur shairy bahut achchhi hai.
Meharbani banaye rakhen.
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«Reply #115 on: May 02, 2009, 01:13:46 AM »
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Shukriya Roja Ji
Meharbani
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«Reply #116 on: May 02, 2009, 01:18:25 AM »
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Quote from: SARVESH RASTOGI on May 01, 2009, 06:09:36 AM
JIS DHARTI PER PRABHU TUMNE JEE BHAR KAR PREM LUTAYA THA
KHEL KHEL ME HI JEE BHAR KAR MAKHAN DOODH BAHAYA THA
US DHARTI PER HI PRABHU JI AB NADI RUDHIR KI BAHTI HAI
JAATI DHARM BHASHA PER AKSAR HINSA HOTI RAHTI HAI
MANTRA-MUGDH KAR DE JO JAG KO MURLI KI WHO TAAN SUNAO
TARAS RAHA HAI MAN MAYUR KARUNA KE GHAN GHIR KAR AAO

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Good one Sarvesh Ji
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«Reply #117 on: May 02, 2009, 02:54:03 AM »
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«Reply #118 on: May 02, 2009, 03:03:44 PM »
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«Reply #119 on: May 02, 2009, 03:06:20 PM »
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Shukriya Pop
Aapne bilkul satik comment kiya hai, thanks
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