**Yeh duniya aaj woh nahin jo kal hua karti thi**

by dead heart on April 04, 2009, 06:54:17 PM
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kabhi yahan phool bhi pyaar se khila karte the,
kabhi yahan ashiq bhi sache hua karte the,
kabhi yahan dost zakhmon ko siya karte the,
Yeh duniya aaj woh nahin jo kal hua karti thi...

kabhi log Gandhi hua karte the,
aaj toh bas Osama banke phir rahe hai,
kabhi yahan Laila Majnu hua karte the,
aaj toh bewaffaein baki rehgayi hai,
Yeh duniya aaj woh nahin jo kal hua karti thi...

bhai bhai ko mar raha hai chand paison ke liye,
dusron ke jism ka faeda uthaya ja raha hai apni hawas ke liye,
jisne dekhi duniya pehle se woh samajaega Rahim ka kehna,
ke sach main doston yeh duniya aaj woh nahin jo kal hua karti thi...
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«Reply #1 on: April 04, 2009, 07:06:58 PM »
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nice one
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«Reply #2 on: April 04, 2009, 07:09:50 PM »
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Shukriya
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«Reply #3 on: April 05, 2009, 04:31:36 AM »
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Nice...
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«Reply #4 on: April 05, 2009, 04:58:46 AM »
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 Applause Applause

Bohat achche DH nice lines...
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«Reply #5 on: April 05, 2009, 05:05:09 AM »
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Too good DH.

Kuch koshish meri tararf se bhi

badal gaye hai log yahan
badal gaya hai mere sapno ka jahan

lad rahe hai log har choti baat pe
dost dost na reha gaya hai yahan

jo kabhi saath chalte the har gum mea
bana diya unhone hi isse kanto bara jahan

jo jalate the ak duje ke ghar ka diya
aaj unlogo ne hi barsa diya angara yahan.
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«Reply #6 on: April 05, 2009, 08:38:50 AM »
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Bahaut bahaut shukriya Sajid saheb, Jaya jee aur Sophi jee...

Sophi jee apne bhi bahaut acha likha hai...
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«Reply #7 on: April 06, 2009, 04:27:22 PM »
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Kya Khoob Duniya Ki Haalat Bayaan Ki Hai Aapne, Rahim Bhai Apne Andaaz Mein,.

Bohat Hi KHoob Nice One,.
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«Reply #8 on: April 06, 2009, 09:17:26 PM »
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Shukriya Azeem bhaijan...
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«Reply #9 on: April 07, 2009, 11:34:39 AM »
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Quote from: dead heart on April 06, 2009, 09:17:26 PM
Shukriya Azeem bhaijan...

Welcome Ji,.
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«Reply #10 on: April 07, 2009, 12:13:00 PM »
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DH bahut sahi baat kahi hai aap ney ....



DEKHNEY DEKHNEY KA ANDAAZ HAI MERE DOST
KISI KOH MEETHEY KA, KISI KOH KHATEY KA SWAAD HAI

GANDHI KEY WAQT BHI OSAMA HUYA KARTEY THEY
KAMJOR KOH MAAR KAR, TAKHT LUTA KARTEY THEY

PHOOLOH MEH KAATEY TAB BHI HUYA KARTEY THEY
RAM, KISHAN KEY YUG MEH BHI YUDD HUYA KARTEY THEY

LAILA MAJNU TOH AAJ BHI KAHI NAZAR AA JAYENGEY
SACHEY PYAR PEH LOG AAJ BHI BAHUT MARR JAYENGEY

MARNEY MAARNEY KI PRATHA TOH SADIYOH SEY CHALTI AA RAHI HAI
PREHLAD, KISHAN, AUR BAHUTOH KI KAHANI YAAD AA RAHI HAI

MANA KI DUNIYA TEJI SEY BADD RAHI HAI
PAR WOHI KAHANI NAYE BHESS MEH AAGEY BADD RAHI HAI

KAL KA JAMANA AAJ BHI WOHI NAZAR AAYEGA
RABB KEY DWAAR PEH JAB DIL SEY MILNEY JAYEGA

ACCHI LAGNEY LAGI KI DUNIYAA AAJ BHI TUZKOH "JASBIR"
HAR INSAAN MEH JAB TU APNEY RABB KOH PAYEGA
HAR INSAAN MEH JAB TU APNEY RABB KOH PAYEGA


