~*~ Unki bhi koi majburi hogi ~*~ by Rahim

by dead heart on December 28, 2010, 08:01:59 PM
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Mere ek bahaut khaas aur pyaare bhai ne mujse kaha 'Rahim social topics par likho..' Main unka shukriya ada karna chahunga kay unhone mujhe yeh hausla diya hai..

Yeh kavita thorre ek adult topic par hai aur aise topic par hai jo mujse related nahin mager phir bhi likh gaya kyun kay yeh samaj ka hissa hai..Kehte hai aurat ki izzat karni chahiye..Prostitutes ya vehshiyan bhi toh aurtein hai..kitne izzat karte hai unki? I doubt..
Sitiyan marte hai, nazar pher lete hai aur bahaut kuch..
Ek baar kabhi iss baat pe gaur kiya hai kay woh aurtein prostitutes paida nahin hui thi balke bangayi hai..Iss samaj ne banayi hai..
Yeh kavita parrte waqt yeh khayal apne zehen main rakhiyega 'One isn't born prostitute..One is made.."..Kisi ka balatkar hogaya toh woh iss business main agayi ya kisi ko maa-baap ne bech diya toh iss business main hai..Kabhi unki ankhon main dekhiyega..shayad kuch sachayian dikh jaye..
Unki baat alag hai jo by nature aisi hi hai..kuch larrkiyan hoti hai aisi..

Kavita se pehle ek akhri baat..Woh jo jism bechti hai unhe toh tanz karte ho mager yeh nahin sochte kay yahan sab bikau hai..Koi Imaan bech deta hai, koi zuban bech gaya, koi doston ko bech deta hai aur koi insaanon ko ya insaanon kay purzon ko bech deta hai..Sochiyega zaroor..

Maine bhi ek am se parivar main janam liya hai,
Mager maine na chahte hue bhi apne ashkon ko piya hai..

Koi apni marzi se nahin bechta jism yahaan,
Aisa kaam mujhe zindagi kay halaton ne diya hai..

Apni hawas mitane kay liye istamal karte hai mujhe,
Besharam inhi logon ne mujhe ek gali bana diya hai..

Kaun kehta hai kay main andhera karti hoon,
Biwi aur kam ki thakan se pareshan mardon kay liye,
Mujh jaisi aurtein hi raat ka ‘dia’ hai..

Ager jism niharne kay bajae ankhon main dekhte toh mehsus hota,
Mujhe tumhare sansaar ne hi toh ek veshiya bana diya hai..

Safed suit main gumne walon, apne apko shariff kehte ho,
Kayi baar tum jaise logon ne hi toh ghir kar mera jism liya hai..

Dusron ko bewaffa bulane walon, khud ki astin main dekh lo zara,
Kya kabhi kisi kay zakhmon ko tumne siya hai?

Sabhi toh bikau hai yahan, nakab main gumte rehte hai,
Apne apse aj ek sawal puchlo ‘Khamosh’,
Kya tumne kabhi kisi kay dil pe zakhm nahin kiya hai?

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~
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«Reply #1 on: December 28, 2010, 08:19:11 PM »
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Rahim bhai aapke dil bahut khoobsurat hai,bahut sachai aur woh badnaseebo ke awaaz uttaya,great creation,last 2 lines too good.keep it up icon_salut icon_salut  icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause :clap:God bless you
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«Reply #2 on: December 28, 2010, 08:26:48 PM »
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Its a great message You Have filled with lots of feeling, Good Piece of work Brother,
Jo Dusron ke dard par likhe unka Andaaz hi judaa hota hai, Tumne Ek Kadwi Sachchai ko yahaan bayaan kiya hai,.

