Ye Kahaan Aa Gaye Hum,.

by Jaanasheen on January 28, 2009, 06:50:23 PM
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Salaam Doston,.
Ye Shayari Un Logon Ke Liye Hai, Jo Apna Desh, Apne Ghar Waalon Ko, Chord Kar Kamaane Aaye Hain,.


Aa Pahooncha Hoon Wahaan, Jahaan Daulat Milti Hai,.
Maa-Baap Ka Pyaar, Na Apno Ki Chahat Milti Hai,.

Baatein Karta Hoon Jab Biwi Bachchon Se Ro Pardta Hoon,.
Kaam Pe Bhi Dil Nahi Lagta, Dil KO Bhi Na Raahat Milti Hai,.

Sochta Hoon, Paise To Aakhir Kamaa Raha Hoon Main.
Lekin Zindagi Ka Ek Anmol Hisaa Gawaa Raha Hoon Main,.

Jab Cheenk Aati To, Sab Ke Haaton Mein Romaal Dekhta,.
Ab Hoke Pardes Mein, Bimaariyaan Bhi Chupaa Raha Hoon Main,.

Eid Ya Diwaali Jab Aati Hai, Aankh Meri Bhar Aati Hai,.
Gharwaalon Se Jab Baat Karta Hoon Bechaini Bardh Jaati Hai,.

Hazaar Rupaiy Bhi Jab Kamaata Tha, Chain Se Main So Jaata Tha,.
Aaj Laakhon Kamaata Hoon Phir Bhi, Neend Hi Nahi Aati Hai,.

Wo Kaisa Junoon Chaaya Tha, Jab Yahaan Kamaane Main Aaya Tha,.
Aaj Sabki Kami Mehsus Karta Hoon, Sab Ki Yaad Sataati Hai,.

Na Kisi Ki Maut Pe, Na Kisi Ki Shaadi Mein Shareek Hota Hoon,.
Kitna Badnaseeb Hoon Main, Soch Sochkar Ye Rota Hoon,.

Biwi Kehti Hai Mujhe, Bachcha Bilkul Aap Jaisa Lagta Hai,.
Jab Phone Par Use Pukaarte Ho, Sunkar Bohat Hasta Hai,.

Kis Se Kahoon Haal Apna, Khud Aansoon Mein Muskuraata Hoon,.
Ghar Waalon Ki Khateer Hi, Main Itne Dukh Seh Jaata Hoon,.

Jab Aata Hai Waqt Ghar Jaane Ka, Khushi Chehre Pe Dekhta Hoon,.
Sab Ke Liye Kya Tohfa Doon, Sab Ki Pasand Ko Sochta Hoon,.

Paise Kamaane Ki Khateer Maine, Har Khwaaish Ko Maar Diya,.
KHud Bhi Raha Bechain Main, Ghar Waalon Ko Bhi Intezaar Diya,.

___________________________________-Jaanasheen-,.

Maaf Karna Agar Kisi Ko Mere Kisi Bhi Lafz Se Takleef Hui Ho To,.
Ye Haqeeqat Hai, Jo Guzarti Hai, Jo Pardes Jaate Hain, Kuch Kamaane Ke Liye, Zindagi Sajaane Ke Liye,.
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«Reply #1 on: January 28, 2009, 07:15:46 PM »
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Shukriya Hanan Ji, Shukriya Pardhne Ke Liye,.
And Welcome To Yoindia.,
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«Reply #2 on: January 29, 2009, 05:17:38 AM »
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wah wah mere bhai...kamal ka likha hai...sabse badi baat dusron ke dilon ka haal likha hai...bahaut khoob...


dekta hoon apne ap ko aine main toh amir nazar ata hoon,
dil ke aine main bina pyar ke ek bikhari nazar ata hoon...

yeh kaisi zindagi jee raha hoon jisme paisa hi maa-baap hai,
dusre bachon ko unke maa-baap ke saath dekta hoon to ansuon main doob jata hoon...
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«Reply #3 on: January 29, 2009, 05:36:57 AM »
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    Applause Applause

Wah Bhaijaan aapne kamal ka likha hai pardes mein
jaate hi humen kuch khushiyan naseeb nahi hoti...


Nice lines DH.... Thumbs UP

 
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«Reply #4 on: January 29, 2009, 07:24:45 AM »
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Bohat khoob Azeem and very well supported by DH........ Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Ek sher yaad aa gaya.....

