WO KHET JOTTA HAI:Tanziya aur Tehreekbaksh Shayariyan

NETRAPAL

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Wo nange badan khet jotta hai
Apne aap me magan wo khet jotta hai
Dhoop hai badee, n dhoop dekhta hai
Nange pano se wo jameen rondta hai

Panee kee hai payas magar peena ka wakt nahi
Chaaya hai ped kee ghanee rukane ka wakt nahi
Taharee hoyee najar se bas suraj ko dekhta hai
hai salvate mathe par, wo kya sochta hai
jhukakar najro ko neeche jameen dekhta hai
Wo khet jotta hai, wo khet jotta hai.

Mayoos najro se wo sukhe badlo mo dekhta hai
Ane wale akaal kee ahat ko sun raha hai
Chukaye ga karj kaise yahee soch raha hai
Nange panv magar wo khet jot raha hai

Hotee wakt se pahale badee betee ko dekta hai
Padhe likhe bete ke bhawish ko dekhta hai
Kyo diya janm kissan ka bhagwaan se poochta hai
Nange bandan wala jo khete jotta hai…..

Hota hai sada naraaj usse bhagawaan bhee
Nahi deta hai saath kabheee uska Raaj bhee
Ye khel hai khuda ka jo wakt dikha raha hai
Sabko khilane wala bhuke pet chal raha hai
Wo sukhe hue baile se jo hal chala raha hai...
Wo khet jotta hai…….

netrapal....


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Rajbir

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«Reply #1 on: October 25, 2007, 09:13:10 AM »

Netra

Excellent ! Superb ! =D> =D> =D>

Quote from: "NETRAPAL"

Hota hai sada naraaj usse bhagawaan bhee
Nahi deta hai saath kabheee uska Raaj bhee
Ye khel hai khuda ka jo wakt dikha raha hai
Sabko khilane wala bhuke pet chal raha hai
Wo sukhe hue baile se jo hal chala raha hai...
Wo khet jotta hai…….[/color]

Poem ka end bahut he powerful hai =D> =D> =D>

Bahut din baad aap ka likha padhne ko mila !

I have inserted an image in ur post, hope you don't mind.

Aate rahiyega !


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Raman.S

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«Reply #2 on: October 25, 2007, 11:59:51 AM »

waao ji kya baat hai..bhai aap ne to kammal kar diya..itni achi poem mein ne bahut dino baad padhi hai waao..shabd kam pad gayi aap ki tarif mein...aesome... =D> =D> =D> =D> =D> =D> =D>


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deepika_divya

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«Reply #3 on: October 25, 2007, 12:03:13 PM »

YEs Netrapal ji .. its really amazing... wonder ful creation by U always jara hatt k ..

Divya


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punam

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«Reply #4 on: October 25, 2007, 12:03:13 PM »

wow Netra ji kya khoob likha aapne....
bahot hi acha hai aur kisan ki jeevan ka sachai bayan kiye aap ne...
bahot dino ke baad aap ka rachna parne ko mila...behad khushi huyi par ke...


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Roja

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«Reply #5 on: October 25, 2007, 04:04:13 PM »

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bahut khoob Netra ji... .. =D>


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NETRAPAL

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«Reply #6 on: October 26, 2007, 03:31:43 AM »

Quote from: "Rajbir"

Netra

Excellent ! Superb ! =D> =D> =D>

Quote from: "NETRAPAL"

Poem ka end bahut he powerful hai =D> =D> =D>

Bahut din baad aap ka likha padhne ko mila !

I have inserted an image in ur post, hope you don't mind.

Aate rahiyega !

thanks sir,

aapne image share kare is poem me char chand laga diye thanks again sir

netra....


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NETRAPAL

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«Reply #7 on: October 26, 2007, 03:35:51 AM »

bahoot bahoot shukriya raman bahi
dipeeka ji, poonam ji, roja ji aap sab
hee ahca likhte hai abhoot kuch seekha hai aap logo se...

netra.....