Good Job Rahim Bhai

Kisi Ki Beti Thi, Kisi Ki Behan, Kisi Ki Maa Thi Wo,.
Haalat Ne Bazaar Mein Laa Khadaaya Hain Jinhe,.
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«Reply #3 on: December 28, 2010, 08:31:04 PM »
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Sachaii jee, Teh dil se shukriya jee..
Apse kabhi nahin mila phir bhi apne kaha kay mera dil khubsoorat hai..Teh dil se shukriya jee..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #4 on: December 28, 2010, 08:32:54 PM »
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bahut hi bada sach hai Rahim ji... Shukriya aapka padhne ka mauka mila... yun hi likhte rehiye...

Intezar !
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«Reply #5 on: December 28, 2010, 08:34:11 PM »
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Azeem bhaijan,
Apka teh dil se shukriya jee..
Haan har baar khud par nahin likhna chahiye..
Apke liye dher sari mohobatein aur duaein..
Shukriya mere bhai..
Khush rahiye..
Do lines, bahaut khoob.. Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: December 28, 2010, 08:35:07 PM »
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Arey shukriya apka Intezar jee jo apne waqt nikal kar isse parra..Shukriya mere bhai..
Teh dil se shukriya..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #7 on: December 28, 2010, 08:52:03 PM »
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Rahim bhai wakt nikaalne waali koi baat nahin hai bhai... kuch din nahin the YO par isliye kuch padh nahin paa rahe the... aap hume dekh kar chaunkiye mat... hum humesha saatha hain...

Intezar !

Arey shukriya apka Intezar jee jo apne waqt nikal kar isse parra..Shukriya mere bhai..
Teh dil se shukriya..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #8 on: December 29, 2010, 09:12:50 AM »
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kisi ne kaha sach to likhne wale likh dete he isme nayi bat kya hai ...to kehena sahi hoga ki sach wo jisme sach sirf kehen ke liye na ho...apki rachna padhkar ye kaha ja sakta hai waqai bahut khoob likha hai apne..

Rahim bhaiii

dher saari daad~

likhte rahiye~
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«Reply #9 on: December 29, 2010, 09:20:30 AM »
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Rahim ji bahut kuchh kaha aur gehrai mein bhi gaye. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
bahut achha sandesh diya .shukriya
kash ye sandesh doonia ke dilon mein bhi utre.

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«Reply #10 on: December 29, 2010, 10:23:40 AM »
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haqeeqat--
""
yun na sachhai ka aina dikhao
sharm se sharmshar hue jaate hain
     jaankar bhi anjaan sab hain
    julm o sitam ke avtaar hum hain
tees uthati hai darpan ab ye
dhritrastra sa dekhte hum hain
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aapko Sirf duayen dunga Azeem ji..
khus rahiye
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thanx
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«Reply #11 on: December 29, 2010, 10:43:32 AM »
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Bahut umda aur haqiqat se bhara peshkash hai aap ki Rahim Ji
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«Reply #12 on: December 29, 2010, 11:01:55 AM »
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Rahim bhai wakt nikaalne waali koi baat nahin hai bhai... kuch din nahin the YO par isliye kuch padh nahin paa rahe the... aap hume dekh kar chaunkiye mat... hum humesha saatha hain...

Intezar !

Shukriya bhai..!
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«Reply #13 on: December 29, 2010, 11:04:05 AM »
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kisi ne kaha sach to likhne wale likh dete he isme nayi bat kya hai ...to kehena sahi hoga ki sach wo jisme sach sirf kehen ke liye na ho...apki rachna padhkar ye kaha ja sakta hai waqai bahut khoob likha hai apne..

Rahim bhaiii

dher saari daad~

likhte rahiye~
Shukriya Abhi bhaijan..
Teh dil se shukriya..
Khush rahiye.!
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«Reply #14 on: December 29, 2010, 11:07:53 AM »
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Rahim ji bahut kuchh kaha aur gehrai mein bhi gaye. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
bahut achha sandesh diya .shukriya
kash ye sandesh doonia ke dilon mein bhi utre.


Shukriya Suresh jee..
Allah kare sab sachayion se rubaru ho..
Khush rahiye..!
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