Woh dikhte hue chhupe haalat !

Something to share with my Yoindian friends .. not sure if worthy enough to share!

What you are going to see below can be of no sense but what I tried to write is a thing which is mostly not discussed. May be I misunderstood or may be people just don't want to talk about this or may be they see but still do not see or may be for some its not even there. Here I tried to put together few lines talking about a girl who is now an adult but being older means many things. Read it on and find out.

Jawaan aurat main bani,
yeh tan, yeh dheh kaya aisi nikhari..
Ki jaa ke kahan mein chippu,
Sankuchai si ki kaise teer drashti se bachun,
Mano mera tan nagn,
Kaise  swem ko surakshit mein rakhun?
Geedar samaan jaise mujhe woh ankhon se nochen..
Kya maine kiya koi apraadh..
Kyun mein iss apraadhbodh sang jeevan rachun?
Jo bachpan beeta laga mujhe
Ab nayi srashti mere angne pankh phelayegi..
Par maalum naa tha ki krur satya bhi saath layegi
Jaise lage ki har pal ek yudh ho
Aur nayan mere Yoddha evam
Har uss totalti drashti ke wo virudhh ho
Yeh kaisi vyatha ghir aayi
Abhi toh bachpan langha ..fir
Kyun ankahi duvidha maine payi
Kya mein Jawaan Aurat mein bani …
Aur mujhpe ye dandaatmak karyewahi?

Its small one and real meaning lies in few lines. Its just not about grown up girl who find herself unsafe but its about every growing and grown up girls who gets conscious about every person looking at them as if everyone is trying to see through their body..May be some people are there who do so but not everyone.

Its really a minor thing but do we really need to ignore it ?

Lastly, do give your views about my views. Negative and positive.. everything is invited. And if I misunderstood or misrepresented anything here then please correct me and also forgive me  if it caused inconvenience.


~Ricky

Ricky

Amazing work !

Ek mard ho kar jo aap ne ek naari ki bhaawnao ko vyakt kiya hai...bahut he sarahniye hai

I liked it very very much ... bravo

Thankyou Rajbir Ji, this is why I want some more views from girls over here because as I said, its not the common thing which I tried to express here, nor I ever felt but still I am here with something like this!

Bohot ache Ricky.. sach mein, i think yeh ek aisa stage hai which every girl has to go through..
seriously, aap mard hokar itni achi tarah se aurton ki feelings ko na keval samajh paye ho, balki itne sundar alfazon mein inhe pesh kiya hai..
kabil-e-tareef!

Pooja, you have also written nicely.

Tallu

Very nice analysis of what Ricky has written...I think this is what Ricky was expecting.

@Pooja

Nice reply, but i am sure you will reply in a manner in which Ricky has expressed his views about a girl's transformation into womanhood.

That's a nice reply

Bahut shai likha  hai aapne pooja didi. Acha laga padkar