TARAS RAHA HAI MAN-MAYUR - SARVESH RASTOGI

by SARVESH RASTOGI on April 20, 2009, 02:57:06 PM
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«Reply #30 on: April 27, 2009, 06:06:07 PM »
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Shukriya Pooja Ji
Meri Mehnat safal hui
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«Reply #31 on: April 28, 2009, 04:57:10 AM »
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Quote from: SARVESH RASTOGI on April 27, 2009, 04:02:42 PM
ASPTAAL KI KYA KAHIYE YE TO KHUD HI BEEMAR HUE
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«Reply #32 on: April 28, 2009, 06:22:50 AM »
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«Reply #33 on: April 28, 2009, 06:41:46 AM »
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Bahut khoob Sarvesh Ji
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«Reply #34 on: April 28, 2009, 07:04:38 AM »
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Thank you very much Harish Ji
Ye chhand ek badi kavita ka part hai jisme 18 chhand hain.  Taras raha hai man mayur ke naam se ye kavita part part main post kar raha hun.  Aapki pasandagi ka shukriya.
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«Reply #35 on: April 28, 2009, 07:18:50 AM »
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Nice one Sarvesh Ji
Main ne Pt. 2 phele padha
par luft untna hi mila
Jitna doosre part mein tha
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«Reply #36 on: April 28, 2009, 07:22:28 AM »
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Bahut khoob Sarvesh Ji
Bahut anand mila hai
Haqiqat bayan ki hai aap ne
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«Reply #37 on: April 28, 2009, 07:41:58 AM »
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Mashallah Ek Haqeeqat Ko Aapne is Shayari Mein Utaar Diya,.
Nice Job Bhai,.
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«Reply #38 on: April 28, 2009, 03:11:06 PM »
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Bahoot bahoot khoob Sarvesh ji...
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«Reply #39 on: April 29, 2009, 02:37:29 AM »
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Shukriya Azeem Bhai
Taras Raha Hai Man Mayur me aage abhi aur bahut kuchh milega aapko
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«Reply #40 on: April 29, 2009, 06:03:13 AM »
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Nice continuation - Sarvesh Ji
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«Reply #41 on: April 29, 2009, 06:06:37 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on April 24, 2009, 12:06:39 PM
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Pehle ke do parts already padh chuki hoon....Bohot Khoob Sarvesh Ji

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«Reply #42 on: April 29, 2009, 06:07:31 AM »
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Nice One Sarvesh Ji,

Shally.
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«Reply #43 on: April 29, 2009, 06:41:52 AM »
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Bohat khoob Sarvesh ji,,,
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«Reply #44 on: April 29, 2009, 07:55:36 AM »
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Wah Sarvesh... wah specially Khai aur Khadda ko khoob set kiya hain aur ek ek pankhti me keval satya kaha hain.
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