TARAS RAHA HAI MAN-MAYUR - SARVESH RASTOGI

by SARVESH RASTOGI on April 20, 2009, 02:57:06 PM
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«Reply #120 on: May 02, 2009, 03:09:29 PM »
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NIce One sarvesh Bhiya,.
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«Reply #121 on: May 02, 2009, 03:51:47 PM »
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AJAB TUMHARI LEELA BHAGWAN SAMAJH NAHIN KUCHH AATI HAI
KATHIN PAHELI JITNA SOCHO AUR ULAJHATI JAATI HAI
HAIN ANANT ICHCHHAEN SAB KI ALAG-ALAG MANSUBE HAIN
KAAM KRODH MAD LOBH MOH KE ANDHKAR ME DOOBE HAIN
IS MAYA KO KATO BHAGWAN PUNAH SUDARSHAN CHAKRA UTHAO
TARAS RAHA HAI MAN-MAYUR KARUNA KE GHAN GHIR KAR AAO

PRABHO TUMHARI MAYA KA HUM PAAR KAHAN PA SAKTE HAIN
MAYA KE VASH HOKAR HUM GIRTE UTHTE PHIR GIRTE HAIN
TUM KARUNA KI DHARA HO HUM PAPI MURKH KUTIL KAMI
DEEN HEEN JAISE BHI HAIN ANTATAH TUMHARE HAIN SWAMY
NATMASTAK HAIN SHRI-CHARNON MAIN BANH PAKAD KAR HAME UTHAO
TARAS RAHA HAI MAN-MAYUR KARUNA KE GHAN GHIR KAR AAO

Is kavita ko Yoindia per jitna bhari response mila uske liye
main sabka aabhari hun.   icon_salut hello2 wave Applause

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«Reply #122 on: May 02, 2009, 03:55:55 PM »
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Wah sarvesh ji.. kya kamal ki hai hai aapki yea kavita.. Zindgai k har pehlu ko aapne inti bakoobhi bayaan kiya hai.. ki iska koi jawab nahi hai.. har ak chand mea jaise aapne jaan daal di ho.. Pura ka pura aankho k pratyaksh aa kada ho..

Sach mea Zindgai k sachaiyon se wakif karaya hai aapne.

Thank u so  much for sharing ur Original Creation with us.. Thanks for being part of Yoindia...
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«Reply #123 on: May 02, 2009, 04:27:34 PM »
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Thank you Sophi Ji
Kitne apnepan aur kitne khule dil se aapne is rachna ki tarif ki, main wakai aapka aabhari hun. 
Shukriya, Shukriya, Shukriya icon_salut icon_salut
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«Reply #124 on: May 02, 2009, 04:41:11 PM »
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Bohat bohat sarvesh kash itni pyari aur achchi hindi main bol pata... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bhakht ki peeda..

Bhagam daud jeevan ki, Prabhu se milne nahi deti

Ghar bhar ki zimmedari, Prabhu se milne nahi deti

Aisa nahi ke bhakhti nahi hain mere man me Sarvesh

Khada hu roti ki katar me, yeh beehd mujhe Prabhu se milne nahi deti

Prabhu ka uttar...

Teri bhagam bhag me dauda hu sath tere main bhi

Ghar bhar ki zimmadari uthata raha sath tere main bhi

Kaun kehta hain hain bhakti nahi hain tere man me GHAYEL

Jab jab na mili roti katar me, sath bhookha raha hu tere main bhi...

-Sajid Ghayel-
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«Reply #125 on: May 02, 2009, 04:55:01 PM »
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Mashallah Bohat Achcha Likha Hai Sarvesh Bhai, nd Nice One Sajid Bhai,.

Aur 6 Lines Kahaan hai Sarvesh Bhai,.
Its 12 Online,.
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«Reply #126 on: May 02, 2009, 10:21:43 PM »
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Bahut khoob Sarvesh Ji
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«Reply #127 on: May 03, 2009, 01:30:06 AM »
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Bahut khoob Sajid Bhai
Aapne bhi kya kamal likha hai, aapko padhkar mujhe Naam film ka woh gana yaad aa gaya -
CHITTHI AAYEE HAI VATAN SE CHITTHI AAYEE HAI
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«Reply #128 on: May 03, 2009, 01:35:25 AM »
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Shukriya Azeem Bhai
Ye kavita 18 chhand main hai, ek chhand 6 lines ka hai.  Yahan aapne 2 chhand padhe hain.  Baki 16 chhand main pahile post kar chuka hun aur aap padh chuke hain.  Phir bhi abhi Admin. ko request karke main poori kavita ek hi thread main karva dunga.
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«Reply #129 on: May 03, 2009, 07:40:07 AM »
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Quote from: SARVESH RASTOGI on May 03, 2009, 01:35:25 AM
Shukriya Azeem Bhai
Ye kavita 18 chhand main hai, ek chhand 6 lines ka hai.  Yahan aapne 2 chhand padhe hain.  Baki 16 chhand main pahile post kar chuka hun aur aap padh chuke hain.  Phir bhi abhi Admin. ko request karke main poori kavita ek hi thread main karva dunga.
Thank you very much.
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THeek Hai,.
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«Reply #130 on: May 03, 2009, 04:26:08 PM »
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Shukriya Kaash Ji
Mujhe khushi hai ki kavita aap tak bilkul vaisi hi pahunchi hai jaisi maine likhi hai.  There is no communication gap.  Welcome.
Aise hi himmat badhate rahen.
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«Reply #131 on: May 03, 2009, 04:28:25 PM »
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«Reply #132 on: May 04, 2009, 07:12:24 AM »
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«Reply #134 on: May 09, 2009, 03:48:14 PM »
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Hello Friends
Ab maine 18 stenza ki yeh poori kavita ikatthi Page-1 per post kar di hai.  Ab ise ek sath poora padha ja sakta hai.
Thanks to all
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