Mera zameer agar khud_khushi nahi karta
Main kabhi zindagi me naukri nahi karta

                             -NM-
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«Reply #5 on: January 29, 2009, 08:20:53 AM »
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waah Azeem ....  bahut acche. hota hai yun bhi ke apno se bichadna padta hai .... halatton se ladna padta hai ..... naseeb jane insaan ko kab kha le jaye .... phir to bas yaadooN ke shahre hi zindagi kat-ti hai .. khair ... naseeb pe kiska zor... acccha likha hai ... yun hi likhte rahiye.


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«Reply #6 on: January 29, 2009, 10:00:33 AM »
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Shukriya Rahim Bhai,.
Jaya Didi, Sajid Bhaiya,.
And Humtum Bhaijaaan,.

Well Said Sajid Bhai,.
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«Reply #7 on: January 29, 2009, 10:32:16 AM »
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bahut bahut khoob Azeem Applause Applause Applause
kamaal likha hai aapne
zindagi ki ek aur haqeeqat se rubaru karaya sabhi ko
shukriya notworthy
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«Reply #8 on: January 29, 2009, 11:18:46 AM »
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Subhan allah , subhan allah , wah azeem ,

Maine mere chute bhai azeem se eak request kit hi ke wo hum sare pardesiyon per eak nazam likhe aur qurbaan jaun is nazam ke wah wah kya likha hai azeem !! alfaz ko goli maro tumhari nazam ka ahesaas pada hai maine kya likha hai kasam khuda ankh bhar –a- meri aur subha se zara busy tha isiliye nahi dek saka magar ap afsos ho raha hai ke ye nazam maine kaise miss kardi !! wah wah azeem !! kya likha hai mer dost !! watan aur ghar ki yaad taza kar di azeem tumne kya nayab saugath di hai tumne pardesiyon ko !! sub se guzarish ke ghazal ke ahesas tak pahonch kar maza len !!


Kya kahene is sher ke !!

Biwi kaheti hai meri ke beta bilkul ap jaisa dekhta hai !! is sher per azeem, meri eak  wah ka ashar aur maqta pesh karta hon tamam pardesi bahiyon ke naam !!  tawajo chahonga subki ye ghazal maine ahesas se kamtari me mubtila hokar likha thi !! pori ghazal kabhi inshallah pesh karonga

Wo kaheti ke mera beta bilkul mere jaise dikhta hai !!
Allah ne shayad meri shakal se milti eak shakal bana diya !!
Ab usse dekhne ko dil karta hai !! magar halath se dar lagta hai !!
Gurbath ne mujhe kitna kamzoor bana diya !!

Kal beti se bath karke aisa laga Qadeer !!
Jaise bhikari ko kissi ne qalandar bana diya !!

Qadeeer Toopchi
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Shukriya Kashish Ji,.
Thanks For Reading,.

Shukriya Bhaijaan, Ab Mujhe Khushi Hui, Ke Meri Mehnat Cheez Hui, Kyunki, Aapse Baat Karke Mujhe Aapke Dil Bechaini Ka Ehsaas Hua, Aur Socha Aap Jaise Aur Bhi Bhai Behan Hain Jo Door Hain, Pardes Mein Hain, Unpar Kuch Likhne Ki Koshish Karoon,.
Aur Shukriya Bhai Ke Aapne Is Pardha,.
Mera Likhna Kamyaab Hua,.

Thank U Brother,.
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«Reply #10 on: January 29, 2009, 12:31:28 PM »
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Quote from: abdulqadeer on January 29, 2009, 11:18:46 AM

Wo kaheti ke mera beta bilkul mere jaise dikhta hai !!
Allah ne shayad meri shakal se milti eak shakal bana diya !!
Ab usse dekhne ko dil karta hai !! magar halath se dar lagta hai !!
Gurbath ne mujhe kitna kamzoor bana diya !!

Kal beti se bath karke aisa laga Qadeer !!
Jaise bhikari ko kissi ne qalandar bana diya !!

Qadeeer Toopchi

Bohat khoob Qadeer......... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #11 on: January 29, 2009, 12:42:37 PM »
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shukriya Sajid jee aur Honey jee..

bahaut khoob Sajid jee aur Qadeer jee..
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«Reply #12 on: January 29, 2009, 01:18:13 PM »
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kamal h yaar.... Applause
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Shukriya Stormy Ji,.
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«Reply #14 on: January 29, 2009, 01:52:11 PM »
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waah azeem ji subhanallah!!...kya baat hai..bahut khoob... Applause  Applause
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