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«Reply #11 on: April 07, 2009, 12:21:28 PM »
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Quote from: Sophi on April 05, 2009, 05:05:09 AM
Too good DH.

Kuch koshish meri tararf se bhi

badal gaye hai log yahan
badal gaya hai mere sapno ka jahan

lad rahe hai log har choti baat pe
dost dost na reha gaya hai yahan

jo kabhi saath chalte the har gum mea
bana diya unhone hi isse kanto bara jahan

jo jalate the ak duje ke ghar ka diya
aaj unlogo ne hi barsa diya angara yahan.

wah sophi .. very nice ..



DOST DUSHMAN HAR MOAD PEH MIL JATEY HAI
SAAF DIL PEH YEH APNEY NISHAN CHODD JATEY HAI

WAQT KEY SAATH YEH BHI BADAL JATEY HAI
SACH KEY SAAMNEY EK DIN SAB KEY SIRR JHUKK JATEY HAI

AAJ UNKA HAI TOH KAL HAMARA HOGA
KIA HAI BHALA SAB KA, TOH RABB BHI HAMARA HOGA

ANDHEREY MEH DEEPAK JALATEY JAYENGEY
EK DIN AAP KEY BHI DIL MEH HUM ROSHNI KAR JAYENGEY

HAMARI MANZIL SEY HUM NAHI GHABRAYENGEY
THOKROH SEY BHI LADD KAR HUM CHIRAAG JALAYENGEY



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«Reply #12 on: April 07, 2009, 08:19:20 PM »
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Shukriya Jasbir jee...Yaar apne toh dil choo lia...kamal ka likha hai apne... Applause Applause

Mana Gandhi ke zamane main Osama hua karte the,
Magar yun apne aap ko uda lia nahin lia karte the,
Majnu toh bahaut hai par sachi laila kahan Rahim,
Bas yehi keh sakta hoon main duniya walon se,
Yeh duniya aaj woh nahin jo kal hua karti thi...
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«Reply #13 on: April 13, 2009, 03:45:30 PM »
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Quote from: dead heart on April 07, 2009, 08:19:20 PM
Shukriya Jasbir jee...Yaar apne toh dil choo lia...kamal ka likha hai apne... Applause Applause

Mana Gandhi ke zamane main Osama hua karte the,
Magar yun apne aap ko uda lia nahin lia karte the,
Majnu toh bahaut hai par sachi laila kahan Rahim,
Bas yehi keh sakta hoon main duniya walon se,
Yeh duniya aaj woh nahin jo kal hua karti thi...

Thanks DH for your appreciation

AAJ KEY DAUR MEH SAB KUCH BIK JATA HAI
LAILA KA AAJ AUR KAL KISI AUR KA MAJNU HO JATA HAI

OSAMA GALI GALI MEH NAZAR AA JATA HAI
SHAN BHAR MEH SAB KOH KRODH CHADD JATA HAI

DESH KOH LOOTNEY AAJ BHEED LAG RAHI HAI
JISEY BACHANEY MEH SADIYA LAG GAYI HAI

YEH DUNIYA AAJ WOH NAHI JOH KAL HUYA KARTI THI
DESH KEY LIYE JAB ANG ANG SEY DUA NIKLA KARTI THI




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«Reply #14 on: April 16, 2009, 08:18:26 PM »
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|Bahaut khoob Jasbir jee...Sorry for the late reply..
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