ye kaisa manzar hai !! -Panna 2:Tanziya aur Tehreekbaksh Shayariyan

abdulqadeer

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«Reply #15 on: February 05, 2009, 01:26:08 PM »

Quote from: Jaanasheen on February 05, 2009, 11:07:09 AM

Shukriya Bhaijaan, Aur Thank U Bhai,.

Aameeen,.

ISme shukriya walikaunsi bath hai azeem !! allah tumhe khush rakhe mere bhai !! Ameen !!

Qadeer Toopchi


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Talat

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Re: ye kaisa manzar hai !!

«Reply #16 on: February 05, 2009, 05:30:08 PM »

Quote from: khwaish on February 04, 2009, 04:02:08 PM

Bahut Bahut Khoob Talat...Aapne bhi Sirf Chaar Line mein Bahut Kuch Keh Diya..

Thanks so much Khwaish Dost


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abdulqadeer

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Re: ye kaisa manzar hai !!

«Reply #17 on: February 10, 2009, 06:50:52 AM »

quote author=anjaan dharkan link=topic=42964.msg849735#msg849735 date=1233751589]
bahot khub surat qadeer bhaiyya... bahot bahot bahot pasand aaya!
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Shukriya bahen !! allah tumhe khush rakhe !!

Qadeer Toopchi


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Re: ye kaisa manzar hai !!

«Reply #18 on: February 10, 2009, 02:30:31 PM »

Quote from: abdulqadeer on February 10, 2009, 06:50:52 AM

quote author=anjaan dharkan link=topic=42964.msg849735#msg849735 date=1233751589]
bahot khub surat qadeer bhaiyya... bahot bahot bahot pasand aaya!

Shukriya bahen !! allah tumhe khush rakhe !!

Qadeer Toopchi

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chitralsony

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Re: ye kaisa manzar hai !!

«Reply #19 on: February 14, 2009, 05:07:08 PM »

bhot piyara andaaz hay apka ,keep it up


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junaidqadir

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Re: ye kaisa manzar hai !!

«Reply #20 on: May 14, 2009, 06:39:17 AM »

Quote from: chitralsony on February 14, 2009, 05:07:08 PM

bhot piyara andaaz hay apka ,keep it up

bahoth bahoth shukriya apka

Qadeer


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madhuwesh

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Re: ye kaisa manzar hai !!

«Reply #21 on: May 14, 2009, 06:45:20 AM »

very nice qadeer ji aur celmira ji,


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SARVESH RASTOGI

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Re: ye kaisa manzar hai !!

«Reply #22 on: May 15, 2009, 04:55:51 PM »

Bahut Sachchhi tasvir pesh ki hai Qadeer Bhai
Waah Waah

KAISE BATLAEN MAT POOCHHO KITNI GHABRAHAT HOTI HAI
JAB SHAAM DHALE DARWAJE PER KOI BHI AAHAT HOTI HAI

VAHSHIPAN KA YE AALAM HAI YUVKON KI MAST JAWANI BHI
DAHSHAT KE SARD ANDHERON ME APNI GARMAHAT KHOTI HAI

AAZAD PARINDE JAB UDKAR PANKHON KI SHAAN DIKHATE HAIN
ANHONI KI ASHANKA SE MAN ME AKULAHAT HOTI HAI

SARVESH RASTOGI


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junaidqadir

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Re: ye kaisa manzar hai !!

«Reply #23 on: May 16, 2009, 11:33:27 AM »

subhan allah rastogi sahab bahoth beshqimti kalam se nawaza hai is haqeeq insaan ki thread ko ...tarif karna suraj diya dekhne wali baath hogi !! allah khush rakhe apko !!

Qadeer


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Niha Khan

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Re: ye kaisa manzar hai !!

«Reply #24 on: April 22, 2011, 05:33:26 PM »

Quote from: abdulqadeer on February 04, 2009, 12:13:46 PM

Ye ghazal maine pahele eak mahefil me padi thi !! aur ajj yoindia ke nazar kar raha hon aur is ghazal ke khuch ashar pesh nahi kar sakta mahefil ki nazaqath ko nazar me rakhte howe !! ghazal se mil ja-o- to nawaz dena !! aur maine kiss manzar ki bath ki hai is ghazal me wo ap samjh jayenge mere ishare se !! aur is ghazal ko mazhabi roop na den to bahetar hoga !!

Dara – dara sa jahan lagta hai !!
Andheri rath aur gharon me dhunwa lagta hai !!
Kal isi gulistan se ruqsath li thi maine !!
Aj lauta hon to qabrastan lagta hai !!

Ye kya manzar hai !! ye kaisi lachari hai !!
Har maqtol ka chahera begunha lagta hai !!

Utha-e-thi talwar jisne dekh ke is manzar ko !!
Daheshat gard ab usse wohi naujawan lagta hai !!

Ye uske zulam ki ibteda hai ya inteha qadeer !!
Jisne khuch kiya hi nahi wo bhi pareshan lagta hai !!

Maqtol ( mara howa ( dead body ) )
Ibteda ,( Begning )
Inteha ( Ending )

Qadeer Toopchi


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khamosh_aawaaz

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Re: ye kaisa manzar hai !!

«Reply #25 on: June 26, 2011, 12:52:35 PM »

Quote from: abdulqadeer on February 04, 2009, 12:13:46 PM

BAHUT KHOOB

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