Us Pathar ko Pighalne do !! ( Qadeertoopchi )

by junaidqadir on June 29, 2009, 06:17:15 AM
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Isharon tak pahonch ja-o- to nawaz dena !!


Us pathar ko bhi zara pighalne do !!
Na do paani mujhe tishnagi se tadapne do !!

Mere angaan me charag na jala-o-dustoo !!
Zara mujhe bhi meri tanha-e- se ladne do !!

Na milega pyasa tumhe is duniya me koi !!
Zara is darya ko bhi samandar banne do !!

Raath bhar meri maazi ki viraniyun me ghumate rahe mujhe !!
Ab zara thahero waqath-a-saher hai mujhe sajda karne do !!

Aur hoga insaaf har wo zulm ka jo howa hai hum per "Qadeer" !!
Karo sabr zara sa uski rahemath ko machalne do !!

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«Reply #1 on: July 02, 2009, 06:49:59 AM »
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 icon_flower sunny Applause


BAHUT KHOOB QADIR BHAI
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«Reply #2 on: July 02, 2009, 06:55:27 AM »
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Wah wah.. very nice... Applause
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«Reply #3 on: July 02, 2009, 08:19:31 AM »
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Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on July 02, 2009, 06:49:59 AM
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BAHUT KHOOB QADIR BHAI

nawazish karam apka jo apne pasand farmaya !!

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«Reply #4 on: July 02, 2009, 08:27:47 AM »
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Qadeer Saahib,
Bahut hi aala aur umda, wah wah.
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«Reply #5 on: July 02, 2009, 08:31:58 AM »
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waah waah ... Janab Qadeer ... bahut acchi peshkesh hai aap ki... padh kar mazza aa gya ... daad qabuul kijiye!!
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«Reply #6 on: July 02, 2009, 09:07:01 AM »
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Qadeer Saahib,
Bahut hi aala aur umda, wah wah.


Syednaami sahab salamwalekum !!

karam hai apki nazaron ka bus baaqi hamari kya bisaath hai apke aage sahab .. ap jaise urdu dan aur danishwar shaqs ko mera likha pasand aya ye meri khushnasibi hai !! Allah apko khush rakhe sahet-a-yab rakhe !!

Duwaun ka muntazir !!

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«Reply #7 on: July 02, 2009, 09:22:23 AM »
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Janab-a-mann Hum Tum sahab Aadab !!

Kiss la makani me qaid the janab ..nazar hi nahi ate aaj kal .. bade arse ke baad apki maujodgi ne dili massarath di ! !  aur bade masroof maloom hote ho aaj kal yoindia per ana shayad na ke barabar hi hai apka sub qairiyath se to hai .. apko ghazal pasand aa-e- samjho ji li .. jahan bhi raho khush raho bhai .. allah apko khush o khurram rakhe !!


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«Reply #8 on: July 04, 2009, 02:18:51 PM »
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Mashallah Bohat Achcha LIkha Hai, Janaab, Afsos Hai ke Age Hume Pardhne KO Aapke Kalaam Nahi Milenge,.

Bohat Achche,.
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«Reply #9 on: July 05, 2009, 07:35:06 AM »
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nawazish karam apka jo apne pasand farmaya inshallah aage bhi likhne ki koshish rahegi !! duva karna !!

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«Reply #10 on: July 05, 2009, 07:39:32 AM »
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Bahut khoob Qadeer Ji
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«Reply #11 on: July 05, 2009, 09:41:39 AM »
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shukriya rajesh sahab ke apne pasand farmaya !!

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«Reply #12 on: July 05, 2009, 09:59:06 AM »
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Wah Qadeer ji,very beautiful creation. Applause Applause :clap:excellent. icon_thumleft
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«Reply #13 on: July 05, 2009, 01:51:32 PM »
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karam hai apka jo apne waqath diya madhuesh ji .. shukar guzar hon apka jo apne nachiz ki busida ghazal ko saraha !!

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«Reply #14 on: July 05, 2009, 03:21:39 PM »
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Mr. Junaid
What a pity, why you are groaning with such broken heart.
Marvelous work
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