Us Pathar ko Pighalne do !! ( Qadeertoopchi )

by junaidqadir on June 29, 2009, 06:17:15 AM
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«Reply #15 on: July 06, 2009, 12:06:15 AM »
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You r welcome Qadeer ji,aap bahut acha likhte ho,aap ko toh kush hona chaiye,
sach kaheti hoon kamaal ka likhte ho aap. icon_thumleft
Allah afhiz.tke c.
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«Reply #16 on: July 06, 2009, 05:36:51 AM »
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Qadeer saahib,

Ham nacheez kya jaane likhna,
Yunhi buzrigon se hai seekhna.

Shukriya
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«Reply #17 on: July 06, 2009, 08:39:29 AM »
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You r welcome Qadeer ji,aap bahut acha likhte ho,aap ko toh kush hona chaiye,
sach kaheti hoon kamaal ka likhte ho aap. icon_thumleft
Allah afhiz.tke c.

bahoth bahoth sukriya madhuesh ji .. itni izzath bakshi apne ke pora deewan apki nazar karne ko mann karta hai .. allah apko sahet de aur khush o khurram rakhe !!

Apka dost !!

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«Reply #18 on: July 06, 2009, 08:43:16 AM »
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Qadeer saahib,

Ham nacheez kya jaane likhna,
Yunhi buzrigon se hai seekhna.

Shukriya

Nawazish karam syed sahab apki nazaron ne is qabil samjha mujhe .. iss badi izzath kya hosakti hai qaqsar ke liye .. apke ashar ne mujhe jo izzath aur hausla baskha hai usse mutasir hokar yehi kahonga !!

Ye aqlaq , ye hunar , ye kirdar tujhe me !!
Tere aala hone ki daleel hai syed  !!


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«Reply #19 on: July 06, 2009, 10:50:31 AM »
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Quote from: MHussain on July 05, 2009, 03:21:39 PM
Mr. Junaid
What a pity, why you are groaning with such broken heart.
Marvelous work



hausla afza-e- ka shukriya janab .. apki pakiza nazronka karam hai baaqi to khuch nahi !! allah apko khush rakhe !!

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«Reply #20 on: July 06, 2009, 04:04:51 PM »
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Ek chhoti si nazm Qadeer saahib

Is shikanzada mahol ko dekhte hain
Jisse jhurriyon ka dar tak nahin tha

Woh rangeen raaten woh thandi shaamen
Jin men khud khone ka gham tak nahin tha

Andleebon se bhara yeh shehr maine dekha
Jahan kirgison ka koi ghar tak nahin tha

Khudara muhabbat ki yun na dhajjiyan urao
Lotao woh mazi jis men hasad tak nahin tha.

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«Reply #21 on: July 06, 2009, 06:35:36 PM »
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Mr. Junaid, I am a bit confused, what is the relation between you and Qadeer Toopchii, when my reply was for Junaid Qadir? Would you let me know?
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«Reply #22 on: July 06, 2009, 06:39:16 PM »
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Nice poetry work Mr. Naami.
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«Reply #23 on: July 06, 2009, 06:46:31 PM »
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Quote from: MHussain on July 06, 2009, 06:35:36 PM
Mr. Junaid, I am a bit confused, what is the relation between you and Qadeer Toopchii, when my reply was for Junaid Qadir? Would you let me know?
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janab-a-mann hussain sahab salamwalekum !!

badahi acha sawal kiya apne ..qadeertoopchi mai hon aur jaunid qadeertoopchi ka  saaya hai ... khulke kahon to dono eak hi hain ..junaidqadir mera hi ID tha ..khuch wajowad ki wajhe se yoindia ke qabil shaksiyaton ne mera account delete kar diya .. to dusra ID amal me lana pada .. qair apne masle pe gaur farmaya iske liye shukriya .. aur hausla afza-e- ke liye shukar guzaar hon !! allah apko sahet de aur khush rakhe !! Ameen !!

Apka bhai
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«Reply #24 on: July 06, 2009, 06:48:14 PM »
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Wah Qadeer sahab...Kya likha hai...uski rehmat rahe apki kalam par.
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«Reply #25 on: July 06, 2009, 06:52:16 PM »
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Quote from: syednaami on July 06, 2009, 04:04:51 PM
Ek chhoti si nazm Qadeer saahib

Is shikanzada mahol ko dekhte hain
Jisse jhurriyon ka dar tak nahin tha

Woh rangeen raaten woh thandi shaamen
Jin men khud khone ka gham tak nahin tha

Andleebon se bhara yeh shehr maine dekha
Jahan kirgison ka koi ghar tak nahin tha

Khudara muhabbat ki yun na dhajjiyan urao
Lotao woh mazi jis men hasad tak nahin tha.

Syed

subhan allah sayed sahab kya hi nayab nazam pesh ki hai apne wah bhai wah !! jawab nahi apki pakad shayari per ..3rd ashar ke second misre me kitni baadi baath kahe di sahab ..usse mutasir hokar Eqbal sahab ka eak nayab ashar yaad agaya !!

hifazath ki jiyega !!

Dono ki parvaz hai eak hi fiza me !!
kirgis ka jahan aur hai to shahin ka jahan aur !!

.............marhoom Allama Eqbal sahab ..............

syed sahab samjhne wale ke liye bahoth badi baath chupi hai apki nazam me dil khush kar diya janab apne ..allah apke kalamo ko miyari izzath de !! Ameen !!

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«Reply #26 on: July 06, 2009, 06:54:50 PM »
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Quote from: Vikk16 on July 06, 2009, 06:48:14 PM
Wah Qadeer sahab...Kya likha hai...uski rehmat rahe apki kalam par.

janab a mann vikk sahab adaab !!

ap eak guest hokar bhi meri ghazal ko comments dene ki zahemath ki uske liye apka shukar guzaar hon .. apki nagahon ko ruk di meri kalam qaqsar ke liye isse badi baath kya hosakti hai janab !!allah apko abaad rakhe khush rakhe !!

Apka bhai !!

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«Reply #27 on: July 06, 2009, 07:04:53 PM »
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Pleased to know that, but there is a question, why deleting an ID when a person can return with new one?
Anyway thanks for the explanation.
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«Reply #28 on: July 08, 2009, 07:56:04 AM »
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Quote from: MHussain on July 06, 2009, 06:39:16 PM
Nice poetry work Mr. Naami.
Aap ki bari nawazish Hussain Sahib. Bahut Shukriya

Quote from: qadeertoopchii on July 06, 2009, 06:52:16 PM
subhan allah sayed sahab kya hi nayab nazam pesh ki hai apne wah bhai wah !! jawab nahi apki pakad shayari per ..3rd ashar ke second misre me kitni baadi baath kahe di sahab ..usse mutasir hokar Eqbal sahab ka eak nayab ashar yaad agaya !!

hifazath ki jiyega !!

Dono ki parvaz hai eak hi fiza me !!
kirgis ka jahan aur hai to shahin ka jahan aur !!

.............marhoom Allama Eqbal sahab ..............

syed sahab samjhne wale ke liye bahoth badi baath chupi hai apki nazam me dil khush kar diya janab apne ..allah apke kalamo ko miyari izzath de !! Ameen !!

Qadeertoopchi

Jee muhtaram, ham ne to suratehaal ko dekh kar jo samjhe likh dala, ab nagavaar bhi lag sakta hai na.
Par ab tanz men hai to kyun golmatol likhna. Samjhe na ustad-e-girami
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