Tez Bahut Tez Hum Sab ki Raftaar Hai......

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«Reply #15 on: May 01, 2009, 03:32:27 AM »
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Quote from: Sophi on April 29, 2009, 05:06:54 AM
Bhaoot hi behtareen likhahai aapne. Har ak baat Dil ko chu jaane wali kahin hai.. aur aapke akhiri k do baatein , ne sach mea char chand laga diye..

Superb!

Thankyou Soooo Much Sophi...Aur Aapne Bhi Iss Kavita Par Comment De Kar,Char Chaand Lagaye hai Sophi..Thanks A LOT..
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«Reply #16 on: May 08, 2009, 06:45:47 PM »
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Quote from: k.shael on April 29, 2009, 05:42:42 AM
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Bahut Khoob Bahut Hi Umda Likha hai Khwaish Ji AApne,
Ham to ise sarahne ke bhi layak nahi...
Phir bhi Gustakhi maaf ho,
Dil ko choo gayi aapki lines.

Shally.


Bahut bahut Shukriya Shally..Aapne Is Kalam Ko saraha,Jaankar Behad Khushi Hui...Aur Aapne aisa kyon kahan SHALLY ke aap sarahne ke bhi layak nahi...balki Aap Yoindia Ke unn Shayara Mein so Ho,Jo Vaakai Di Se Likhte Ho..
Mujhe aapke likhe kalam Bahut zyaada Pasand hai..
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«Reply #17 on: May 08, 2009, 06:47:08 PM »
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Quote from: Rajesh Harish on April 29, 2009, 06:00:57 AM
Bahut Khoob Khwaish Ji

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Rajesh Harishji..
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«Reply #18 on: May 10, 2009, 04:12:09 AM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on April 29, 2009, 06:50:29 AM
Ek sachchi aur mazboot peshkash.........as always yeh peshkash bhi hatke thi ustaad bohat bohat khoob.  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Aapko Yeh Kalam Pasand Aayi,Jaankar Bahut Khushi Hui..

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Sajid Bhai Aapka..
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«Reply #19 on: May 10, 2009, 04:13:21 AM »
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Quote from: honeyrose on April 29, 2009, 07:00:19 AM
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Wah bohat sahi kaha hai aapne khwaish ji sachh mein zamana aaj aise hi hai
Wonderfull lines khwaish  ji g88 creation by you...



 

Thankyou Sooo Much Honey!!
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«Reply #20 on: May 21, 2009, 06:31:08 AM »
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Quote from: Azeem on April 29, 2009, 08:21:44 AM
Mashallah, Kya khoob Kaha Hai Aapne Khwaish bhai, Ek Ek Ashaar Bhi, Mashallah, Bade gehre Matlab Ke Kahein Hain Aapne,.

Bohat Achche, Yunhi Hum Sab ko aapki Kalam ka Lutf Uthaane Dijiye, Yunhi Likhte Rahiye, Janaab,.

May Allah Bless You,.

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Azeem..Aap Yuhi saath de,Hum likhte Rahenge
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«Reply #21 on: May 21, 2009, 06:36:32 AM »
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subhan allah khuwiesh sahab ,, asaan se lafzoon me bade se badi bath ko bayan karne ka hausla rakhte hain apke kalamath ,, tarif karna to kissi ke bus kibaath hi nahi yahan allah apke sare kalamo ko miyari izzath de aur apke ghar walon ko khush o khurram rakhe !! ameen !!

duvaun ka muntazir !!

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«Reply #22 on: July 24, 2009, 03:31:07 AM »
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Quote from: SARVESH RASTOGI on April 29, 2009, 01:37:00 PM
Bahut achchhe Khwaish Ji
starting ka sher behad khubsurat hai, dil jeet liya.
Aapki peshkash badi dilkash hai
SARVESH RASTOGI

Teh Dil Se Shukriya Sarveshji...

Aapko Yeh Peshkash Itni pasand Aayi,Yeh jaankar Bahut Khushi Hai..

Umeed Aap Yuhi Humara Hausla Badhate rahenge...
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«Reply #23 on: July 24, 2009, 04:07:21 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on April 29, 2009, 02:42:41 PM
khwaish ji!
Aaj ki asliyat ka eik dilkash aur dilchasp bayaan khoobsoortee sey numaayaan  huaa hai, aapki is 'kavita' mein! Yeemaandaar nazar-e-waaqiyaat-e-haazirah kaa khairmaqdam kartaa hoon!
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Bahut Bahut Bahut Shukriya Abd Sahebji..Aapko Yeh Rachna Pasand Aa Gayi,Yehi Sabse Bada Inaam Hoga,Iss Rachna Ka..
Koshish Yehi Ki Thi Ke Aaj Ke Halaat Ko Lafzo Mein Bayaan kar Sakoon..

Teh Dil Se Shukriya Aapka,Jo Aapne Iss Koshish Ko Saraaha.. notworthy icon_salut
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«Reply #24 on: July 24, 2009, 06:37:19 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on July 24, 2009, 04:07:21 AM
Bahut Bahut Bahut Shukriya Abd Sahebji..Aapko Yeh Rachna Pasand Aa Gayi,Yehi Sabse Bada Inaam Hoga,Iss Rachna Ka..
Koshish Yehi Ki Thi Ke Aaj Ke Halaat Ko Lafzo Mein Bayaan kar Sakoon..

Teh Dil Se Shukriya Aapka,Jo Aapne Iss Koshish Ko Saraaha.. notworthy icon_salut
You're welcome khwaish ji! Achchhoun ki 'saraahnaa' to gair bhi kartey hain, phir mein to aapka apnaa hoon!
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«Reply #25 on: April 30, 2010, 11:53:28 AM »
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You're welcome khwaish ji! Achchhoun ki 'saraahnaa' to gair bhi kartey hain, phir mein to aapka apnaa hoon!
               - abd bundeli

Aapka Teh Dil se Shukriya Abd Saheb ji jo aapne Yeh baat Kahi..Aap yakeenan mere Apne Hai.. icon_flower
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«Reply #26 on: April 30, 2010, 12:28:03 PM »
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khwaishji, haqikat itni bekhauf aur bebaaki se bayaan ki hai ki sachhai jaankar sach much dil dard se bhar aayaa hai,
bahut behatreen andaaz mein likha hai.
bahut khoob aise hi likhte rahen . Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley icon_flower
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«Reply #27 on: August 03, 2010, 07:59:07 AM »
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Quote from: @kaash on April 30, 2010, 11:59:48 AM
yr welcome Khwaish ji and thanks for yr words

You Deserve every bit of it Kaa :icon_flower:shji..
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«Reply #28 on: August 23, 2011, 06:57:40 PM »
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Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on April 30, 2010, 12:28:03 PM
khwaishji, haqikat itni bekhauf aur bebaaki se bayaan ki hai ki sachhai jaankar sach much dil dard se bhar aayaa hai,
bahut behatreen andaaz mein likha hai.
bahut khoob aise hi likhte rahen . Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley icon_flower

Aapka Bahuttttt Bahutttt Shukriya Sureshji.. icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #29 on: August 23, 2011, 07:38:52 PM »
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Khawahish Jee Aadaab!

Exclent thought's and expression.. And realy
very wel poetryed by you....... Usual Smile

No words .... Speechlessssssss

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Likhate rahiye.. Aate rahiye.. Usual Smile
Khush O aabaad rahiye.. Usual Smile
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