TARAS RAHA HAI MAN-MAYUR - SARVESH RASTOGI

by SARVESH RASTOGI on April 20, 2009, 02:57:06 PM
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«Reply #15 on: April 24, 2009, 12:06:39 PM »
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Pehle ke do parts already padh chuki hoon....Bohot Khoob Sarvesh Ji
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«Reply #16 on: April 27, 2009, 04:02:42 PM »
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«Reply #17 on: April 27, 2009, 04:36:02 PM »
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wah bahut khoob kaha aaap ney Sarvesh Ji,

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«Reply #18 on: April 27, 2009, 04:42:09 PM »
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wah wah kaya baat hai bahoot khoob Sarvesh ji
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«Reply #19 on: April 27, 2009, 04:55:22 PM »
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Quote from: jasbirsingh on April 27, 2009, 04:36:02 PM
wah bahut khoob kaha aaap ney Sarvesh Ji,

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Shukriya Jasbir Ji
TARAS RAHA HAI MAN MAYUR ke naam se aajkal ke halat per ek lambi kavita likhi hai jiske 3 part pahile post kar chuka hun aur usme 9 chhand the.  Mujhe laga shayad log lambi kavita padhne me uncomfertable hain isliye ab ek ek chhand kar ke post karne ka vichar hai.
Thanks for the appreciation.
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«Reply #20 on: April 27, 2009, 04:57:37 PM »
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Shukriya Pooja Ji
Bas yun hi himmat badhati rahiye
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«Reply #21 on: April 27, 2009, 05:12:27 PM »
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shabd na sujhe koi, kin shabdo main bayan kare
apki ek ek line parr kar, kitni baar wah wah kare
kash mil jaaye yah gyan hume, bhagwaan se yahi dua kare
Servash ji, likha hai kamaal ka apne, Nirbudhi main insaan, kin shabdo se yah bayaan kare
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«Reply #22 on: April 27, 2009, 05:23:22 PM »
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Kya baat hai Pooja Ji, kya baat hai
Wah wah, aapko kavita pasand aayee
Jin shabdon main aapne tarif ki, main aabhari hun.
Thanks from the core of the heart.
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«Reply #23 on: April 27, 2009, 05:27:37 PM »
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wah wah wah kaya baat hai... magar Sarvesh ji sabhi ek he thread main kyun nahi hai...

agar app kahe to main in sabko ek thread mai Merge karna pasand karugi taki ek sath sabhi ko parra ja sake..
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«Reply #24 on: April 27, 2009, 05:42:35 PM »
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Shukriya Azeem Bhai
Ummeed hai iske baad ke part bhi aapko pasand aaye honge
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«Reply #25 on: April 27, 2009, 05:44:32 PM »
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Shukriya Sophi Ji
kul 18 chhand hain aur lagatar post karta jaa raha hun.
Pasandagi ka shukriya
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«Reply #26 on: April 27, 2009, 05:57:22 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on April 27, 2009, 05:27:37 PM
wah wah wah kaya baat hai... magar Sarvesh ji sabhi ek he thread main kyun nahi hai...

agar app kahe to main in sabko ek thread mai Merge karna pasand karugi taki ek sath sabhi ko parra ja sake..

Hello Pooja Ji
Meri rachnaen aapko pasand aa rahi hain, Yoindia per pasand ki ja rahi hain mujhe iski behad khushi hai aur main aapka aur apne sabhi kadradanon ka shukriya ada karta hun. 
Ye kavita 18 chhand ki hai aur normally log lambi kavita ko poora padhne main comfertable feel nahin karte.  Isliye ise parts main post kar raha hun.  Vaise bhi har chhand independent hai.  Ek baar alag alag padh liye jane ke baad main isko ek main marge karne ki request aapse karunga. 
Anyhow aapka valid suggestion zahir karta hai ki aap meri shayari ko interest lekar aur seriously dekh rahi hain jiske liye main ek baar phir aapka shukriya karta hun.  Aage bhi aapke comments aur suggestions ka swagat hai.
All the Best.
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«Reply #27 on: April 27, 2009, 06:00:34 PM »
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Quote from: SARVESH RASTOGI on April 27, 2009, 05:57:22 PM
Hello Pooja Ji
Meri rachnaen aapko pasand aa rahi hain, Yoindia per pasand ki ja rahi hain mujhe iski behad khushi hai aur main aapka aur apne sabhi kadradanon ka shukriya ada karta hun. 
Ye kavita 18 chhand ki hai aur normally log lambi kavita ko poora padhne main comfertable feel nahin karte.  Isliye ise parts main post kar raha hun.  Vaise bhi har chhand independent hai.  Ek baar alag alag padh liye jane ke baad main isko ek main marge karne ki request aapse karunga. 
Anyhow aapka valid suggestion zahir karta hai ki aap meri shayari ko interest lekar aur seriously dekh rahi hain jiske liye main ek baar phir aapka shukriya karta hun.  Aage bhi aapke comments aur suggestions ka swagat hai.
All the Best.
SARVESH RASTOGI

jaise apko thik lage Sarvesh ji...

App bahoot acha likhte hai... kaise koi khud ko rok sakta hai apki rachnaao ko padne se... aise he likhte rahe..
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«Reply #28 on: April 27, 2009, 06:02:08 PM »
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bahoot khoob,.. Missing Netra ji in these threads.. I think he is the best on Yoindia to reply these kind of poems....

Superb... Good work Servesh ji
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«Reply #29 on: April 27, 2009, 06:05:24 PM »
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Shukriya Celmira Ji
Meri mehnat safal hui
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