ye kiss Janib Zamane ne ungli utha-e- hai !!

by abdulqadeer on January 05, 2009, 09:41:49 AM
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Ye Ghazl me bhi maine khuch isharoon me Apne Jazbath aur ahesaas dikhane ki chuti si koshish ki hai !! Agar Ghazal se mil ja-o- to daad ka mahutaj hon !!

Ghazal apke Nazar kar raha hon Tawajo Chahonga !!


Ye kiss janib zamane ne ungli utha-e- hai !!
Ye wo shaqs hai jisne qaribi me baadshahath baati hai !!

Ab uski saqawath ki kya misaal doge !!
Baatke ujale jisne andheroon me zindagi kati hai!!

Kyoon tadpate ho tishnagi se is shaher ko !!
Ye wohi dar jahan se tumne pyaas bhuja-e- hai !!

Mahefiloon ki raunaq tha jo shaqs kabhi!!
aj ussi ke ghar tanha-e- hai !!

kal tak jo mulak hausloon ki misaal tha qadeer !!
aj ussi sarzameen pe bebasi chah-e- hai !!

Qadeer Toopchi

From Dubai But an indian
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«Reply #1 on: January 05, 2009, 10:35:26 AM »
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bahut hi badiya likha hai aapne qadeerji ....

jo kabhi apne sharo se jahan ki pyaas bujata tha,aaj woh khud aaj pyaasa hain,
jo kabhi mahefiloon ki raunaq tha ,aaj khud woh udaas hai,
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«Reply #2 on: January 05, 2009, 10:37:03 AM »
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wah abdul, bahut hi khoob, kuch lines ney toh dil jeet lia hai. wah wah wah


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«Reply #3 on: January 05, 2009, 10:37:48 AM »
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Quote from: cara on January 05, 2009, 10:35:26 AM
bahut hi badiya likha hai aapne qadeerji ....

jo kabhi apne sharo se jahan ki pyaas bujata tha,aaj woh khud aaj pyaasa hain,
jo kabhi mahefiloon ki raunaq tha ,aaj khud woh udaas hai,


wah cara, very nice from you too

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«Reply #4 on: January 05, 2009, 10:43:27 AM »
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Quote from: jasbirsingh on January 05, 2009, 10:37:03 AM
wah abdul, bahut hi khoob, kuch lines ney toh dil jeet lia hai. wah wah wah


Jasbir Singh

Shukriya Bhai Jasbir

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«Reply #5 on: January 05, 2009, 10:44:12 AM »
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Quote from: cara on January 05, 2009, 10:35:26 AM
bahut hi badiya likha hai aapne qadeerji ....

jo kabhi apne sharo se jahan ki pyaas bujata tha,aaj woh khud aaj pyaasa hain,
jo kabhi mahefiloon ki raunaq tha ,aaj khud woh udaas hai,


Thanks A lot Cara aur apne bhi acha likha hai!!

Qadeer Toopchi
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«Reply #6 on: January 05, 2009, 12:36:34 PM »
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Bohat khoob Qadeer  Clapping Smiley waise to Tumhara har kalam dad ke kabil hota hain ha jo mujse miss ho jaye uske liye mafi chahta hu dost.
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«Reply #7 on: January 06, 2009, 03:32:56 AM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on January 05, 2009, 12:36:34 PM
Bohat khoob Qadeer  Clapping Smiley waise to Tumhara har kalam dad ke kabil hota hain ha jo mujse miss ho jaye uske liye mafi chahta hu dost.

Shukriya Sajid Bhai !! Is na chiz ko Ap ne tassali bakhs Comments Diya !!aur Maafi kiss bath ki yaar sajid bhai !!

Zaroori Nahi ke meri har Ghazal Sarahi jaye..

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«Reply #8 on: January 27, 2009, 09:50:49 PM »
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Bhai Is Ghazal Ko Jitna Bhi Pardhoon,.
Dil Hi Nahi Bharta,.
Bohat Achchi Lagti hai Mujhe,.

May Allah Grant U Health And Bless You,.
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«Reply #9 on: January 28, 2009, 03:09:43 AM »
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Quote from: Jaanasheen on January 27, 2009, 09:50:49 PM
Bhai Is Ghazal Ko Jitna Bhi Pardhoon,.
Dil Hi Nahi Bharta,.
Bohat Achchi Lagti hai Mujhe,.

May Allah Grant U Health And Bless You,.

Bahoth bahoth shukriya azeem !!Allah tumhe khush rakhe ameen !!

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