TARAS RAHA HAI MAN-MAYUR - SARVESH RASTOGI

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«Reply #45 on: April 29, 2009, 08:15:55 AM »

Great Poetry Agai Sarvesh Bhaiya,.

Man Mayur Shayad Zameer Ko Kehte Hain Na Hindi Mein,.


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«Reply #46 on: April 29, 2009, 08:48:54 AM »

Quote from: Azeem on April 29, 2009, 08:15:55 AM

Great Poetry Agai Sarvesh Bhaiya,.

Man Mayur Shayad Zameer Ko Kehte Hain Na Hindi Mein,.

Shukriya Azeem Bhai
More (peacock) badal ke aane ka intazar karta hai aur na aane per taras jata hai. Is tarah man (dil) ko peacock maan lea to man taras raha hai, bechain hai ki oh god come and save us. Yes it is zameer, our soul, our conscience who is waiting for the god to help us. Hindi literature main ise Alankar kahte hain.
Thanks for your appreciation and query. Mujhe achchha laga.
SARVESH RASTOGI


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«Reply #47 on: April 29, 2009, 09:15:35 AM »

Quote from: SARVESH RASTOGI on April 29, 2009, 08:48:54 AM

Shukriya Bhai Samjhaane Ke liye,.


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«Reply #48 on: April 29, 2009, 09:17:37 AM »

BAHAUT ACHCHEY .....SR


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«Reply #49 on: April 29, 2009, 09:25:00 AM »

wah sarvesh ji.. Is kavita ka har Ansh apne mea ak gehri aur sachi baat keh jata hai. bahoot hi khoob. Superb!


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«Reply #50 on: April 29, 2009, 09:30:26 AM »

Thanks Rajesh Ji
Aapke response se dil bada ho jata hai
SARVESH RASTOGI


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«Reply #51 on: April 29, 2009, 09:31:37 AM »

Thanks Shally Ji
Mujhe achchha lag raha hai aapse response pakar
SARVESH RASTOGI


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«Reply #52 on: April 29, 2009, 10:00:42 AM »

ha ha ha...bahoot khoob kataksh hai rastogi ji police mahkame par.........ye kavita shayad vyangya (funny) section me post hoti to jyaada achcha tha..


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«Reply #53 on: April 29, 2009, 11:27:30 AM »

Bahut khoob.... Rastogi ji and wonderful creation Kamal ji


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«Reply #54 on: April 29, 2009, 11:32:01 AM »

Thank you very much Roja ji, jo aapne meri creation ko pasand kiya ye to Rastogi sir ki kavita se prerit hoker likhi hai


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«Reply #55 on: April 29, 2009, 11:50:42 AM »

Thanks Honeyrose Ji
Aapka response pakar khushi hui, hamare pathako ki tadat badh gai
Hamari shairy per apni rai zahir karti raha kijiye, welcome
All the Best.
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«Reply #56 on: April 29, 2009, 11:57:14 AM »

Thanks Sophi Ji
Mujhe laga alag alag post karne se kavita ki pahunch jyada pathakon tak hogi. Isi bahane aapke comments bhi baar baar padhne ko milange. Aapki rai ka swagat hai aur intazar rahega.
Thanks once again
All the best
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«Reply #57 on: April 29, 2009, 11:59:19 AM »

Shukriya Sajid Bhai
Aapke sachche comments ke liye shukriya
SARVESH RASTOGI


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«Reply #58 on: April 29, 2009, 12:05:23 PM »

Hello Kagaj Kamal Ji
Shukriya, aapne mujhe padha aur sunder dhang se response kiya. Aapki creation asardar hai, welcome.
Aage bhi meri aur rachnaon per aapki rai ka swagat hai
All the Best
SARVESH RASTOGI


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«Reply #59 on: April 29, 2009, 12:10:47 PM »

Hi Bekarar Ji
Shukriya tarif ke liye
Shukriya aapki rai ke liye bhi. Vaise ye chhand funny poetry section ko hi belong karta hai lekin ye ek badi kavita ka part hai jo is section me hi post ki ja rahi hai. Taras raha hai man mayur ke topic se kafi sare chhand post kar chuka hun, your comments are solicited.
Rest Okay, all the Best
SARVESH RASTOGI