Zaher Pina Hoga !!

by abdulqadeer on February 08, 2009, 06:58:40 AM
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«Reply #15 on: February 09, 2009, 10:24:51 AM »
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Quote from: rawattanha on February 09, 2009, 09:56:13 AM
bahut hi umda likha hai qqdeer ji sach bahut hi achha...

Shukriya rawath ke tumne meri ghazal ko waqath diya !!

Qadeer Toopchi
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«Reply #16 on: February 09, 2009, 11:40:30 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on February 08, 2009, 02:17:59 PM
Kalam aapka amrit sa laga..
Yeh Zaher amrit se kam nahi laga...

bahut khoob Qadeer bhaiya  Applause

Shukriya roja bahen !! apne is nacheez ko izzath bakshi !!

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«Reply #17 on: February 09, 2009, 11:47:37 AM »
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Quote from: Shihab on February 09, 2009, 09:09:43 AM
Bhai Aapke Saamne Hum Kuch Nahi Hai
Phir Bhi Ek Chhoti Si Koshis Karta Hoon
Galti Ho To Maaf Kijiyega...


Kisi Ki Yaad Mein Do Pal Mujhe Machalne Do
Bohat Ghuatn Hai Dil Ko Thoda Aur Jhalne Do.

Kaash Ki Mil Jaayegi Mujhe Thodi Si Raahat
Dard.o.Ghum Ko Meri Rag Rag Mein Ghul Ne Do.

Dum Hi Na Tod De Kahin Tamannae.n Is Bheed Mein
Is Shaam.e.Furqat Ko Tanhaai Mein Hi Dhalne Do

Dekhlu Mein Kab Tak Aazmati Hai Mohabbat Mujhe
Zara Si Aur Der Aazmaish.e.Talwaar Ko Chalne Do

Waah Mere Bhai, Kya Khoob Likha Hai,.
yunhi Likhte Raho.

May Allah Bless you,.
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«Reply #18 on: February 10, 2009, 03:20:27 AM »
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Shihab aap ne bohot achha likha, matla ke dusre mirse mien to jitni gehrai se sochen doobte hi jaate hain, bohot khoob...
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«Reply #19 on: February 10, 2009, 06:41:06 AM »
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Quote from: fairy2633 on February 08, 2009, 07:04:09 AM
waah qadeer ji...itna dard...bahut khoob... Applause  Applause allah aapko saare ghamo se dur rakhe...khush rahiye... Usual Smile

Bahoth bahoth shukriya fairy !! Allah tumhe khush rakhe !!

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«Reply #20 on: February 10, 2009, 01:00:10 PM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on February 08, 2009, 01:44:03 PM
Marhaba Qadeer... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Khauf_zada hone lagi maut zindagi se
Kitna mushkil GHAYEL ka jeena hoga

                           -SG-

Bahoth bahoth subhan allah sajid sahab kaise nazar se chuk gaya ye nayab ashar wah wah bhai wah sajid !! kyakahene yaar is sher ke is thread ko nayab bana diya tumne !! allah tumhe khush rakhe !!

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«Reply #21 on: February 11, 2009, 06:53:16 AM »
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Bahut Khoob Likha hai Qadeer Ji,

Tu tha saath to honth hasne pe majboor the,
aab tu jo nahi hai to hame khul ke rona hoga,

Tere hone se thi saari doulat iss duniya ki mere pass,
Aab tu jo jaa raha hai to har daulat ko khona hoga...

Tere pass hone par neend kabhi na aayi inn aankhon me,
Aab jo tu zindagi liye jaa raha hai to mujhe mout aagosh me sona hoga...

Shally.
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«Reply #22 on: February 11, 2009, 07:05:05 AM »
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Quote from: k.shael on February 11, 2009, 06:53:16 AM
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Bahut Khoob Likha hai Qadeer Ji,

Tu tha saath to honth hasne pe majboor the,
aab tu jo nahi hai to hame khul ke rona hoga,

Tere hone se thi saari doulat iss duniya ki mere pass,
Aab tu jo jaa raha hai to har daulat ko khona hoga...

Tere pass hone par neend kabhi na aayi inn aankhon me,
Aab jo tu zindagi liye jaa raha hai to mujhe mout aagosh me sona hoga...

Shally.


