Zara Socho

by Safi Yani on May 21, 2009, 06:07:14 PM

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Safi Yani

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Diya ilzaam jin teghon ko tumne qatlo ghaarat ka
The unke saaye mein mehfooz kitne sar zara socho

Banaaya pattharon ko apne haathon se khuda jisne
Parastaaron mein kyoonkar hai wohi aazar zara socho

Dikhaawa yeh mohabbat ke alambardaar bante ho
Jalaaye hain fasaadi ban ke kitne ghar zara socho

Fanaa hote hain jab bhi kaarwan apne to akhir kyoon
Nishane par kabhi aate nahi rahbar zara socho

Safi Yani


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sapana

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Re: Zara Socho

«Reply #1 on: May 21, 2009, 06:31:59 PM »

nice lines.


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angel4u

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Re: Zara Socho

«Reply #2 on: May 21, 2009, 06:35:42 PM »

Nice one Safi Ji...


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dead heart

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Re: Zara Socho

«Reply #3 on: May 21, 2009, 08:38:36 PM »

Nice one dear...


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vitasta

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Re: Zara Socho

«Reply #4 on: May 21, 2009, 09:59:56 PM »

good work!


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Sager4u

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Re: Zara Socho

«Reply #5 on: May 21, 2009, 11:17:44 PM »

Very good safiji!!


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Safi Yani

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Re: Zara Socho

«Reply #6 on: May 22, 2009, 06:33:56 PM »

Quote from: {Angel} on May 21, 2009, 06:35:42 PM

Nice one Safi Ji...

Thanks a lot angel


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jasbirsingh

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Re: Zara Socho

«Reply #7 on: May 22, 2009, 06:59:02 PM »

Safi Ji koshish toh bahut ki humney har alfaaz samajney ki
par uppar uppar sey bahut kuch chala gaya
lekin jitna samaj aaya hamey, yeh mehsoos huya ki bahut hi
accha likha hai aap ney

(such strong urdu words are not my cup of tea... sorry for saying this)

jasbir singh


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Sager4u

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Re: Zara Socho

«Reply #8 on: May 22, 2009, 11:14:08 PM »

Safi ji! This is jeetu. Main ye nahin kahta ki aap urdu na Likhe lekin ager hindi likhenge to jyada log padenge or aapke huner ko tarashege. I hope k aap mujhe samjhege. Or plz never mind.


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madhuwesh

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Re: Zara Socho

«Reply #9 on: May 24, 2009, 05:36:02 AM »

BAHUT BAHUT KHOOB SAFI YANI JI.


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Rajesh Harish

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Re: Zara Socho

«Reply #10 on: July 04, 2009, 06:51:01 AM »

Bahut Khoob Safi Ji


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Re: Zara Socho

«Reply #11 on: July 04, 2009, 08:26:10 AM »

Subhan allah sufi sahab .. kya qoob kalam nazar kiya hai apne "matle me apne kitni baadi kahe di wah bhai kya hi aqlaqi tanz kiya hai apne .. ashar ko maine wahin se pakda jahan se apne kaha hai sufi sahab .. pahela ashar pori kalaam ka nagina hai sahab .. allah apke kalamo ko miyari izzath de !! Ameen !!

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Re: Zara Socho

«Reply #12 on: July 12, 2009, 06:05:37 AM »

Mashallah, Tareef Jitni Bhi Karein Kam Hai Is Kalaam Pe, Behtareen Kalaa Likha Hai Aapne Sufi JI,.

Aage Bhi Aapke Kalaamon Ko Pardhne Ka Intezaar Rahega,.