about myself...

Hello.....all the POETS of Yoindia....

I am Pallavi. I am not a poet but just write what comes in my mind at my workplace or wen i sit lonely.

Its first time when i share my poems with all.So, if u all think that i need improvement than suggest me. Its not my profession, i am just writing coz i think its a good way to refresh our mind.

Whenever i start writing, i forget the world,i forget what happened around me.....i write by my heart....& i think that a good poet can't write good poem if he/she think by using brain.....poem is the feeling which comes from heart.....

Welcome to Yoindia Pallavi Ji

Aap ki peshkash bahut achchhi hain
Bas yun hi likhte rahiye

Shayeri ke baare meN mera apna nazariya hai. Ho sakta hai kuchh logoN se alag bhi ho.
MaiN samajhta hoN ke kisi na kisi cheez se mutassir ho kar bhaavnaayeN, feelings,aur jazbaat har insaan ke dil meN paida hote haiN, lekin in jazbaat aur feelings ke dil meN paida hone par har insaan ko shaayer ya poet nahiN keh sakte.
Poet usko kehte haiN jo apni bhaavnaaoN/feelings ko(aik khaas andaaz meN)doosroN ko samjhaane ka hunar rakhta ho, jis ke liye use shabdoN (words) ki zuroorat hoti hai. Words insaan ki zubaan(language)par depend hote haiN. Aur zubaan ko adabiyyat aur qavaaid ke saath (with rules & Regulations)use karne ke liye dil ki nahiN dimaagh ki zuroorat hoti hai.
 To poetry sirf bhaavnaaoN ya feelings ko nahiN keh sakte. balke poetry bhaavnaoN aur-un bhaavnaaoN ko doosroN tak pahuNchaane waale-shabdoN se milkar banti hai. is liye ye kaha jaa sakta hai ke poetry meN dil aur dimaagh donoN ka apna apna kaam hai. Agar achchhi bhaavnaayeN haiN aur achchhe shabd nahiN haiN to baat(shayery) asar(hit) nahiN karti. Isi tarah agar achchhe shabd haiN lekin achchhi feelings nahiN haiN tab bhi baat(poetry)samajh meiN nahiN aati.
Feelings aur words donoN se milkar shayeri banti hai aur is ke liye kisi aik se kaam nahiN chal sakta dil aur dimaagh donoN ki zuroorat hai.
Ye kaha jaa sakta hai ke poetry ke liye pehle feelings, phir words. Lekin donoN aik doosre ke liye zuroori haiN.
Agar zara aur jur at(himmat) karke kahoN to ghalat na hoga ke "poetry kabhi 2 feelings(dil) par depend na hokar tasavvur/imagination(dimaagh par depend hoti hai, jis ka dil se koi link nahiN hai...........................................
................................................. .......mere nazariye ke baare meN aap ka jo bhi khayaal ho zuroor likhiyega. Aap ke comments mere liye bohot laabh daayak aur mufeed ho sakte haiN.
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Javed Arshad saahib Aadaab !
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