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Pooja

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«Reply #8 on: October 26, 2007, 08:17:53 PM »

bahoot khoob Netra ji!!! kal se apki kavita pard kar kuch likhne ki soch rahi hu... kuch khas nahi likha gaya... magar jo bhi likha wo yaha likh rahi hu...

Mandi mai baitha kisaan, mol tolta hai
Apni mehnat ka kaya hua anjaam sochta hai

Mahino ki mehanat aor yah chand sikke
Kab tak chalega isse ghar, yah tolta hai

Pad jaata jo, to kuch yah kisaan bhi samjh jaata
Kis tarah se insaan ajj insaan ko nochta hai

Ankhon mai dard, man mai sawal liye
Phir se dekho yah Kisaan, apne kheto ko jot.ta hai

Mandi mai baitha kisaan, mol tolta hai
Apni mehnat ka kaya hua anjaam sochta hai...............


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Pooja

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«Reply #9 on: October 26, 2007, 08:36:44 PM »

kuch bhi acha nahi likha ja raha sad5

Ek koshish aor Kisaano per kuch likhne ki...

Jeete hai cricket to crodo ka unke liye inaam hai
Dharti se sona ugaane walo ka na koi maan hai

Sahara ne diye her criketer ko ek ek makan hai
Sabka pat bharne wale ke sir per tooti chat ka ek naam hai

Waise to ajj chand per ja pahuncha insaan hai
Kisano ke liye kiya kaya, iska na kahi koi namo-nishan hai

Karj le le kar jot.ta hai her baar wo apni jameen ko
Ghar mai kahne ko hi uske koi samaan hai

Bane park bade bade, nakli jheelo ke sung, manoranjan ke liye
Kisaano ki paani ki kami se, shayad yah prshaasan anjaan hai

Netao ke wahan khurche per roj kharch ho jaate hai lakho
Kisaano ke liye magar raj-kosh main na koi farmaan hai

Jeete hai cricket to crodo ka unke liye inaam hai
Dharti se sona ugaane walo ka na koi maan hai


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Pooja

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«Reply #10 on: October 26, 2007, 08:57:42 PM »

Netra ji apne itna acha Topic diya hai ki ... man her pal bas issi topic per soch raha hai...

ek aor koshish likhne ki kar rahi hu:

Kisaano ke kheto per suna hai ab karkhane banege
Desh ki unaati kaya issi tarah se yah log karege

Bharta hai jo sabka pat, ajj ussi ki chat chin kar
Na jaane kaha apne karmo ka bhugtaan karege
Desh ki unatti kaya issi tarah se yah log karege

Kahan jayege yah kisaan, aor kaya wo kaam karege
Laker kisaano ki bad dua kaise log vaypaar karege
Desh ki unatti kaya issi tarah se yah log karege

Bante rahe karkhane kheto per, To kaha kisaan phir kheiti karege
Ayega anaaz kaha se, kaise sab log phir pat bharege
Desh ki unatti kaya issi tarah se yah log karege
Suna hai kisaano ke kheto per ab karkhane banege...................


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Rajbir

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«Reply #11 on: October 26, 2007, 09:28:40 PM »

Pooja

Bahut sahi likha hai =D> =D> =D>

Main aap sab jaisa to nahi likh sakta, magar koshish karta hoon tasveeron ke zariye apne kisan bhaiyon ki dasha ka khulasa kar sakoon sad5


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Pooja

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«Reply #12 on: October 26, 2007, 09:38:28 PM »

bahoot khoob Veer ji!!! her picture apne app bol rahi hai aor kisaano ki dasha bata rahi hai...


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NETRAPAL

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«Reply #13 on: October 27, 2007, 04:01:33 AM »

bahoot khoob pooja jee aapne to kamal kar diya bahu achaa likha hai

netra....


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NETRAPAL

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«Reply #14 on: October 27, 2007, 04:05:46 AM »

rajbeer jee aapne tasveero ke dwara jo kisaano kee dasha ka warnan kiya hai waha srahniy hai. ye tasveere itnaa kuch kah rahee hai jitna koi likh bhee nahi saktaa

netra....


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