Tez Bahut Tez Hum Sab ki Raftaar Hai......

by khwaish on April 28, 2009, 07:03:56 PM
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Abhi Ek Ghazal Suun Raha Tha Jiske Bol Kuch Iss Tarah Ke Hai..

            "Dushman Ko Bhi Seene Se Lagana Nahi Bhoole,
             Hum Apne Buzurgo Ka Zamaana Nahi Bhoole"

Yeh Ghazal Sunte Waqt Mere Naanaji Ki Ek Baat Zehan Mein Aa Baithi,Woh Hamesha Kehte Hai Ke unka Hi Zamaana Bhala Tha,Chaahe Jab Tarakhi Kuch Bhi Naa Thi,Insaan Ki Aamdani Bhi Tik-Taak Thi,Par Insaani Rishte Bahut Mazboot Hua Karte the,Aaj Ke Zamaane Mein Kahin Naa Kahin Status Aur Paiso Ne Insaani Rishte aur Jazbaato Ko Peeche Chod Diya Hai..Guzarte Waqt Ke Saath Yeh Baate Kuch haqeeqat Si Lagti Hai..Issi Soch par Kuch Likh raha Hoon,Iss Kavita Mein Maine Pardesiyon Ka Bhi Haal-E-Dil Bayaan Karne ki Koshish Ki Hai, Umeed Karta Hoon Aap sab Iss Kavita Ko Zaroor Padhenge Aur Sarahenge ..Shukriya..

Kal Jiske Paas Ek Cycle Thi,
Aaj Uske Paas Ek Car Hai,
Tez Kitni Aajkal Har Shaks Ki Raftaar Hai....

Pehle Jo Kuch Bhi Humare Buzurg Kamaate The,
Apne Ghar Mein Mil-Baithkar Khaate The,

Aaj Jo Kuch Bhi Hum Kamaate Hai,
STATUS MAINTAIN Karne Ke Chakkar Mein Sab Gawate Hai,

Do pal Ke Aaraam Ka Bhi Yahan Ab Kise Vichaar Hai,
Tez Bahut Tez Hum Sab Ki Raftaar Hai.....

Pehle Jab Ghar Ke Bade,Kaam Se Thak-Tootkar Aate The,
sab Aapas Mein Baith, Mil-Jhulkar Waqt Bitate The,

Aaj Kabhi Khud Se Bhi Baat Karna Humein Dushwaar Hai,
Tez Bahut Tez Hum Sab ki Raftaar Hai....

Fax, Messege, E-Mail Mein Uljha Hai Har Shaks Iss Jahan Ka,
Behan Ki Woh Kaagaz Mein Lipti Hui Raakhi!!
Mehboob Ki Woh Pyaar Se Bhari Nazm!!
Maa Ka Woh Dard Se Bhara Khat!!

Yeh Sab Ab Kahan Hai?? Yeh Puchna Bhi Bekaar Hai,
Tez Bahut Tez Hum Sab ki Raftaar Hai....

Ek Adna Sa Jism Aur Kaam Duniya Bhar Ke,
Sach Kahoon To Aaj Hum Sab ko Duniyadaari Ka Hi Bukhaar hai,
Tez Bahut Tez Hum Sab ki Raftaar hai.....

Jab Bhi Koi Mere Watan Se Aata Tha,
Main Bade Fakhr Se Apne Doston Ko Yeh Batlaata Tha,
Meri Maa Ne Mujhe Bhijaya Aaj Ghar Ka Bana Hua Achaar hai!!

par Aaj Hum Sab Burger,Pizza Mein Mashroof Hai,
Ab Kahan Kisse Ghar Ke Khaane Ka Intezaar hai!!
Tez Bahut Tez Hum Sab ki Raftaar hai....

humare Buzurg Humse Kehte The,
"Khwaish" Jitna Hai Utne Mein Khush Rehna Seekho,
Mil bithkar Rona Aur Mil Baithkar Hasna Seekho,

Yeh Baatein Samajne Ko Hum Aaj bhi Kahan Tayaar hai,
Tez Bahut Tez Hum sab ki Raftaar hai....

Yeh Baat Sach hai Ke Aaj Ke Daur Mein,
Dhan,Daulat,Paisa, Yeh Sab Bahut Badi Zaroorate Hai!!
Par Inn sab Se Duniya Ki Har Cheez Nahi Kharidi Jaati!!

Bazaar Mein Kabhi Nahi Bikhte
Apne Buzurgo Ke Diye Hue Sanskaar Hai,
Tez Bahut Tez Hum Sab ki Raftaar hai.....

