Ye Sikke Nahi Chalne Waale,.

by Jaanasheen on July 19, 2010, 07:44:36 PM
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Hum Hain Taqdeer Zamaane Ki Badalne Waale,.
Tu Karle Sitam Laakh Ke Hum Nahi Dhalne Waale,.

Uthenge Hum To Toofaan Lekar Uthenge,.
Hum Paani Ke Ke Bulbule Banke Nahi Ubalne Waale,.

Chookar Hume Tu Khud Lard-Khadaata Hai,.
Hosh Mein Aaja "Aye Sambhalne Waale,.

Sadiyon Se Bichi Hain Saazishein Hamaare Khilaaf,.
Aur Ye Sikke Nahi Hamaare Bazaar Mein Chalne Waale,.

Hum Hain Taqdeer Zamaane Ki Badalne Waale,.
TuKarle Sitam Laakh ke Hum Nahi Dhalne Waale,.

-Azeem-
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«Reply #1 on: July 19, 2010, 08:27:57 PM »
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Very encouraging azeem ji... Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: July 19, 2010, 10:08:36 PM »
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Wow wow masha allah

jaan? Aage se meri himmat afzai b ap hee ne karni hai, mere aage b yunhi rehna.

May allah help us become one forever more, ameen summa ameen.
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«Reply #3 on: July 20, 2010, 02:32:03 AM »
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bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Azeem ji... bahut hi khoobsurat peshkash hai ye aapki...!!!
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«Reply #4 on: July 20, 2010, 05:53:34 AM »
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Quote from: Azeem on July 19, 2010, 07:44:36 PM

Hum Hain Taqdeer Zamaane Ki Badalne Waale,.
Tu Karle Sitam Laakh Ke Hum Nahi Dhalne Waale,.

Uthenge Hum To Toofaan Lekar Uthenge,.
Hum Paani Ke Ke Bulbule Banke Nahi Ubalne Waale,.

Chookar Hume Tu Khud Lard-Khadaata Hai,.
Hosh Mein Aaja "Aye Sambhalne Waale,.

Sadiyon Se Bichi Hain Saazishein Hamaare Khilaaf,.
Aur Ye Sikke Nahi Hamaare Bazaar Mein Chalne Waale,.

Hum Hain Taqdeer Zamaane Ki Badalne Waale,.
TuKarle Sitam Laakh ke Hum Nahi Dhalne Waale,.

-Azeem-


Good one.....Azeem Ji......nice creation.....dil se daad !
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«Reply #5 on: July 20, 2010, 09:27:14 AM »
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Bahut bahut Khoob Azeem Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #6 on: August 24, 2010, 01:23:16 AM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on July 19, 2010, 08:27:57 PM
Very encouraging azeem ji... Applause Applause

Shukriya Geet Ji

Quote from: Shihab on July 19, 2010, 09:15:58 PM
Wah Wah Mere Bhai Kya Hi Khub Farmaaya Hai Aapne
Aapki Is Tahreer Ko Parhke Dil Baagh Baagh Ho Gaya
Hauslon Se Bhari Aur Aagh Karne Wali Yeh Peshkash
Bahut Bahut Aur Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Hai...

Yun Hi Likhte Raho, Bahut Sikhne Ko Milta Hai

ALLAH Pak Aapko Humesha Khush Rakhe Aamee...

~Shihab~


Shukriya mere bhai hamesha se hi tumhaare daad meri huasla afzaai karte aaye hain,.

yunhi saath dete rehna

Shukriya
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«Reply #7 on: August 24, 2010, 07:13:17 PM »
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Azeem Sahab Aadaab O Salaam....

SocheN aaj kuch tanziyaa padheN ... aapki hi tehreer uper mili ..... kafi achchi lagi....
Sabhi ashaar behad umdaa rahe.... dil se daad janab..

Likhate rahiye...
Khush rahiye... Usual Smile         


Quote from: Azeem on July 19, 2010, 07:44:36 PM

Hum Hain Taqdeer Zamaane Ki Badalne Waale,.
Tu Karle Sitam Laakh Ke Hum Nahi Dhalne Waale,.

Matla achcha hai...         


Uthenge Hum To Toofaan Lekar Uthenge,.
Hum Paani Ke Ke Bulbule Banke Nahi Ubalne Waale,.

Is sher khususi daad janab.. bahut achcha raha yeh sher... 


Chookar Hume Tu Khud Lard-Khadaata Hai,.
Hosh Mein Aaja "Aye Sambhalne Waale,.

Tanz bahut solid raha..... Daad Janab         


Sadiyon Se Bichi Hain Saazishein Hamaare Khilaaf,.
Aur Ye Sikke Nahi Hamaare Bazaar Mein Chalne Waale,.


Sher achcha hai per khul nahi paya...
Kuch kami si rahi hai.. bayani meiN         

Hum Hain Taqdeer Zamaane Ki Badalne Waale,.
TuKarle Sitam Laakh ke Hum Nahi Dhalne Waale,.



-Azeem-


Ek achchi tanziyaa kalaam per dil se daad janab....

Likhate rahiye
khush rahiye...
Khuda Hafez...         
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«Reply #8 on: August 25, 2010, 04:50:17 PM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on August 24, 2010, 07:13:17 PM
Azeem Sahab Aadaab O Salaam....

SocheN aaj kuch tanziyaa padheN ... aapki hi tehreer uper mili ..... kafi achchi lagi....
Sabhi ashaar behad umdaa rahe.... dil se daad janab..

Likhate rahiye...
Khush rahiye... Usual Smile         


Ek achchi tanziyaa kalaam per dil se daad janab....

Likhate rahiye
khush rahiye...
Khuda Hafez...         


Shukriya Parwaaz Ji, waise Maine Koshish ki har ashaar ko khulke rakhne ki, i tried my best

and thanx  for your comments brother
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«Reply #9 on: August 31, 2010, 10:46:09 PM »
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Quote from: Azeem on July 19, 2010, 07:44:36 PM

Hum Hain Taqdeer Zamaane Ki Badalne Waale,.
Tu Karle Sitam Laakh Ke Hum Nahi Dhalne Waale,.

Uthenge Hum To Toofaan Lekar Uthenge,.
Hum Paani Ke Ke Bulbule Banke Nahi Ubalne Waale,.

Chookar Hume Tu Khud Lard-Khadaata Hai,.
Hosh Mein Aaja "Aye Sambhalne Waale,.

Sadiyon Se Bichi Hain Saazishein Hamaare Khilaaf,.
Aur Ye Sikke Nahi Hamaare Bazaar Mein Chalne Waale,.

Hum Hain Taqdeer Zamaane Ki Badalne Waale,.
TuKarle Sitam Laakh ke Hum Nahi Dhalne Waale,.

-Azeem-


Good one Chote
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«Reply #10 on: September 25, 2010, 03:21:55 AM »
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Behad Hi Umda Kya Khoob Tanz Diya Hai

Dad Hi Dan Janaab...
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«Reply #11 on: September 25, 2010, 05:39:15 AM »
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Azeem bhai bahut gherai aur khoobsurti se likha aapne.bahut pasand aayi.great work.excellent,hats off icon_salut icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #12 on: September 27, 2010, 11:32:36 AM »
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azeem bhai hazaron daad.....bahut bahut khoob..

kuchh yun kaha baharon ne mujhse samet lo hame apni bahon me,
mene kaha he ye majboori meri ki bahon me sametne ko "Abhi" manzilen bahut he rahon me~
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«Reply #13 on: January 29, 2011, 12:14:59 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause
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