......Tu pehle btaati

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Kaanch ka Sapna tha     Dil bhi kaanch ka
Khwaab mei neend  neend mei Khoobsurat khwaab tha
mnnko se Sjaaya      
         Resham mei Piroya tha
Beej Gulab ka tha Boya Daman mei aaye kaante hi)-2
Parhe joR ke  chaante hi
Besharam Jindagi tu Pehle btaati )-2
mei Surajmukhi bota
tadbeeR se badal deta teri kismat )-2
                      ...yu takdeer par na Rota.
Bikhare khwaab chun chunkaR kaanto mei na Pirota)-2
jo mitti ke pyaalo mei bal khaati Sura
               jaam khangalne ka jhanjhat na hota
 AksaR khud se kehta hu
             ....yu hota    ki acha hota  'gar aisa  na hota   waisa na hota.
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«Reply #1 on: April 23, 2013, 03:34:03 PM »
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Quote from: msanjusethi on April 23, 2013, 03:30:36 PM
Kaanch ka Sapna tha     Dil bhi kaanch ka
Khwaab mei neend  neend mei Khoobsurat khwaab tha
mnnko se Sjaaya       
         Resham mei Piroya tha
Beej Gulab ka tha Boya Daman mei aaye kaante hi)-2
Parhe joR ke  chaante hi
Besharam Jindagi tu Pehle btaati )-2
mei Surajmukhi bota
tadbeeR se badal deta teri kismat )-2
                      ...yu takdeer par na Rota.
Bikhare khwaab chun chunkaR kaanto mei na Pirota)-2
jo mitti ke pyaalo mei bal khaati Sura
               jaam khangalne ka jhanjhat na hota
 AksaR khud se kehta hu
             ....yu hota    ki acha hota  'gar aisa  na hota   waisa na hota.

There no Rewind button in life   
make ur choices consciously ,
take Responsibility,
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«Reply #2 on: April 23, 2013, 03:40:30 PM »
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waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #3 on: April 23, 2013, 04:34:49 PM »
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very nice
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«Reply #4 on: April 23, 2013, 06:49:08 PM »
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Waah.............. Applause Applause Applause
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bht khoob aur gmbheer poetry
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shukriya ap sabka aapke samay ka ,shukriya smjhne ka
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Bahut Khoob.
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