Tum Mere Saamne Aur hee Kuch

by anjaan dharkan on May 29, 2009, 12:13:16 PM
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Tum saamne mere aur kuch, peehche aur kuch dihkte ho...
dosti me pyaar bhare, hawas me aur hee kuch mere mutaabiq lihkte ho.

Tum muhjse mazzak kiya karo, mazzak udraana aur hai.
Insaan hain hum bhi aur tum bhi, haan, Maana k ye daur aur hai.

Wafa do dost keh k muhje, muhjse tum dagha kar k, dil k kareeb rehnee kee iltijaa na karo.
Mere baare me ghalat bayani kar k, mera dost banne rehni kee ihchcha na karo.

Humaara dil na'azzuk hai, humaari narmi ka faida na uhtaana,
dosti kee thee, dosti me na roohtna hota hai, na mannana.

Tum roohthe bhi, humne manaya b, ghalti jab k humaari na thee.
Na rahe tum iss dil k kareeb, ub na rahe tum dhuk khushee k saathee.

Daghabaazon k liye dil me jaga nahi rahkka karte, haan hum b wo pahhttar hain.
laat maar k tum uhtaahna mat humko, doob jaaoonge tum phir humaari wafa me, hum wo yaari ka samndar hain...

 
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«Reply #1 on: May 29, 2009, 07:58:40 PM »
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Ek ajeeb sa msg mehsoos kiya maine is poem mein. Thoda narazgi wala..But very well written, Apne jazbaaton ko jo khoobsurti se bayan kar jaaye wo hi asli poem hoti hia.

GOod job AD Usual Smile
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«Reply #2 on: May 30, 2009, 01:39:29 AM »
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bahoot khoob ADji,lagta hai kisi ne aap ke dil dhukaya hai,
kabhi kabhi dost hi dokha dete hai, Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #3 on: May 30, 2009, 02:06:43 AM »
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Bahut khoob AD Ji
SARVESH RASTOGI
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aisa nahi hai, ye true feelings nahi, buss yunhee lihka... thank you anyways!
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«Reply #5 on: June 07, 2009, 01:16:14 PM »
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Bohat Achcha Likha Hai, Sidraah Nice Work,.
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Quote from: Azeem on June 07, 2009, 01:16:14 PM
Bohat Achcha Likha Hai, Sidraah Nice Work,.

thank u
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Quote from: anjaan dharkan on October 12, 2009, 11:50:29 AM
thank u

U Are WElcome JI,.
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U Are WElcome JI,.

hay ji
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