~*~ Yeh kya likh gaya ~*~ by Rahim:Tanziya aur Tehreekbaksh Shayariyan

dead heart

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Hairan hoon, paise ne insaan ko iss kadar kaise badal diya,
Insaan chand paison kay liye, kaudi kay bhau bik gaya..

Aye the toh maa ne sikhaya tha ‘beta sabse uper ek Khuda hai,’
Zalim iss dunia main insaan paise ko Khuda kehna seekh gaya..

Log kehte the woh bane the shabnam jitni pak mitti se,
Muflisi kay sabab yahan, nek woh insaan bhi bik gaya..

Jisne bhigo diya apni rooh ko siyasat kay kichad main,
Bas ek wohi shaks system main, sukun o aram se tik gaya..

Aj bhi mazbut aur nek ehsaason par zinda hai ‘Khamosh’,
Main unn main nahin jo nekiyon kay badle, gunahon kay liye bik gaya..

Nanhe lachar kadmon se zindagi ki shuruwat hui thi,
Baap se darr lagta tha, maa kay anchal main chupa karte the,
Woh dinn the jab maa kay bina jeena bhi kya jeena tha,
Mager aj..wah re Khudai kay insaan akele jeena seekh gaya..

Wakei kuch galat mager mazbut gunaahon se bhari hai dunia,
Isse darshate , najane ‘Khamosh’ yeh kaisa kalam likh gaya..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~


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ParwaaZ

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Re: ~*~ Yeh kya likh gaya ~*~ by Rahim

«Reply #1 on: September 13, 2011, 03:53:36 PM »

Rahim Sahaab Aadaab!

Behad khoob aur umdaa kalaam likh diyaa aapne..
Just mindblowing... Janab...

Aur bhi khayaal add karte to mazaa aa jata...
Humari dili daad O mubarakbad kabul kijiye..

Aaj aise hi khayaal meiN the keY yaar yeH paisa banaaya
kisne hoNga...
Zarur woH aisa shateer hoNga ke insaaN ko gulaam banaane
ka tareeka usne socha hoNga.... In hi khayaaloN meiN
Kuch ashaar humare bhi zaheN meiN bante chale gaye..
So sab se pahele aapki hi nazar kar dete hai..

WoH aise ban gaya hai jaise koyiN bhagwaan hai
Is jahaaN meiN paise ke piche har insaan hai

ChutkiyoN meiN hal ho jaati hai unki masaaileN
Bus paisa dikhaao unko jo bhi pareshaan hai

Budhe bachche nou jawaan mard ho yaa aurat hoN
Duniyaa meiN kouN baato paise se anjaan hai

Likhate rahiye... Aate rahiye..
Khuda Hafez...


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sarfira

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Re: ~*~ Yeh kya likh gaya ~*~ by Rahim

«Reply #2 on: September 13, 2011, 04:33:18 PM »

wah Rahim sahab waah--

aapki ye baat anokhi hai ki aap !khamosh! rah kar baht kuch kah jate hain

aur janaab kya khoob kahte hain wah wah--

apni kalaamo me aap kuch english words put karte hain jo bht khub hota hai.

daad kubul karen Sahab
dil se daad


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dead heart

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Re: ~*~ Yeh kya likh gaya ~*~ by Rahim

«Reply #3 on: September 13, 2011, 06:53:07 PM »

Quote from: ParwaaZ on September 13, 2011, 03:53:36 PM

Janab Parwaaz sahab,
Teh teh dil se shukriya..
Aur bhi khayal..umm bas itna hi likh saka..
Apne saath diya, bahaut mayne rakhta hai..

Apki lines, parr kar dil khush hogaya..
Bahaut khubsoorat aur sach likha hai..
Applause

Khush rahiye..!


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dead heart

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Re: ~*~ Yeh kya likh gaya ~*~ by Rahim

«Reply #4 on: September 13, 2011, 07:57:13 PM »

Quote from: sarfira on September 13, 2011, 04:33:18 PM

Janab,
Apka teh teh dil se shukriya..
Yeh toh dekhne wale ki nazar hai jo kisi
ko acha toh kisi ko bura banati hai..
Ap itna pasand karte ho humari kalamon ko,
main iss baat ka apse shukriya karta hoon..
Bas yunhi saath dete rahiyega..
Aur english words ki baat rahi, toh haan kabhi
kabhi use kar leta hoon..
Khush rahiye..!