                  ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~
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«Reply #1 on: April 28, 2009, 07:14:53 PM »
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Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley wow wow wow wah wah wah... shabd nahi hai Khwaish ji... wah kaya baat hai... bahoot khoob dil khush ho gaya!!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: April 28, 2009, 07:30:02 PM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Its just too good as usual Khwahish bhaijan...Lavz nahin mil rahe hai tariff karne ke liye...bahaut khoob... Applause Applause Sach main hum itni raftaar se chal rahe hai ke khud ke liye waqt nahin hai...bas paisa aur paisa...its sad to see the way we have made the world today compared to the world God gifted us...
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«Reply #3 on: April 29, 2009, 04:59:48 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on April 28, 2009, 07:14:53 PM
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley wow wow wow wah wah wah... shabd nahi hai Khwaish ji... wah kaya baat hai... bahoot khoob dil khush ho gaya!!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Thankyou Sooo Much pooja For Appreciating!!
Your Appreciation Is Valued A lot.. notworthy
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«Reply #4 on: April 29, 2009, 05:06:54 AM »
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Bhaoot hi behtareen likhahai aapne. Har ak baat Dil ko chu jaane wali kahin hai.. aur aapke akhiri k do baatein , ne sach mea char chand laga diye..

Superb!
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«Reply #5 on: April 29, 2009, 05:26:51 AM »
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Quote from: dead heart on April 28, 2009, 07:30:02 PM
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Its just too good as usual Khwahish bhaijan...Lavz nahin mil rahe hai tariff karne ke liye...bahaut khoob... Applause Applause Sach main hum itni raftaar se chal rahe hai ke khud ke liye waqt nahin hai...bas paisa aur paisa...its sad to see the way we have made the world today compared to the world God gifted us...

Sach Kaha Aapne Rahim, This Is What I Wanted To Potray In This Poetry..Thanks a lot For Understanding the true Meaning Of this poetry and Thanx A million For Appreciating!!
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«Reply #6 on: April 29, 2009, 05:42:42 AM »
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 Clapping Smiley     Clapping Smiley     Clapping Smiley

Bahut Khoob Bahut Hi Umda Likha hai Khwaish Ji AApne,
Ham to ise sarahne ke bhi layak nahi...
Phir bhi Gustakhi maaf ho,
Dil ko choo gayi aapki lines.

Shally.
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«Reply #7 on: April 29, 2009, 06:00:57 AM »
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Bahut Khoob Khwaish Ji
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«Reply #8 on: April 29, 2009, 06:50:29 AM »
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Ek sachchi aur mazboot peshkash.........as always yeh peshkash bhi hatke thi ustaad bohat bohat khoob.  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #9 on: April 29, 2009, 07:00:19 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Wah bohat sahi kaha hai aapne khwaish ji sachh mein zamana aaj aise hi hai
Wonderfull lines khwaish  ji g88 creation by you...



 
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«Reply #10 on: April 29, 2009, 08:21:44 AM »
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Mashallah, Kya khoob Kaha Hai Aapne Khwaish bhai, Ek Ek Ashaar Bhi, Mashallah, Bade gehre Matlab Ke Kahein Hain Aapne,.

Bohat Achche, Yunhi Hum Sab ko aapki Kalam ka Lutf Uthaane Dijiye, Yunhi Likhte Rahiye, Janaab,.

May Allah Bless You,.
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«Reply #11 on: April 29, 2009, 01:37:00 PM »
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Bahut achchhe Khwaish Ji
starting ka sher behad khubsurat hai, dil jeet liya.
Aapki peshkash badi dilkash hai
SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #12 on: April 29, 2009, 02:42:41 PM »
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khwaish ji!
Aaj ki asliyat ka eik dilkash aur dilchasp bayaan khoobsoortee sey numaayaan  huaa hai, aapki is 'kavita' mein! Yeemaandaar nazar-e-waaqiyaat-e-haazirah kaa khairmaqdam kartaa hoon!
                            - abd bundeli
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«Reply #13 on: April 29, 2009, 08:47:06 PM »
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Waah Dost aapne to zindagi ki sachchai khol ke rakh di....Bohot Khoob !

Bazaar Mein Kabhi Nahi Bikhte
Apne Buzurgo Ke Diye Hue Sanskaar Hai,
Tez Bahut Tez Hum Sab ki Raftaar hai.....

Kya baat keh di Dost....Bohot hi Khoob...Very nice creation Khwaish
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«Reply #14 on: April 30, 2009, 04:36:55 AM »
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Quote from: @kaash on April 28, 2009, 08:58:02 PM
Bohot ache ehsasaat Khwaish ji Applause Applause Applause  padhkar bohot acha laga..haqeqat likha aapne                                                                           is bhaag-daud ke jeevan me hum aisa hi jeevan chunte hain                                                                            jinhe khelke hum phir bhool gaye,
hume dekh vo bachpan ke khilaune rote hain

Teh Dil Se Shukarguzaar Hoon Main Kaashji Aapka..jo khud itni achi kavita likhte ho,unse taarif paana,bahut badi baat hoti hai..
aur aapne bhi ek gehri baat kahi hai..bahut ache Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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