wo jhool gayaa....

by NETRAPAL on June 05, 2009, 04:01:09 AM
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Aaj fir ek albelaa jhool gayaa
Daal ke fandaa gale me apne
Jaan pe apnee khel gayaa
Nahi thaa wo sardaar bhagat singh
Naam purkho ka  dubaa gayaa
Maa baap kaa anmol ratn wo
Apne jeewan se khel gayaa….

Bhrastaachar ke jangal me
Rishwat khoree kee daldal me
Dekho kaise wo ulajh gayaa
Foonk chukka tha saree punjee
Girve wo ghar tak rakh aayaa
Beyeemaano ke baajzaar me
wo abaagaa lut aayaa

Maa-baap kee ek aankh wo
Pyaree bahanaa kee ek aas wo
Apne parivaar ka ek sahaaraa
Bebasee ke daldal doob gayaa
maa baap kaa anmol rattan wo
jeewan se apne khel gayaa
Aaj fir ek albelaa jhul gayaa…..

Achaa thaa wo jhool gayaa
Jeewan se apne khel gayaa
Jeewan kee saree uljhan ko
Kaise dekho wo bhool gayaa

Ayse kaise wo jee paataa
Daridr se dikhte maat peitaa
Fate kapdo me dikthee bahnaa
Ek wakt kee ghar me rotee
Bharee karj kee dikhtee laathee
In sabbme thaa wo ulajh gayaa
Sab kee ankho kaa taaraa
Jeewan se apne khel gayaa….


Netrapal....
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«Reply #1 on: June 05, 2009, 11:10:35 AM »
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Subhan Allah, Netra Bhai, KamaalKa Likha Hai Aapne,.
Sachchi Great Lines,Bohat Bohat Achche,.
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«Reply #2 on: June 05, 2009, 09:18:42 PM »
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Quote from: NETRAPAL on June 05, 2009, 04:01:09 AM

Aaj fir ek albelaa jhool gayaa
Daal ke fandaa gale me apne
Jaan pe apnee khel gayaa
Nahi thaa wo sardaar bhagat singh
Naam purkho ka  dubaa gayaa
Maa baap kaa anmol ratn wo
Apne jeewan se khel gayaa….

Bhrastaachar ke jangal me
Rishwat khoree kee daldal me
Dekho kaise wo ulajh gayaa
Foonk chukka tha saree punjee
Girve wo ghar tak rakh aayaa
Beyeemaano ke baajzaar me
wo abaagaa lut aayaa

Maa-baap kee ek aankh wo
Pyaree bahanaa kee ek aas wo
Apne parivaar ka ek sahaaraa
Bebasee ke daldal doob gayaa
maa baap kaa anmol rattan wo
jeewan se apne khel gayaa
Aaj fir ek albelaa jhul gayaa…..

Achaa thaa wo jhool gayaa
Jeewan se apne khel gayaa
Jeewan kee saree uljhan ko
Kaise dekho wo bhool gayaa

Ayse kaise wo jee paataa
Daridr se dikhte maat peitaa
Fate kapdo me dikthee bahnaa
Ek wakt kee ghar me rotee
Bharee karj kee dikhtee laathee
In sabbme thaa wo ulajh gayaa
Sab kee ankho kaa taaraa
Jeewan se apne khel gayaa….


Netrapal....


Ye padhte padhte kaanp si gayi main....aapki har rachna main itni sachchai hoti hai ki shabd, shabd nahin, manzar ban ke aankh ke saamne aa jaate hain !!

Bohot Khoob Netra Ji
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«Reply #3 on: June 06, 2009, 03:56:22 AM »
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Quote from: Azeem on June 05, 2009, 11:10:35 AM
Subhan Allah, Netra Bhai, KamaalKa Likha Hai Aapne,.
Sachchi Great Lines,Bohat Bohat Achche,.

very very thanks ajim bhayee....

Netra...
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«Reply #4 on: June 06, 2009, 04:07:22 AM »
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thanks clemira ji aap ko kye rachna pasand aayee....

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«Reply #5 on: June 06, 2009, 03:34:48 PM »
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SubanAllah Netrapal Ji.. Bahoot Bahoot Khoob.. Likha hai
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«Reply #6 on: June 07, 2009, 08:08:46 AM »
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Bahut bahut accha likha hai aapne Netra ji...  Applause

Kuch lines toh lajawab bana hai.

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Maa-baap kee ek aankh wo
Pyaree bahanaa kee ek aas wo
Apne parivaar ka ek sahaaraa
Bebasee ke daldal doob gayaa
maa baap kaa anmol rattan wo
jeewan se apne khel gayaa
Aaj fir ek albelaa jhul gayaa…..

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«Reply #7 on: June 08, 2009, 01:32:50 PM »
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Quote from: Sophi on June 06, 2009, 03:34:48 PM
SubanAllah Netrapal Ji.. Bahoot Bahoot Khoob.. Likha hai

thanks sophi ji,

Netra..
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«Reply #8 on: June 08, 2009, 01:33:38 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on June 07, 2009, 08:08:46 AM
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thanks roja ji,

Netra..
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