Kya baat hain wah wah jeeyo Shally very good.... Applause

Teri bato se asardar tere sher hain zalim
Jo bevafa hoga padhkar inhe sharminda hoga

                          -Sajid Ghayel-
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«Reply #23 on: February 11, 2009, 07:10:16 AM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on February 11, 2009, 07:05:05 AM
Kya baat hain wah wah jeeyo Shally very good.... Applause

Teri bato se asardar tere sher hain zalim
Jo bevafa hoga padhkar inhe sharminda hoga

                          -Sajid Ghayel-



Shukriya Sajid Ji,

Use Sharminda karke kya le paaunghi mein,
Hogi taqleef agar use to mohabbat meri mujhe galli degi

Shally.
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«Reply #24 on: February 11, 2009, 07:14:13 AM »
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Quote from: k.shael on February 11, 2009, 06:53:16 AM
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Bahut Khoob Likha hai Qadeer Ji,

Tu tha saath to honth hasne pe majboor the,
aab tu jo nahi hai to hame khul ke rona hoga,

Tere hone se thi saari doulat iss duniya ki mere pass,
Aab tu jo jaa raha hai to har daulat ko khona hoga...

Tere pass hone par neend kabhi na aayi inn aankhon me,
Aab jo tu zindagi liye jaa raha hai to mujhe mout aagosh me sona hoga...

Shally.


Bahoth umda shally i like ur improvement buddy !! really good work keep going !!

Qadeer Toopchi
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«Reply #25 on: February 11, 2009, 07:15:34 AM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on February 11, 2009, 07:05:05 AM
Kya baat hain wah wah jeeyo Shally very good.... Applause

Teri bato se asardar tere sher hain zalim
Jo bevafa hoga padhkar inhe sharminda hoga

                          -Sajid Ghayel-


Wah Wah bhi sajid sahab !! badshah hu tom do lines me shayari ke agaz aur anjaam karne me !!

Qadeer Toopchi
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«Reply #26 on: February 11, 2009, 07:23:14 AM »
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Quote from: abdulqadeer on February 11, 2009, 07:14:13 AM
Bahoth umda shally i like ur improvement buddy !! really good work keep going !!

Qadeer Toopchi

Shukriya Qadeer Shahib,

Ye to aapki zahenawazi hai jo iss nacheez ke likhe ko pasand kiya,

Shally.
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«Reply #27 on: February 11, 2009, 08:02:06 AM »
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Quote from: k.shael on February 11, 2009, 07:23:14 AM
Shukriya Qadeer Shahib,

Ye to aapki zahenawazi hai jo iss nacheez ke likhe ko pasand kiya,

Shally.

Ur welcome Shally !!

Qadeer Toopchi
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«Reply #28 on: February 11, 2009, 10:38:18 AM »
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Quote from: k.shael on February 11, 2009, 06:53:16 AM
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Bahut Khoob Likha hai Qadeer Ji,

Tu tha saath to honth hasne pe majboor the,
aab tu jo nahi hai to hame khul ke rona hoga,

Tere hone se thi saari doulat iss duniya ki mere pass,
Aab tu jo jaa raha hai to har daulat ko khona hoga...

Tere pass hone par neend kabhi na aayi inn aankhon me,
Aab jo tu zindagi liye jaa raha hai to mujhe mout aagosh me sona hoga...

Shally.

nice one shally i wish koi aisa mere liye bhi likhta

jo main nahin toh khud mein dhoondna mujhko
teri dhadkan k aas paas rehta hoon
main kuch kehta nahin toh kya hua
tere gham mein Zaar-Zaar rota hoon
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«Reply #29 on: February 11, 2009, 12:32:59 PM »
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Quote from: abdulqadeer on February 08, 2009, 06:58:40 AM
Ghazal se mil jao to nawaz dena !!ye ghazal maine bahoth pahele likhi thi aj post karne ka mann kiya yoindia per!!

Gham beshumar hain magar jina hoga !!
Zaher ko bhi amrit samjh kar pina hoga !!
Zakham kha-a- hain maine beshumar pit per !!
Apki baar teri talwar aur mera sina hoga !!

Na nikle gi mere jism se ruh kabhi !!
Iske liye tujhe eak baar mujh se milna hoga !!

Haram ki daulath aur shahurath ho tumhe mubarak!!
Ab meri har roti pe mera pasina hoga !!

Tapti ret me binch boke kahete ho “Qadeer”
Ke pholon ko issi jaga khilne hoga !!

Qadeer Toopchi




Bohot Khoob...Bohot achcha likha hai aapne Qadeer Bhai

Khaas kar highlighted asa'ar bohot hi achche lage..!!
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