wo kachan

by NETRAPAL on December 07, 2009, 05:02:36 AM
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Wo kchan aakhir aa hee gayaa
Roshan deep, aashaaon kaa, ho hee gyaa
Bahataa thaa neer jin ankho se kabee
Un aaknkho ko muskuraanaa aa hee gayaa

Kitnee muddaton ke baad wo kchan aayaa hai
Ghar ka har saksh  mukuraayaa hai
Bekaaree ke abheeshaap se the udaas jo
Kagaj k ek tukade ne unhe hansaayaa hai

Kisee gareeb kee aashaa thaa mai
Badee killat me palaa thaa mai
Lutaa diyaa tha sub kuch mere apno ne
Dhaayee akshar fir pad paaya  thaa mai

Bade-bade kagaj ke tukde , mujhe
Sapano ke saagar me duba rahe the
Ab sab kuch badal jaayeaa
Ye khwaab dikhaa rahe the

N maloom tha,
khwaab khwaab hee rah jayegaa
Noto kaa pulandaa un degree
se bhaaree ho jayegaa
aarakshan muskarayega
kaabliyat pe meree
koi apang mujh se
aage nikal jaayegaa

kismat aaj maharbaan ho gayee hai
ek chithee meree naam bhee aa gayee hai
dekhte the udaas jo mere apne
hoton pe unke hansee aa gayee hai

dekh apno kee khushi
mai bhee khush ho gayaa hoo
ksak dil kee mai chipaa gayaa hoo
jud gayaa hoo sarkaar se
ek kalark ban gayaa hooo

Netra...
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«Reply #1 on: December 07, 2009, 05:11:03 AM »
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dosto badee jaldbaajee me likhee gayee poem hai abhee editing karne kaa samay nahee hai isme huyee kuch galtiyon ke liye kchamaa chahtaahoo.

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«Reply #2 on: December 07, 2009, 07:34:37 AM »
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nice.  Applause
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«Reply #3 on: December 08, 2009, 06:44:18 AM »
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Wah Nethra ji ,great creation,bahut gaherai hai aapke kavita mein.excellent. Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause :clap:keep it up
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«Reply #4 on: December 08, 2009, 08:54:32 AM »
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thanks thinkhaatk, madhu jee aapne ise padha

Netra...
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«Reply #5 on: December 08, 2009, 09:17:10 AM »
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most well come
netra ji.
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«Reply #6 on: December 08, 2009, 09:24:32 AM »
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Bahut shandaar poem likhi hai Netrapal. Bahut achhi lagi. Ismein editing ki koi khaas zaroorat nahi hai. Nice sharing.
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«Reply #7 on: December 08, 2009, 09:39:17 AM »
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thanks riyaj for reading and reply

Netra..
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«Reply #8 on: December 08, 2009, 10:15:12 AM »
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kalark ban gayaa hoo
haa mai kalark ban gayaa hoo
padhaa thaa jo maine
koson door usse ho gayaa hoo
fir bhee yahee kahte hai sab
mai apno kaa bhavishya ban gayaa hoo

software padhtaa tha kabhee
aaj ledger banaa rahaa hoo
ho rahaa hoo gumhraah mai
gumraah oron ko kar rahaa hoo
bas yahee santosh hai man me
apne pitaa kee khushee ban gayaa hoo
haa mai kalark ban gayaa hoo

chian se sote hai sab
mai bhee chain so jaaongaa
khwaab liye man me
apne bete ko padhaaongaa

wo pal bhee aayegaa
meraa betaa bhee muskaayegaa
khwaab hojaayegaa pooraa meraa
jab wo bhee kalark ban jaayegaa

Netra..
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«Reply #9 on: December 08, 2009, 10:24:12 AM »
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Wah Netrapal Ji aap to bahut creative hain. Halaate hazra par kya khoob nazm likhi hai. congrat. Nice sharing. thanks.
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«Reply #10 on: December 08, 2009, 10:37:06 AM »
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Netra Ji , Bahut khoob likha hai aap ne
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«Reply #11 on: December 08, 2009, 11:09:34 AM »
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Quote from: riyaz106 on December 08, 2009, 10:24:12 AM
Wah Netrapal Ji aap to bahut creative hain. Halaate hazra par kya khoob nazm likhi hai. congrat. Nice sharing. thanks.

thanks riyaz bhaayee...

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«Reply #12 on: December 08, 2009, 11:10:05 AM »
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Quote from: Rajesh Harish on December 08, 2009, 10:37:06 AM
Netra Ji , Bahut khoob likha hai aap ne

thanks rajesh jee

Netra..
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«Reply #13 on: December 08, 2009, 11:15:03 AM »
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Most Welcome Netrapal Bhai.
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«Reply #14 on: January 24, 2010, 08:58:35 AM »
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Very Nice Netrapaal Ji
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